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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D17
「2026江苏无锡澄西片区期中」
亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。假如你是李华，请结合要点提示，以“My School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
My School Life
美丽校园 我的学校看起来漂亮……
友善师生 我的同学们…
老师……
最爱学科/地点 我最喜欢的学科/地点是……因为……
精彩活动 学校有各种各样的活动，我……
注意:1.所写内容必须包括表中所有信息,并作适当发挥；
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
「2026江苏无锡澄西片区期中」
亲爱的同学们，初中生活开启了我们人生的新旅程。假如你是李华，请结合要点提示，以“My School Life”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍你的学校生活。
My School Life
美丽校园 我的学校看起来漂亮……
友善师生 我的同学们…
老师……最爱学科/地点 我最喜欢的学科/地点是……因为……
精彩活动 学校有各种各样的活动，我……
注意:1.所写内容必须包括表中所有信息,并作适当发挥；
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers.
My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries.
Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there.
My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
答案
主题写作专项
基础版范文
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries. Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there.
My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
进阶版范文
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school looks really beautiful with many green trees and nice flowers. It’s a perfect place for us to study. I have many friendly classmates and kind teachers. They are all very kind to me. When I am in trouble, they always lend a hand to me in time. My favorite subject is Chinese because the Chinese language is really amazing. There are all kinds of clubs in our school. I can join the basketball club, music club and so on. Doing all kinds of activities after class makes me very happy.
My new school life is full of fun. I really like it.
基础版范文
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries. Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there.
My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
进阶版范文
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I am Li Hua, a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I live a happy life here.
My school looks really beautiful with many green trees and nice flowers. It’s a perfect place for us to study. I have many friendly classmates and kind teachers. They are all very kind to me. When I am in trouble, they always lend a hand to me in time. My favorite subject is Chinese because the Chinese language is really amazing. There are all kinds of clubs in our school. I can join the basketball club, music club and so on. Doing all kinds of activities after class makes me very happy.
My new school life is full of fun. I really like it.
解析
【分析】
这是一道初中英语话题写作题，要求以李华的身份介绍校园生活，需覆盖题目给出的四个核心要点：美丽校园、友善师生、最爱学科/地点、精彩活动，结合给定开头续写，词数控制在80左右。解题思路为：先衔接给定开头，依次围绕四个要点展开描述，每个要点补充合理细节，最后收尾表达对校园生活的喜爱，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合初中英语写作要求。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，描述美丽校园：My school looks beautiful and modern；接着写友善师生：My classmates are friendly and help each other, our teachers are kind and work hard；然后写最爱学科/地点：My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting；最后写精彩活动：School has all kinds of activities like sports meetings, I join English club often；最后收尾表达喜爱。完整范文如下：
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries. Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there. My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
【答案】
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries. Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there. My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、要点式写作、初中英语应用文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，补充了合理细节，语言通顺流畅，符合初中英语写作规范，清晰展现了校园生活的美好，表达了真情实感。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道初中英语话题写作题，要求以李华的身份介绍校园生活，需覆盖题目给出的四个核心要点：美丽校园、友善师生、最爱学科/地点、精彩活动，结合给定开头续写，词数控制在80左右。解题思路为：先衔接给定开头，依次围绕四个要点展开描述，每个要点补充合理细节，最后收尾表达对校园生活的喜爱，确保内容完整、语言通顺，符合初中英语写作要求。
【解析】
首先衔接开头，描述美丽校园：My school looks beautiful and modern；接着写友善师生：My classmates are friendly and help each other, our teachers are kind and work hard；然后写最爱学科/地点：My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting；最后写精彩活动：School has all kinds of activities like sports meetings, I join English club often；最后收尾表达喜爱。完整范文如下：
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries. Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there. My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
【答案】
My school looks beautiful and modern. My classmates are all friendly and we always help each other. Our teachers are kind to us. They work very hard too. I am lucky to have such good classmates and teachers. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting and I can make friends from other countries. Our school has all kinds of activities, such as sports meetings and art festivals. I often join the English club and take part in English speech competitions. I always have a great time there. My new school life is full of joy. I really like it.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、要点式写作、初中英语应用文
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有要点，补充了合理细节，语言通顺流畅，符合初中英语写作规范，清晰展现了校园生活的美好，表达了真情实感。
【难度系数】
0.6
