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五、书面表达
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom听说你正在学校参与“Memory Challenge Corner”的活动，他对此很好奇。请你写一封邮件向他介绍你的挑战、应对方法及带来的好处。
要求:(1)选择一项你遇到的记忆挑战;介绍你计划使用的三种应对方法;说明这些方法给你带来的两点好处;(2)文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息;(3)词数80左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our "Memory Challenge Corner".
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom听说你正在学校参与“Memory Challenge Corner”的活动，他对此很好奇。请你写一封邮件向他介绍你的挑战、应对方法及带来的好处。
要求:(1)选择一项你遇到的记忆挑战;介绍你计划使用的三种应对方法;说明这些方法给你带来的两点好处;(2)文中不得出现真实人名、学校等信息;(3)词数80左右,邮件的首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our "Memory Challenge Corner".
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our "Memory Challenge Corner". My biggest memory challenge is remembering new English words. I often forget them quickly and feel upset.
To improve it, I try some useful methods. First, I learn words in groups instead of remembering them one by one. Second, I link new words with my daily life to understand them better. Third, I review what I have learnt every morning and evening.
These ways work well. They help me remember words more easily and quickly. They also make me more confident in learning English. Now I can use words correctly and my English is improving steadily.
Yours,
Li Hua
(96 words)
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our "Memory Challenge Corner". My biggest memory challenge is remembering new English words. I often forget them quickly and feel upset.
To improve it, I try some useful methods. First, I learn words in groups instead of remembering them one by one. Second, I link new words with my daily life to understand them better. Third, I review what I have learnt every morning and evening.
These ways work well. They help me remember words more easily and quickly. They also make me more confident in learning English. Now I can use words correctly and my English is improving steadily.
Yours,
Li Hua
(96 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一封介绍“Memory Challenge Corner”活动的邮件，需先选定一项记忆挑战（如词汇挑战），再列出三种应对方法，最后说明两点好处，要符合邮件格式，语言简洁，词数约80左右，不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，点明自己的记忆挑战是记英语新单词；
2. 分三点阐述应对方法：①分组记单词而非单个记；②将新单词与日常生活关联；③早晚复习所学内容；
3. 说明好处：①记单词更轻松快速；②增强英语学习信心；
4. 结尾用规范邮件落款。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our "Memory Challenge Corner". My biggest memory challenge is remembering new English words. I often forget them quickly and feel upset.
To improve it, I try some useful methods. First, I learn words in groups instead of remembering them one by one. Second, I link new words with my daily life to understand them better. Third, I review what I have learnt every morning and evening.
These ways work well. They help me remember words more easily and quickly. They also make me more confident in learning English. Now I can use words correctly and my English is improving steadily.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达；邮件写作；话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，选择词汇挑战，方法具体可行，好处明确，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合邮件格式，要点齐全，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一封介绍“Memory Challenge Corner”活动的邮件，需先选定一项记忆挑战（如词汇挑战），再列出三种应对方法，最后说明两点好处，要符合邮件格式，语言简洁，词数约80左右，不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定内容，点明自己的记忆挑战是记英语新单词；
2. 分三点阐述应对方法：①分组记单词而非单个记；②将新单词与日常生活关联；③早晚复习所学内容；
3. 说明好处：①记单词更轻松快速；②增强英语学习信心；
4. 结尾用规范邮件落款。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear that you're interested in our "Memory Challenge Corner". My biggest memory challenge is remembering new English words. I often forget them quickly and feel upset.
To improve it, I try some useful methods. First, I learn words in groups instead of remembering them one by one. Second, I link new words with my daily life to understand them better. Third, I review what I have learnt every morning and evening.
These ways work well. They help me remember words more easily and quickly. They also make me more confident in learning English. Now I can use words correctly and my English is improving steadily.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达；邮件写作；话题表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，选择词汇挑战，方法具体可行，好处明确，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合邮件格式，要点齐全，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.5
