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假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友 John
写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好,内容包括:
1. 介绍爱好;
2. 喜欢的原因;
3. 相关经历;
4. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 词数不少于80,邮件的格式已给出,不计入
总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①吹笛子
②写书法
③弹吉他
④打网球
⑤在周末
⑥在某人的空闲时间
⑦害怕……
⑧克服某人的恐惧
⑨放弃
⑩作为回报
⑪偶尔;间或
⑫出外游玩
⑬减轻压力
⑭成就感
⑮梦想;希望
2. 句型仿写
①... I think they're a good way to learn
about different places ... 教材p.7 1b
句型:主语+is/are a good way to do sth.
仿写:它是减轻压力的好方式。
②Instead, this Italian teenager finds it fun
to make mobile phone apps. 教材p.6 1b
句型:... find(s) it fun to do ...
仿写:我发现团队合作很有趣。
③It makes me really happy when ... 教材
p.9 3c
句型:... make(s) sb really happy when ...
仿写:当我们赢得比赛时,我感到特别开心。
连句成篇
Dear John,
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,请用英语给你的朋友 John
写一封邮件,分享你的兴趣爱好,内容包括:
1. 介绍爱好;
2. 喜欢的原因;
3. 相关经历;
4. 个人感受。
注意:
1. 词数不少于80,邮件的格式已给出,不计入
总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第一人称
2. 时态:一般现在时为主
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①吹笛子
②写书法
③弹吉他
④打网球
⑤在周末
⑥在某人的空闲时间
⑦害怕……
⑧克服某人的恐惧
⑨放弃
⑩作为回报
⑪偶尔;间或
⑫出外游玩
⑬减轻压力
⑭成就感
⑮梦想;希望
2. 句型仿写
①... I think they're a good way to learn
about different places ... 教材p.7 1b
句型:主语+is/are a good way to do sth.
仿写:它是减轻压力的好方式。
②Instead, this Italian teenager finds it fun
to make mobile phone apps. 教材p.6 1b
句型:... find(s) it fun to do ...
仿写:我发现团队合作很有趣。
③It makes me really happy when ... 教材
p.9 3c
句型:... make(s) sb really happy when ...
仿写:当我们赢得比赛时,我感到特别开心。
连句成篇
Dear John,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①play the flute ②do calligraphy
③play the guitar ④play tennis
⑤at the weekend ⑥in one's free time
⑦be scared/afraid of ⑧get over one's fear
⑨give up ⑩in return
⑪once in a while ⑫go on an outing
⑬reduce stress ⑭a sense of achievement
⑮dream of
2. 句型仿写
①It's a good way to reduce stress.
②I find it fun to work as a team.
③It makes me really happy when we win
games.
【连句成篇】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to
share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are
two main reasons. First, it's a good way to
reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it
gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was
eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now
I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how
to work with others as a team. It makes me
really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking
forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1. 主题词块
①play the flute ②do calligraphy
③play the guitar ④play tennis
⑤at the weekend ⑥in one's free time
⑦be scared/afraid of ⑧get over one's fear
⑨give up ⑩in return
⑪once in a while ⑫go on an outing
⑬reduce stress ⑭a sense of achievement
⑮dream of
2. 句型仿写
①It's a good way to reduce stress.
②I find it fun to work as a team.
③It makes me really happy when we win
games.
【连句成篇】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to
share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are
two main reasons. First, it's a good way to
reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it
gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was
eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now
I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how
to work with others as a team. It makes me
really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking
forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给朋友John写一封分享爱好的邮件。解题思路需遵循给定的思维导图结构：1. 开篇点明写作意图，用指定句型引出主题；2. 主体部分依次介绍爱好、喜欢的原因、相关经历及个人感受，需运用积累的主题词块和仿写句型，覆盖题目要求的全部内容；3. 结尾询问对方爱好并表达期待回复，符合邮件交际逻辑。写作时注意人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，讲述经历时用一般过去时，保证行文连贯、词数达标。
【解析】
步骤1：确定邮件格式，开头用称呼Dear John，结尾用署名Yours, Li Hua；
步骤2：开篇点题，说明写信目的是分享自己的爱好；
步骤3：主体部分：①介绍爱好（如打篮球）；②阐述两个喜欢的原因（减压、交朋友）；③讲述相关经历（8岁开始，曾害怕输，现在克服恐惧）；④说明爱好带来的收获（学会团队合作，赢球时开心）；
步骤4：结尾询问对方的爱好，表达期待回复。写作中需运用素材中的主题词块和仿写句型，确保内容完整、语言准确。
【答案】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are two main reasons. First, it's a good way to reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how to work with others as a team. It makes me really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、英语常用词块运用、英语句型仿写
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的应用文写作题，围绕“分享爱好”的交际主题，提供了清晰的结构思维导图和素材，降低了写作难度，注重考查学生的语言运用能力和交际表达能力，符合初中英语写作的教学要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份给朋友John写一封分享爱好的邮件。解题思路需遵循给定的思维导图结构：1. 开篇点明写作意图，用指定句型引出主题；2. 主体部分依次介绍爱好、喜欢的原因、相关经历及个人感受，需运用积累的主题词块和仿写句型，覆盖题目要求的全部内容；3. 结尾询问对方爱好并表达期待回复，符合邮件交际逻辑。写作时注意人称用第一人称，时态以一般现在时为主，讲述经历时用一般过去时，保证行文连贯、词数达标。
【解析】
步骤1：确定邮件格式，开头用称呼Dear John，结尾用署名Yours, Li Hua；
步骤2：开篇点题，说明写信目的是分享自己的爱好；
步骤3：主体部分：①介绍爱好（如打篮球）；②阐述两个喜欢的原因（减压、交朋友）；③讲述相关经历（8岁开始，曾害怕输，现在克服恐惧）；④说明爱好带来的收获（学会团队合作，赢球时开心）；
步骤4：结尾询问对方的爱好，表达期待回复。写作中需运用素材中的主题词块和仿写句型，确保内容完整、语言准确。
【答案】
Dear John,
How's everything going? I'm writing to share my favourite hobby with you.
I love playing basketball and there are two main reasons. First, it's a good way to reduce stress and stay healthy. Second, it gives me a chance to make lots of friends.
I started playing basketball when I was eight. I used to be scared of losing, but now I've got over my fear.
Playing basketball has taught me how to work with others as a team. It makes me really happy when we win games.
So, how about your hobby? I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、英语常用词块运用、英语句型仿写
【点评】
本题是初中英语典型的应用文写作题，围绕“分享爱好”的交际主题，提供了清晰的结构思维导图和素材，降低了写作难度，注重考查学生的语言运用能力和交际表达能力，符合初中英语写作的教学要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
