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上海迪士尼乐园于2016年6月16日正式开放，许多孩子打算前往游玩。假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。
由6个主题公园组成
参加活动，欣赏表演
注意：1. 词数在90左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：theme，主题；firework，烟火
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
上海迪士尼乐园于2016年6月16日正式开放，许多孩子打算前往游玩。假如你是一名乐园的志愿者，请你根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒他们文明游园。
由6个主题公园组成
参加活动，欣赏表演
注意：1. 词数在90左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词解释，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：theme，主题；firework，烟火
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there're lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
答案
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland. I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there're lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland. I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there're lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以上海迪士尼乐园志愿者的身份，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒文明游园。解题思路：1. 梳理乐园介绍的核心要点：位置（上海东部、地铁可达）、组成（6个主题公园）、游玩项目（参加活动、欣赏表演、购买礼物、观看烟火）；2. 文明游园需覆盖给定的“不扔垃圾、保持整洁”，再自拟至少两点合理文明行为（如排队等候、不大声喧哗等）；3. 结合已给开头结尾，整合要点为连贯短文，注意词数要求，适当发挥避免逐词翻译。
【解析】
先介绍乐园：说明其位于上海东部，可乘地铁到达，由6个主题公园组成，游玩时可参加活动、欣赏表演、挑选礼物，夜晚能看烟火；再提醒文明游园：除不扔垃圾保持整洁，补充排队等候、不大声喧哗等内容，使短文完整连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there're lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生英语书面表达能力，要求整合给定信息完成介绍类短文，同时补充文明游园内容，需兼顾要点覆盖、语句通顺和适当发挥，是初中英语常见写作题型，能考查学生语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以上海迪士尼乐园志愿者的身份，用英语向孩子们介绍乐园并提醒文明游园。解题思路：1. 梳理乐园介绍的核心要点：位置（上海东部、地铁可达）、组成（6个主题公园）、游玩项目（参加活动、欣赏表演、购买礼物、观看烟火）；2. 文明游园需覆盖给定的“不扔垃圾、保持整洁”，再自拟至少两点合理文明行为（如排队等候、不大声喧哗等）；3. 结合已给开头结尾，整合要点为连贯短文，注意词数要求，适当发挥避免逐词翻译。
【解析】
先介绍乐园：说明其位于上海东部，可乘地铁到达，由6个主题公园组成，游玩时可参加活动、欣赏表演、挑选礼物，夜晚能看烟火；再提醒文明游园：除不扔垃圾保持整洁，补充排队等候、不大声喧哗等内容，使短文完整连贯，符合要求。
【答案】
Good morning, children!
As a volunteer from Shanghai Disneyland, I'd like to say something about the park and tell you how to behave well in it.
The Disneyland is in the east of Shanghai. You can get there by underground. It's made up of six theme parks. You can join in different kinds of activities there, such as enjoying wonderful musicals or plays. Also, there're lots of nice presents in the shopping area for you to choose. At night, you can watch fireworks.
However, it's important to behave well in the park. Littering isn't allowed. You should keep the park clean. Remember to wait for your turn anytime. Moreover, it's impolite to shout loudly in public.
The park is worth your visit. I hope you will have fun.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、词汇运用
【点评】
本题考查学生英语书面表达能力，要求整合给定信息完成介绍类短文，同时补充文明游园内容，需兼顾要点覆盖、语句通顺和适当发挥，是初中英语常见写作题型，能考查学生语言综合运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
