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初中生活即将结束，丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。根据图表提示，选择你最喜欢的活动进行描述。
mermaid
graph TD
A[My Junior School Life] --＞ B[basketball game]
A --＞ C[New Year's party]
A --＞ D[sports meeting]
A --＞ E[school trip]
A --＞ F[art festival]
A --＞ G[...]
内容包括：1. 此次活动的过程；
2. 你的收获或感受。
要求：1. 80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
初中生活即将结束，丰富多彩的学校活动一定给你留下了许多美好的回忆。根据图表提示，选择你最喜欢的活动进行描述。
mermaid
graph TD
A[My Junior School Life] --＞ B[basketball game]
A --＞ C[New Year's party]
A --＞ D[sports meeting]
A --＞ E[school trip]
A --＞ F[art festival]
A --＞ G[...]
内容包括：1. 此次活动的过程；
2. 你的收获或感受。
要求：1. 80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
Among them, the basketball game which I watched when I was in Grade Seven gave me the deepest memory.
The basketball game was held in our school on Friday afternoon. It was between Class 3 and our class. Class 3 and our class are the best teams in our school. When the game started, both of us played actively. I could only see the ball passed quickly from one to another. It was really a wonderful game. At last our class won the first prize and all the students in our school congratulated us warmly.
How happy we were!
The basketball game was held in our school on Friday afternoon. It was between Class 3 and our class. Class 3 and our class are the best teams in our school. When the game started, both of us played actively. I could only see the ball passed quickly from one to another. It was really a wonderful game. At last our class won the first prize and all the students in our school congratulated us warmly.
How happy we were!
答案
My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
Among them, the basketball game which I watched when I was in Grade Seven gave me the deepest memory.
The basketball game was held in our school on Friday afternoon. It was between Class 3 and our class. Class 3 and our class are the best teams in our school. When the game started, both of us played actively. I could only see the ball passed quickly from one to another. It was really a wonderful game. At last our class won the first prize and all the students in our school congratulated us warmly.
How happy we were!
Among them, the basketball game which I watched when I was in Grade Seven gave me the deepest memory.
The basketball game was held in our school on Friday afternoon. It was between Class 3 and our class. Class 3 and our class are the best teams in our school. When the game started, both of us played actively. I could only see the ball passed quickly from one to another. It was really a wonderful game. At last our class won the first prize and all the students in our school congratulated us warmly.
How happy we were!
解析
【分析】本题为英语记叙文写作题，要求围绕初中生活的校园活动（图表给出篮球比赛、新年派对等），选择最喜欢的一项活动，描述其过程并表达收获或感受，字数80~100词，开头已给出。解题思路：首先确定要描写的具体活动；接着按照“点明印象最深的活动→介绍活动基本信息（时间、参与对象）→描述活动过程→说明结果与自身感受”的结构展开写作；最后检查是否符合字数要求，避免出现真实校名、人名，确保语句通顺、内容完整。
【解析】根据题目要求，选取篮球比赛作为写作内容，具体写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明七年级时观看的篮球比赛是印象最深的活动；2. 介绍比赛的时间（周五下午）、对阵班级（三班和本班）；3. 描述比赛过程：双方积极拼搏，传球快速，比赛精彩；4. 说明结果（本班获胜）及自身感受（喜悦），控制字数在要求范围内，确保内容符合要求。
【答案】My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
Among them, the basketball game which I watched when I was in Grade Seven gave me the deepest memory.
The basketball game was held in our school on Friday afternoon. It was between Class 3 and our class. Class 3 and our class are the best teams in our school. When the game started, both of us played actively. I could only see the ball passed quickly from one to another. It was really a wonderful game. At last our class won the first prize and all the students in our school congratulated us warmly.
How happy we were!
【知识点】英语记叙文写作，初中英语表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，围绕篮球比赛展开，清晰描述了活动过程，表达了获胜后的喜悦之情，符合字数要求，语句通顺，情感真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求，选取篮球比赛作为写作内容，具体写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明七年级时观看的篮球比赛是印象最深的活动；2. 介绍比赛的时间（周五下午）、对阵班级（三班和本班）；3. 描述比赛过程：双方积极拼搏，传球快速，比赛精彩；4. 说明结果（本班获胜）及自身感受（喜悦），控制字数在要求范围内，确保内容符合要求。
【答案】My junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories.
Among them, the basketball game which I watched when I was in Grade Seven gave me the deepest memory.
The basketball game was held in our school on Friday afternoon. It was between Class 3 and our class. Class 3 and our class are the best teams in our school. When the game started, both of us played actively. I could only see the ball passed quickly from one to another. It was really a wonderful game. At last our class won the first prize and all the students in our school congratulated us warmly.
How happy we were!
【知识点】英语记叙文写作，初中英语表达
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，围绕篮球比赛展开，清晰描述了活动过程，表达了获胜后的喜悦之情，符合字数要求，语句通顺，情感真挚，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】0.5
