Ⅴ. 书面表达。
暑假就像一场奇妙的旅程，看似漫长，却又在不经意间飞逝而过。相信在这段美好的时光里，每位同学都经历了许多独特而有意义的事情。请你用英文写一篇短文，向英语杂志社投稿，与大家分享你的暑假生活吧。
内容提要：
1. your understanding of the holiday
2. one interesting / unforgettable holiday you had—a trip, a new skill, a special event, and so on
3. how you felt about it

One possible version：
My Holiday
Holidays are not just about taking a break from schoolwork. They are special times to explore new things and create happy memories. In my opinion, holidays are like colourful brushes that paint joy and meaning into our lives. They help us grow, relax, and connect with others, making every day unique and memorable.
One of the most unforgettable things was learning to ride a bike. At first, I was extremely nervous. Every time I tried to pedal, my hands trembled, and I quickly lost balance and fell. However, my dad was always by my side, patiently guiding me. After countless attempts, I finally managed to ride steadily. The feeling of the wind on my face as I cycled was simply amazing.
This summer holiday was truly amazing. It not only brought me a lot of fun but also taught me an important lesson: as long as I am determined and keep trying, I can overcome any difficulty.

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求向英语杂志社投稿分享暑假生活，需覆盖三个核心要点：①对假期的理解；②一件难忘的假期经历（如旅行、学技能等）；③对该经历的感受。解题时需搭建“总-分-总”结构：开头明确对假期的认知，中间选取具体、有细节的事例支撑，结尾升华感悟，语言需流畅自然，符合投稿的积极语气。
【解析】写作分三段完成：1. 第一段阐述对假期的理解，可运用比喻等修辞，说明假期不仅是休息，更是探索、创造回忆的时光；2. 第二段选取具体事例（如学骑车），按时间顺序叙述初始的紧张、失败的过程、他人的帮助、最终成功的喜悦，加入细节让内容真实；3. 第三段总结暑假的意义，点明从经历中获得的感悟，呼应开头对假期的理解。
【答案】One possible version：
My Holiday
Holidays are not just about taking a break from schoolwork. They are special times to explore new things and create happy memories. In my opinion, holidays are like colourful brushes that paint joy and meaning into our lives. They help us grow, relax, and connect with others, making every day unique and memorable.
One of the most unforgettable things was learning to ride a bike. At first, I was extremely nervous. Every time I tried to pedal, my hands trembled, and I quickly lost balance and fell. However, my dad was always by my side, patiently guiding me. After countless attempts, I finally managed to ride steadily. The feeling of the wind on my face as I cycled was simply amazing.
This summer holiday was truly amazing. It not only brought me a lot of fun but also taught me an important lesson: as long as I am determined and keep trying, I can overcome any difficulty.
【知识点】英语书面表达、假期话题写作、记叙文写作
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，内容具体有细节，语言生动形象，运用比喻修辞增强表达效果，既分享了暑假经历，又传递了积极感悟，符合杂志社投稿的要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达范例。
【难度系数】0.6

【单元话题作文】
话题梳理
本单元的主题语境是“人与社会”，具体话题为“假期活动”，通过谈论学生刚刚度过的暑假经历，继续学习和练习描述过去发生的事情。要求同学们能够运用复合不定代词和过去式谈论过去遇到的人、发生的事，并表达对假期的感受。
经典名题
“跟着悟空游山西”是由山西省文化和旅游厅举办的活动。越来越多的游客包括一些外国友人都来到我们的家乡赏古建、品美食。《山西日报》的“Follow Wukong to Shanxi”专栏正在向山西的中学生征文。作为家乡的一名中学生，请你用三段话写一篇短文，为外国友人推荐一个你认为山西最好的地方。
内容包括：
1. 你认为山西最好的地方是哪里？
2. 你在那儿有什么样的旅行经历？
3. 结合以上经历，谈谈你的感受。

The Best Place to Visit in Shanxi
If you ask me which is the most wonderful place to visit in Shanxi, my answer is surely Pingyao Ancient City. It is a well-known old town with a history of more than 2700 years, and it has kept lots of complete Chinese traditional ancient buildings.
I traveled there with my friends last summer holiday. We climbed the centuries-old city wall first, and saw something really fantastic when we walked along it. Later we tried different kinds of local tasty food, and the most unforgettable one was Pingyao beef. We also met some friendly people there, and no one refused to show us around if we got lost.
I had such a great time in Pingyao. When I walked on the old stone streets, I felt like I went back to hundreds of years ago. It is really a place full of surprise, and I hope all foreign friends can come here and enjoy your own wonderful trip.

【分析】
首先审题明确任务：需以三段式结构，向外国友人推荐山西最好的地方，内容要包含推荐地点、个人旅行经历、旅行感受，同时要运用复合不定代词和过去式。接着选择山西具有代表性的景点平遥古城作为推荐对象，该景点历史文化底蕴深厚，适合向外国友人介绍。然后按结构组织内容：第一段点明推荐平遥古城并介绍其特色；第二段叙述旅行经历，用过去式和复合不定代词补充细节；第三段表达个人感受并呼吁外国友人前往。
【解析】
1. 审题定要求：体裁为推荐类应用文，人称用第一人称，时态以一般过去式（描述经历）和一般现在时（介绍景点）为主，需覆盖三个指定内容点。
2. 结构规划：第一段开门见山推荐平遥古城，说明其历史与古建筑特色；第二段讲述去年暑假和朋友去平遥的经历，加入爬城墙、吃平遥牛肉、遇友好的人等细节，运用过去式和复合不定代词（如something、no one）；第三段抒发旅行感受，表达对平遥的喜爱，呼吁外国友人前来。
3. 语言运用：符合英语表达习惯，准确传达要点，贴合单元学习要求。
【答案】
The Best Place to Visit in Shanxi
If you ask me which is the most wonderful place to visit in Shanxi, my answer is surely Pingyao Ancient City. It is a well-known old town with a history of more than 2700 years, and it has kept lots of complete Chinese traditional ancient buildings.
I traveled there with my friends last summer holiday. We climbed the centuries-old city wall first, and saw something really fantastic when we walked along it. Later we tried different kinds of local tasty food, and the most unforgettable one was Pingyao beef. We also met some friendly people there, and no one refused to show us around if we got lost.
I had such a great time in Pingyao. When I walked on the old stone streets, I felt like I went back to hundreds of years ago. It is really a place full of surprise, and I hope all foreign friends can come here and enjoy your own wonderful trip.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去式、复合不定代词
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求，采用三段式结构，完整覆盖推荐地点、旅行经历、个人感受三个要点，语言流畅自然，准确运用了复合不定代词和过去式，符合单元学习目标，是一篇优秀的推荐类英语作文，能为学生提供清晰的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5