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同学们都听说过神话故事《后羿射日》吧！请根据下面提示用英语来描述这个小故事。100词左右。
提示词：heat 热，热量；prevent 阻止；creature 动物；die of 死于；human beings 人类；protection 保护；unless 除非
写作思路
1. 时态：使用一般过去时态
2. 人称：使用第三人称
3. 结构：
写作模板(句式)
开头句：
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky.
很久以前，天上有十个太阳。
过渡句：
Unless someone shot the suns, the people could not have a happy life.
除非有人射下太阳，否则人们无法过上幸福的生活。
结尾句：
From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
从那时起，每个人都享受着幸福的生活，万物和谐。
范文欣赏
Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky. The heat prevented everything growing and living. Everyone was living a sad life and many creatures died of the hot weather.
Unless someone shot the suns, the people could not have a happy life. A man named Hou Yi who was a really brave man began to shoot the suns. First, second, third... then he shot 9 out of 10 suns. Finally, the last one begged Hou Yi to leave him, and he promised to give the earth sunshine and warmth. As soon as Hou Yi heard it, he stopped shooting.
Hou Yi helped the human beings out of the bitter life. Because of Hou Yi, the planet was under protection again. From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
同学们都听说过神话故事《后羿射日》吧！请根据下面提示用英语来描述这个小故事。100词左右。
提示词：heat 热，热量；prevent 阻止；creature 动物；die of 死于；human beings 人类；protection 保护；unless 除非
写作思路
1. 时态：使用一般过去时态
2. 人称：使用第三人称
3. 结构：
写作模板(句式)
开头句：
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky.
很久以前，天上有十个太阳。
过渡句：
Unless someone shot the suns, the people could not have a happy life.
除非有人射下太阳，否则人们无法过上幸福的生活。
结尾句：
From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
从那时起，每个人都享受着幸福的生活，万物和谐。
范文欣赏
Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky. The heat prevented everything growing and living. Everyone was living a sad life and many creatures died of the hot weather.
Unless someone shot the suns, the people could not have a happy life. A man named Hou Yi who was a really brave man began to shoot the suns. First, second, third... then he shot 9 out of 10 suns. Finally, the last one begged Hou Yi to leave him, and he promised to give the earth sunshine and warmth. As soon as Hou Yi heard it, he stopped shooting.
Hou Yi helped the human beings out of the bitter life. Because of Hou Yi, the planet was under protection again. From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
答案
Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky. The heat prevented everything growing and living. Everyone lived a sad life and many creatures died of the hot weather.
Unless someone shot the suns, people couldn't have a happy life. A brave man called Hou Yi decided to shoot the suns. He shot 9 of the 10 suns. The last sun begged him to spare it, promising to give the earth proper sunshine and warmth. Hou Yi agreed and stopped shooting.
From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky. The heat prevented everything growing and living. Everyone lived a sad life and many creatures died of the hot weather.
Unless someone shot the suns, people couldn't have a happy life. A brave man called Hou Yi decided to shoot the suns. He shot 9 of the 10 suns. The last sun begged him to spare it, promising to give the earth proper sunshine and warmth. Hou Yi agreed and stopped shooting.
From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语记叙文写作题，要求围绕《后羿射日》的神话故事，结合给定提示词、结构，用一般过去时、第三人称完成100词左右的短文。解题思路：1. 确定核心要素：时态为一般过去时，人称用第三人称；2. 遵循给定结构（开篇点题、故事大意、结局影响）展开；3. 运用提示词丰富内容，补充合理细节（如最后太阳的请求），使故事完整，符合字数要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇：用指定开头句引出背景，结合提示词heat、prevent说明十个太阳的危害（The heat prevented everything growing and living.），补充“many creatures died of the hot weather”完善内容；2. 发展：用提示词unless引出后羿射日的原因，介绍后羿的行为，补充射日过程（射落9个太阳）和最后太阳的请求细节，使故事连贯；3. 结尾：用指定结尾句收束，确保时态正确、结构完整，符合要求。
【答案】Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky. The heat prevented everything growing and living. Everyone lived a sad life and many creatures died of the hot weather.
Unless someone shot the suns, people couldn't have a happy life. A brave man called Hou Yi decided to shoot the suns. He shot 9 of the 10 suns. The last sun begged him to spare it, promising to give the earth proper sunshine and warmth. Hou Yi agreed and stopped shooting.
From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；一般过去时态；神话故事写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰（开篇-发展-结局），时态准确，运用所有提示词，补充合理细节使故事完整，符合字数要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇：用指定开头句引出背景，结合提示词heat、prevent说明十个太阳的危害（The heat prevented everything growing and living.），补充“many creatures died of the hot weather”完善内容；2. 发展：用提示词unless引出后羿射日的原因，介绍后羿的行为，补充射日过程（射落9个太阳）和最后太阳的请求细节，使故事连贯；3. 结尾：用指定结尾句收束，确保时态正确、结构完整，符合要求。
【答案】Hou Yi Shoots the Suns
Once upon a time, there were 10 suns in the sky. The heat prevented everything growing and living. Everyone lived a sad life and many creatures died of the hot weather.
Unless someone shot the suns, people couldn't have a happy life. A brave man called Hou Yi decided to shoot the suns. He shot 9 of the 10 suns. The last sun begged him to spare it, promising to give the earth proper sunshine and warmth. Hou Yi agreed and stopped shooting.
From then on, everyone enjoyed his happy life and the planet was in peace.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；一般过去时态；神话故事写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰（开篇-发展-结局），时态准确，运用所有提示词，补充合理细节使故事完整，符合字数要求，是一篇符合标准的范文。
【难度系数】0.6
