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同学们一定听过"守株待兔"的故事吧，请用英语描述一下这个故事并谈谈自己的感想。
提示词：knock against 撞上；crops 庄稼
要求：
1. 故事情节完整，可适当发挥，语言准确流畅，书写规范；
2. 词数80左右。
请做： 单元检测(十)、(十一)、(十二) 勤演练，汇真知
同学们一定听过"守株待兔"的故事吧，请用英语描述一下这个故事并谈谈自己的感想。
提示词：knock against 撞上；crops 庄稼
要求：
1. 故事情节完整，可适当发挥，语言准确流畅，书写规范；
2. 词数80左右。
请做： 单元检测(十)、(十一)、(十二) 勤演练，汇真知
答案
One possible version:
Once upon a time, there was a farmer
working in his field. Soon he was very tired so
he sat near a big tree. A hare ran out of a hole.
When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It
ran so quickly that its head knocked against the
stump. It died soon. The farmer was very excit-
ed to see it. He picked up the dead hare and took
it home for dinner. He was very happy.
From that day on,he didn't farm. He stayed
by that tree, waiting for hares to come again. In
the end the farmer couldn't get anything again
because he was very lazy.
The story teaches us that we can't only
depend on luck. We need to work hard to get
what we want.
Once upon a time, there was a farmer
working in his field. Soon he was very tired so
he sat near a big tree. A hare ran out of a hole.
When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It
ran so quickly that its head knocked against the
stump. It died soon. The farmer was very excit-
ed to see it. He picked up the dead hare and took
it home for dinner. He was very happy.
From that day on,he didn't farm. He stayed
by that tree, waiting for hares to come again. In
the end the farmer couldn't get anything again
because he was very lazy.
The story teaches us that we can't only
depend on luck. We need to work hard to get
what we want.
解析
【分析】
本题要求用英语描述“守株待兔”的故事并谈感想，需结合提示词knock against、crops，词数控制在80左右。解题思路：1. 梳理故事核心情节：农夫在种庄稼的田地里劳作，兔子受惊后撞树死亡，农夫捡兔后放弃劳作坐等兔子再来，最终一无所获；2. 加入个人感想，点明不能依赖运气、需努力的道理；3. 运用提示词，用一般过去时叙述故事，语言简洁流畅，确保情节完整。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头用Once upon a time引出故事背景，点明农夫在种庄稼的田地里劳作；2. 中间按时间顺序叙述：兔子受惊后跑得太快，头撞上树桩（用knock against）死亡，农夫捡兔回家；3. 后续情节：农夫不再劳作，坐等兔子，最终一无所获；4. 结尾写感想，表达不能依赖运气、要努力的观点；5. 检查语言准确性，控制词数在80左右，规范使用提示词。
【答案】
One possible version: Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired so he sat near a big tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran so quickly that its head knocked against the stump. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it. He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. He was very happy. From that day on, he didn't farm. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again. In the end the farmer couldn't get anything again because he was very lazy. The story teaches us that we can't only depend on luck. We need to work hard to get what we want.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语故事类作文、英语观点表达
【点评】
本题结合经典寓言故事考查英语写作，兼顾语言运用能力与价值观引导，提示词的运用能帮助学生规范细节表达，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求用英语描述“守株待兔”的故事并谈感想，需结合提示词knock against、crops，词数控制在80左右。解题思路：1. 梳理故事核心情节：农夫在种庄稼的田地里劳作，兔子受惊后撞树死亡，农夫捡兔后放弃劳作坐等兔子再来，最终一无所获；2. 加入个人感想，点明不能依赖运气、需努力的道理；3. 运用提示词，用一般过去时叙述故事，语言简洁流畅，确保情节完整。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头用Once upon a time引出故事背景，点明农夫在种庄稼的田地里劳作；2. 中间按时间顺序叙述：兔子受惊后跑得太快，头撞上树桩（用knock against）死亡，农夫捡兔回家；3. 后续情节：农夫不再劳作，坐等兔子，最终一无所获；4. 结尾写感想，表达不能依赖运气、要努力的观点；5. 检查语言准确性，控制词数在80左右，规范使用提示词。
【答案】
One possible version: Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired so he sat near a big tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran so quickly that its head knocked against the stump. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it. He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. He was very happy. From that day on, he didn't farm. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again. In the end the farmer couldn't get anything again because he was very lazy. The story teaches us that we can't only depend on luck. We need to work hard to get what we want.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、英语故事类作文、英语观点表达
【点评】
本题结合经典寓言故事考查英语写作，兼顾语言运用能力与价值观引导，提示词的运用能帮助学生规范细节表达，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
