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主题词网
学校生活
课程 · lesson · begin · exam · nice · have classes · discuss
安排 · Chinese · Biology · finish · have a break · discussion · take notes
课外活动 · club · watch TV · play sports · activity · competition · match
个人感受 · exciting · wonderful · full of fun · feel happy · enjoy oneself · have fun
写作实例
审时态：一般现在时 审词数
假如你现在是阳光中学七年级的学生，请以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。内容包含：
审主题
审人称：以第一人称为主
审要点
1.学校的课程安排和你最喜爱的学科；
2.学校的课外活动情况；
3.你的班级值日情况；
4.你对学校生活的感受。
My Wonderful School Life
主题词网
学校生活
课程 · lesson · begin · exam · nice · have classes · discuss
安排 · Chinese · Biology · finish · have a break · discussion · take notes
课外活动 · club · watch TV · play sports · activity · competition · match
个人感受 · exciting · wonderful · full of fun · feel happy · enjoy oneself · have fun
写作实例
审时态：一般现在时 审词数
假如你现在是阳光中学七年级的学生，请以“My Wonderful School Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。内容包含：
审主题
审人称：以第一人称为主
审要点
1.学校的课程安排和你最喜爱的学科；
2.学校的课外活动情况；
3.你的班级值日情况；
4.你对学校生活的感受。
My Wonderful School Life
答案
My Wonderful School Life
I am in Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.
Our lessons begin at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m. I like Chinese best! The Chinese language is really amazing.
We do all kinds of after-school activities. We have ball games, art festivals and English parties. What’s more, we have a field trip each term.
In my class, we all work in groups and take turns to do different chores. We sweep the floor, clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on. We are happy to keep our classroom clean and tidy.
My school life is so wonderful that I always have great fun at school.
亮点评析
①文中多处使用固定短语介绍学校生活。
②使用“What’s more...”将校内活动延伸到野外考察，递进关系明确。
③使用含so...that...引导的结果状语从句的主从复合句，丰富了句式结构，增强感染力。
I am in Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.
Our lessons begin at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m. I like Chinese best! The Chinese language is really amazing.
We do all kinds of after-school activities. We have ball games, art festivals and English parties. What’s more, we have a field trip each term.
In my class, we all work in groups and take turns to do different chores. We sweep the floor, clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on. We are happy to keep our classroom clean and tidy.
My school life is so wonderful that I always have great fun at school.
亮点评析
①文中多处使用固定短语介绍学校生活。
②使用“What’s more...”将校内活动延伸到野外考察，递进关系明确。
③使用含so...that...引导的结果状语从句的主从复合句，丰富了句式结构，增强感染力。
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：以阳光中学七年级学生身份，用第一人称、一般现在时，写80词左右的短文，需包含课程安排与喜爱学科、课外活动、班级值日、个人感受四个要点。结合给定主题词网，先开篇点明自身身份，再依次展开课程、课外活动、班级值日内容，最后用合适句式表达感受，同时注意使用丰富句式提升文章质量，确保覆盖所有要点且符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明身份：说明自己是阳光中学七年级学生；2. 介绍课程：说明上课时间，点明最喜爱的学科（如语文）；3. 描述课外活动：列举球类、艺术节、英语派对等，用“What’s more”补充野外考察，体现递进关系；4. 说明班级值日：写分组轮流做不同值日工作，表达保持教室整洁的开心；5. 用“so...that...”复合句表达对学校生活的感受，确保要点齐全、语言流畅。
【答案】
My Wonderful School Life
I am in Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.
Our lessons begin at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m. I like Chinese best! The Chinese language is really amazing.
We do all kinds of after-school activities. We have ball games, art festivals and English parties. What’s more, we have a field trip each term.
In my class, we all work in groups and take turns to do different chores. We sweep the floor, clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on. We are happy to keep our classroom clean and tidy.
My school life is so wonderful that I always have great fun at school.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般现在时运用、英语句式结构
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有写作要点，人称、时态使用准确，通过“What’s more”实现内容递进，运用“so...that...”复合句丰富句式，语言流畅自然，符合七年级学生的写作要求，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作要求：以阳光中学七年级学生身份，用第一人称、一般现在时，写80词左右的短文，需包含课程安排与喜爱学科、课外活动、班级值日、个人感受四个要点。结合给定主题词网，先开篇点明自身身份，再依次展开课程、课外活动、班级值日内容，最后用合适句式表达感受，同时注意使用丰富句式提升文章质量，确保覆盖所有要点且符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇点明身份：说明自己是阳光中学七年级学生；2. 介绍课程：说明上课时间，点明最喜爱的学科（如语文）；3. 描述课外活动：列举球类、艺术节、英语派对等，用“What’s more”补充野外考察，体现递进关系；4. 说明班级值日：写分组轮流做不同值日工作，表达保持教室整洁的开心；5. 用“so...that...”复合句表达对学校生活的感受，确保要点齐全、语言流畅。
【答案】
My Wonderful School Life
I am in Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School.
Our lessons begin at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m. I like Chinese best! The Chinese language is really amazing.
