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学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示，以“Getting Along Well With Others”为题，写一篇参赛短文。
mermaid
graph TD
A[Getting along well with others] --＞ B[Friends]
A --＞ C[Neighbours]
A --＞ D[Parents]
A --＞ E[...]
B --＞ F[share joy and sadness;...]
C --＞ G[do volunteer work;...]
D --＞ H[communicate more with;...]
E --＞ I[...]
注意：1. 80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Getting Along Well with Others
No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others.
学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示，以“Getting Along Well With Others”为题，写一篇参赛短文。
mermaid
graph TD
A[Getting along well with others] --＞ B[Friends]
A --＞ C[Neighbours]
A --＞ D[Parents]
A --＞ E[...]
B --＞ F[share joy and sadness;...]
C --＞ G[do volunteer work;...]
D --＞ H[communicate more with;...]
E --＞ I[...]
注意：1. 80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Getting Along Well with Others
No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others.
We should be kind and friendly enough to others, so we can make more friends.We can share joy and sadness with our friends. If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours. At home, we should communicate more with our parents. They are our closest people in the world. At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends. Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything.
答案
Getting Along Well with Others
No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others. We should be kind and friendly enough to others, so we can make more friends.We can share joy and sadness with our friends. If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours. At home, we should communicate more with our parents. They are our closest people in the world. At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends. Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything.
No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others. We should be kind and friendly enough to others, so we can make more friends.We can share joy and sadness with our friends. If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours. At home, we should communicate more with our parents. They are our closest people in the world. At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends. Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题写作，题目为“Getting Along Well With Others”，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，点明与他人相处的重要性；2. 结合思维导图提示，分别阐述与朋友（分享喜怒哀乐）、邻居（做志愿）、父母（多沟通）的相处方式；3. 补充其他相处对象（如老师）丰富内容；4. 结尾总结呼应主题，确保涵盖所有要点、语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 沿用已给开头，无需修改；
2. 围绕不同相处对象展开：① 与朋友：We can share joy and sadness with our friends；② 与邻居：If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours；③ 与父母：At home, we should communicate more with our parents；
3. 补充其他对象：At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends；
4. 结尾总结：Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything；
5. 检查要点完整性、词数及信息要求，确保符合规范。
【答案】
Getting Along Well with Others
No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others. We should be kind and friendly enough to others, so we can make more friends.We can share joy and sadness with our friends. If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours. At home, we should communicate more with our parents. They are our closest people in the world. At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends. Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、人际关系表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语话题写作，题目为“Getting Along Well With Others”，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 承接开头，点明与他人相处的重要性；2. 结合思维导图提示，分别阐述与朋友（分享喜怒哀乐）、邻居（做志愿）、父母（多沟通）的相处方式；3. 补充其他相处对象（如老师）丰富内容；4. 结尾总结呼应主题，确保涵盖所有要点、语言通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 沿用已给开头，无需修改；
2. 围绕不同相处对象展开：① 与朋友：We can share joy and sadness with our friends；② 与邻居：If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours；③ 与父母：At home, we should communicate more with our parents；
3. 补充其他对象：At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends；
4. 结尾总结：Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything；
5. 检查要点完整性、词数及信息要求，确保符合规范。
【答案】
Getting Along Well with Others
No one can live without keeping in with others. Therefore, it's important for us to learn how to get along well with others. We should be kind and friendly enough to others, so we can make more friends.We can share joy and sadness with our friends. If we are free, we can do volunteer work to help our neighbours. At home, we should communicate more with our parents. They are our closest people in the world. At school, we should respect our teachers. They are like both our parents and friends. Getting along well with others is very important. If we can get along well with others, we will enjoy ourselves every day and succeed when we do anything.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、人际关系表达
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，涵盖所有要求要点，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，语言通顺自然，符合英语写作规范，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
(D)
书包伴我学习，伴我成长。某英语报以“My Schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面图表信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题及课余你希望所做的事情。
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
mermaid
graph TD
A[My Schoolbag] --＞ B[What it looks like]
A --＞ C[What it is used for]
A --＞ D[The problems your schoolbag may bring]
A --＞ E[The things you expect to do in your free time]
D --＞ F[1. much schoolwork
2....]
E --＞ G[1....
2....]
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag.
书包伴我学习，伴我成长。某英语报以“My Schoolbag”为题，举办中学生征文活动。请根据下面图表信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括书包的外形特征、用途和书包背后的课业问题及课余你希望所做的事情。
提示：1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯，段落分明；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
mermaid
graph TD
A[My Schoolbag] --＞ B[What it looks like]
A --＞ C[What it is used for]
A --＞ D[The problems your schoolbag may bring]
A --＞ E[The things you expect to do in your free time]
D --＞ F[1. much schoolwork
2....]
E --＞ G[1....
2....]
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag.
It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
答案
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
解析
【分析】
本次写作主题为“My Schoolbag”，需结合图表的四个核心模块展开：书包的外形特征、用途、带来的课业问题、课余期望。开头已给出，需依次衔接内容：先说明书包的用途（装载学习用品），再描述外形（像行李般陪伴学习），接着阐述书包带来的问题（作业多、睡眠不足、周末补课），最后表达课余期望（参加运动、发展爱好），结尾升华主题，确保内容完整、行文连贯，符合征文的词数和格式要求，无真实人名地名。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍书包用途：It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on.
2. 描述书包外形：It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
3. 说明书包带来的问题：My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it.
4. 表达课余期望：If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
5. 结尾升华主题：As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
【答案】
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、信息整合表达
【点评】
本题要求结合图表信息完成英语短文写作，需涵盖所有给定要点，语言通顺流畅，符合征文的格式和内容要求，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，体现了英语写作的实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
本次写作主题为“My Schoolbag”，需结合图表的四个核心模块展开：书包的外形特征、用途、带来的课业问题、课余期望。开头已给出，需依次衔接内容：先说明书包的用途（装载学习用品），再描述外形（像行李般陪伴学习），接着阐述书包带来的问题（作业多、睡眠不足、周末补课），最后表达课余期望（参加运动、发展爱好），结尾升华主题，确保内容完整、行文连贯，符合征文的词数和格式要求，无真实人名地名。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，介绍书包用途：It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on.
2. 描述书包外形：It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
3. 说明书包带来的问题：My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it.
4. 表达课余期望：If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
5. 结尾升华主题：As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
【答案】
My Schoolbag
I have a schoolbag. It is used for carrying the school things, such as books, dictionaries, pens, rules and so on. It looks like a luggage which always accompanies me in the world of knowledge.
My schoolbag often brings us many problems. We have to do so much homework, sometimes, we can't finish our homework until mid-night, and we can't get enough sleep. Instead of enjoying the wonderful weekends, we are forced to have extra classes with it. If we have more spare time, we can take part in sports and actives. Besides, we can develop hobbies and interest as well.
As a middle school student, I hope my schoolbag can share my joy and happiness rather than become a burden.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、信息整合表达
【点评】
本题要求结合图表信息完成英语短文写作，需涵盖所有给定要点，语言通顺流畅，符合征文的格式和内容要求，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，体现了英语写作的实用性。
【难度系数】
0.5
