六、书面表达。满分20分
请根据下面的内容,以"My Favourite Book"为题,写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 名称和作者;
2. 主要人物介绍;
3. 主要内容或情节;
4. 个人观点或感想。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右题目已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Book
请根据下面的内容,以"My Favourite Book"为题,写一篇英语短文。
提示:
1. 名称和作者;
2. 主要人物介绍;
3. 主要内容或情节;
4. 个人观点或感想。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;
2. 必须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 80词左右题目已给出,不计入总词数。
My Favourite Book
One possible version:
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Harry Potter.
It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling.
It is filled with fascinating tales and is
counted among the most entertaining
books I've ever read.
The main character of the book is
Harry Potter. He's a brave and clever
boy who stands up to powerful enemies.
I have learnt a great deal from him. We
should be as confident and brave as
Harry Potter, and we should cherish and
defend our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very
much and I have read it three times. I
think it is a truly engaging book.
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Harry Potter.
It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling.
It is filled with fascinating tales and is
counted among the most entertaining
books I've ever read.
The main character of the book is
Harry Potter. He's a brave and clever
boy who stands up to powerful enemies.
I have learnt a great deal from him. We
should be as confident and brave as
Harry Potter, and we should cherish and
defend our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very
much and I have read it three times. I
think it is a truly engaging book.
答案
六、One possible version:
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Harry Potter.
It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling.
It is filled with fascinating tales and is
counted among the most entertaining
books I've ever read.
The main character of the book is
Harry Potter. He's a brave and clever
boy who stands up to powerful enemies.
I have learnt a great deal from him. We
should be as confident and brave as
Harry Potter, and we should cherish and
defend our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very
much and I have read it three times. I
think it is a truly engaging book.
My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Harry Potter.
It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling.
It is filled with fascinating tales and is
counted among the most entertaining
books I've ever read.
The main character of the book is
Harry Potter. He's a brave and clever
boy who stands up to powerful enemies.
I have learnt a great deal from him. We
should be as confident and brave as
Harry Potter, and we should cherish and
defend our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very
much and I have read it three times. I
think it is a truly engaging book.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语书面表达题,要求以"My Favourite Book"为题写作,需覆盖四个提示要点:书籍名称与作者、主要人物介绍、主要内容/情节、个人观点/感想。解题思路为:先选定易写作的书籍(如范文中的《哈利波特》),按提示顺序组织内容:开篇点明书名及作者,介绍主要人物的性格特点,结合人物表达个人感悟,最后表达对书籍的喜爱,确保语句通顺、语意连贯,符合字数要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 开篇点题,明确最喜欢的书是《哈利波特》,说明作者为英国作家J.K.罗琳;2. 介绍主要人物哈利·波特,突出其勇敢、聪明的性格;3. 结合人物表达个人感悟,如从他身上学到要自信勇敢、珍惜朋友;4. 结尾表达对书籍的喜爱,说明阅读次数及对书的评价,注意用词准确、语句连贯,控制在80词左右。
【答案】My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Harry Potter. It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling. It is filled with fascinating tales and is counted among the most entertaining books I've ever read.
The main character of the book is Harry Potter. He's a brave and clever boy who stands up to powerful enemies. I have learnt a great deal from him. We should be as confident and brave as Harry Potter, and we should cherish and defend our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very much and I have read it three times. I think it is a truly engaging book.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语写作要点整合
【点评】本篇范文严格覆盖所有提示内容,结构清晰,语句通顺,既介绍了书籍基本信息,又突出人物特点与个人感悟,符合初中英语书面表达要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 开篇点题,明确最喜欢的书是《哈利波特》,说明作者为英国作家J.K.罗琳;2. 介绍主要人物哈利·波特,突出其勇敢、聪明的性格;3. 结合人物表达个人感悟,如从他身上学到要自信勇敢、珍惜朋友;4. 结尾表达对书籍的喜爱,说明阅读次数及对书的评价,注意用词准确、语句连贯,控制在80词左右。
【答案】My Favourite Book
My favourite book is Harry Potter. It is written by British writer J. K. Rowling. It is filled with fascinating tales and is counted among the most entertaining books I've ever read.
The main character of the book is Harry Potter. He's a brave and clever boy who stands up to powerful enemies. I have learnt a great deal from him. We should be as confident and brave as Harry Potter, and we should cherish and defend our friends.
I like reading Harry Potter very much and I have read it three times. I think it is a truly engaging book.
【知识点】英语书面表达、英语写作要点整合
【点评】本篇范文严格覆盖所有提示内容,结构清晰,语句通顺,既介绍了书籍基本信息,又突出人物特点与个人感悟,符合初中英语书面表达要求。
【难度系数】0.5
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