We do all kinds of after-school activities. We have ball games, art festivals and English parties. What’s more, we have a field trip each term.
In my class, we all work in groups and take turns to do different chores. We sweep the floor, clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on. We are happy to keep our classroom clean and tidy.
My school life is so wonderful that I always have great fun at school.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般现在时运用、英语句式结构
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，覆盖所有写作要点，人称、时态使用准确，通过“What’s more”实现内容递进，运用“so...that...”复合句丰富句式，语言流畅自然，符合七年级学生的写作要求，是一篇优秀的主题写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作支架
开头
自我介绍、介绍课程安排以及最喜爱的学科
I am in ______ . Our lessons begin ______ . I like ______ !
The
中间
介绍课外活动情况以及班级值日情况
We do
.
In my class, we
结尾
表达自己的感受
My school life is so
开头
自我介绍、介绍课程安排以及最喜爱的学科
I am in ______ . Our lessons begin ______ . I like ______ !
The
Chinese language
is really amazing.中间
介绍课外活动情况以及班级值日情况
We do
all kinds of after-school activities
. We have ball games, art festivals and English parties
. What’s more, we have a field trip each term
.In my class, we
all work in groups and take turns to do different chores
.（高分句式1）We sweep the floor, clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on
. We are happy to keep our classroom clean and tidy
.（高分句式2）结尾
表达自己的感受
My school life is so
wonderful
that I always have great fun at school
.（高分句式3）答案
1. Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School
2. at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m.
3. Chinese best
4. Chinese language
5. all kinds of after-school activities
6. ball games, art festivals and English parties
7. a field trip each term
8. all work in groups and take turns to do different chores
9. clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on
10. keep our classroom clean and tidy
11. wonderful
12. I always have great fun at school
2. at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m.
3. Chinese best
4. Chinese language
5. all kinds of after-school activities
6. ball games, art festivals and English parties
7. a field trip each term
8. all work in groups and take turns to do different chores
9. clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on
10. keep our classroom clean and tidy
11. wonderful
12. I always have great fun at school
解析
【分析】本题是英语写作补全题，需围绕“学校生活”主题，结合写作结构（开头、中间、结尾），填写符合语法、语境及主题的内容。首先明确各部分功能：开头部分完成自我介绍、课程安排及喜爱学科的表达；中间部分补充课外活动和班级值日的具体内容；结尾部分抒发对学校生活的感受，需贴合日常校园实际，确保语句通顺、符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】根据写作主题“学校生活”及各句语境，依次填写对应内容：1. 自我介绍班级：Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School；2. 课程开始及结束时间：at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m.；3. 表达喜爱的学科：Chinese best；4. 对应学科的描述：Chinese language；5. 总述课外活动：all kinds of after-school activities；6. 列举具体课外活动：ball games, art festivals and English parties；7. 补充额外活动：a field trip each term；8. 说明班级值日方式：all work in groups and take turns to do different chores；9. 列举具体值日内容：clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on；10. 说明值日目的：keep our classroom clean and tidy；11. 描述学校生活的感受：wonderful；12. 具体表达感受：I always have great fun at school。
【答案】Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School; at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m.; Chinese best; Chinese language; all kinds of after-school activities; ball games, art festivals and English parties; a field trip each term; all work in groups and take turns to do different chores; clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on; keep our classroom clean and tidy; wonderful; I always have great fun at school
【知识点】英语写作补全、学校生活词汇、英语句子结构
【点评】本题为英语写作支架类题目，清晰划分写作结构，引导学生围绕“学校生活”主题补充内容，帮助学生掌握写作的逻辑框架，贴合实际校园场景，适合学生练习英语写作的基础表达。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】根据写作主题“学校生活”及各句语境，依次填写对应内容：1. 自我介绍班级：Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School；2. 课程开始及结束时间：at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m.；3. 表达喜爱的学科：Chinese best；4. 对应学科的描述：Chinese language；5. 总述课外活动：all kinds of after-school activities；6. 列举具体课外活动：ball games, art festivals and English parties；7. 补充额外活动：a field trip each term；8. 说明班级值日方式：all work in groups and take turns to do different chores；9. 列举具体值日内容：clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on；10. 说明值日目的：keep our classroom clean and tidy；11. 描述学校生活的感受：wonderful；12. 具体表达感受：I always have great fun at school。
【答案】Grade 7 at Sunshine Middle School; at 8:15 a.m. and finish at 4:00 p.m.; Chinese best; Chinese language; all kinds of after-school activities; ball games, art festivals and English parties; a field trip each term; all work in groups and take turns to do different chores; clean the windows, empty the bins, water the plants and so on; keep our classroom clean and tidy; wonderful; I always have great fun at school
【知识点】英语写作补全、学校生活词汇、英语句子结构
【点评】本题为英语写作支架类题目，清晰划分写作结构，引导学生围绕“学校生活”主题补充内容，帮助学生掌握写作的逻辑框架，贴合实际校园场景，适合学生练习英语写作的基础表达。
【难度系数】0.3
