Ⅴ. 书面表达。
假如上周六你们班组织了一次郊游,你将在英语课上与大家分享这次旅行经历。请根据以下导图提示,以“Our Class Trip”为题,写一篇英语短文。

要求:(1)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(2)词数80左右。
Our Class Trip
假如上周六你们班组织了一次郊游,你将在英语课上与大家分享这次旅行经历。请根据以下导图提示,以“Our Class Trip”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:(1)短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
(2)词数80左右。
Our Class Trip
答案
One possible version:
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside. All of us met at the school gate at 7 a. m. and went to the farm by bus. After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm, and we learned a lot about farming. We also fed chickens and sheep. Some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. All in all, it was a great trip.
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside. All of us met at the school gate at 7 a. m. and went to the farm by bus. After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm, and we learned a lot about farming. We also fed chickens and sheep. Some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. All in all, it was a great trip.
解析
【分析】解题时需先明确导图给出的六个核心要素:Who(我们班同学)、When(上周六)、Where(郊游地点)、How was the weather(天气状况)、What did you do(活动内容)、How did you feel(感受),结合题目要求(无真实人名地名、80词左右、使用一般过去时),将这些要素串联成逻辑通顺的短文,确保覆盖所有提示点即可。
【解析】1. 开头点明郊游的时间与主题:We went on a class trip last Saturday.;2. 说明天气:It was sunny and warm.;3. 交代地点与出行方式:We visited a farm in the countryside, meeting at the school gate at 7 a.m. and going there by bus;4. 描述活动:The farmer showed us around, we fed chickens and sheep, played games and took photos;5. 结尾表达感受:It was a great trip. 全程用一般过去时,避免真实信息,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside. All of us met at the school gate at 7 a. m. and went to the farm by bus. After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm, and we learned a lot about farming. We also fed chickens and sheep. Some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. All in all, it was a great trip.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时
【点评】本文完整覆盖导图所有提示要素,时态运用准确,语句通顺连贯,符合题目对内容、词数的要求,是符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开头点明郊游的时间与主题:We went on a class trip last Saturday.;2. 说明天气:It was sunny and warm.;3. 交代地点与出行方式:We visited a farm in the countryside, meeting at the school gate at 7 a.m. and going there by bus;4. 描述活动:The farmer showed us around, we fed chickens and sheep, played games and took photos;5. 结尾表达感受:It was a great trip. 全程用一般过去时,避免真实信息,控制词数符合要求。
【答案】One possible version:
Our Class Trip
We went on a class trip last Saturday. It was sunny and warm. We visited a farm in the countryside. All of us met at the school gate at 7 a. m. and went to the farm by bus. After we arrived at the farm, the farmer showed us around the farm, and we learned a lot about farming. We also fed chickens and sheep. Some of my classmates played games happily in the sunshine. We also took quite a lot of photos. All in all, it was a great trip.
【知识点】英语书面表达、一般过去时
【点评】本文完整覆盖导图所有提示要素,时态运用准确,语句通顺连贯,符合题目对内容、词数的要求,是符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.5
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