Ⅲ. 书面表达。
假设你校八年级英语组正在举办“社交媒体与我”征文活动,本次征文主题为“社交媒体如何改变我的生活”(How Social Media Changes My Life)。请根据以下要点,用英文写一篇稿件。
1. How does social media help you in daily life?
2. What problem did social media cause you?
3. What is one rule you make to use it wisely?
注意:1. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
2. 行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 100 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How Social Media Changes My Life
Every teenager has a story with social media—here is mine.
假设你校八年级英语组正在举办“社交媒体与我”征文活动,本次征文主题为“社交媒体如何改变我的生活”(How Social Media Changes My Life)。请根据以下要点,用英文写一篇稿件。
1. How does social media help you in daily life?
2. What problem did social media cause you?
3. What is one rule you make to use it wisely?
注意:1. 要点齐全,适当拓展;
2. 行文连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 100 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
How Social Media Changes My Life
Every teenager has a story with social media—here is mine.
答案
One possible version:
Social media helps me in many ways. I can chat with my friends easily. I watch fun videos to learn new things. Sometimes, I can find answers to my difficulties. But social media also causes me some problems. I spend too much time looking at my phone. It makes my eyes tired and I sleep late. Sometimes I even have no time to do my homework! So, I make one rule for myself:Stop using social media at 9 o'clock every night. I put my phone away. This helps me go to bed early and study better. Social media can help us, but we need to use it in the right way.
Social media helps me in many ways. I can chat with my friends easily. I watch fun videos to learn new things. Sometimes, I can find answers to my difficulties. But social media also causes me some problems. I spend too much time looking at my phone. It makes my eyes tired and I sleep late. Sometimes I even have no time to do my homework! So, I make one rule for myself:Stop using social media at 9 o'clock every night. I put my phone away. This helps me go to bed early and study better. Social media can help us, but we need to use it in the right way.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题书面表达题,主题是“社交媒体如何改变我的生活”,需覆盖三个核心要点:社交媒体在日常中的帮助、带来的问题、明智使用的规则。解题思路为:先承接给定开头,第一部分列举社交媒体的益处(如方便交友、学习知识、解决难题);第二部分说明过度使用的困扰(如耗时过长、影响健康和学业);第三部分提出个人制定的使用规则;最后收尾点明合理使用社交媒体的重要性,同时确保行文连贯、语法正确、词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接给定开头,用简单句阐述社交媒体的帮助:如“Social media helps me in many ways. I can chat with my friends easily. I watch fun videos to learn new things. Sometimes, I can find answers to my difficulties.”;2. 接着说明问题:“But social media also causes me some problems. I spend too much time looking at my phone. It makes my eyes tired and I sleep late. Sometimes I even have no time to do my homework!”;3. 再写明智使用的规则:“So, I make one rule for myself: Stop using social media at 9 o'clock every night. I put my phone away. This helps me go to bed early and study better.”;4. 最后收尾点题:“Social media can help us, but we need to use it in the right way.”,全程紧扣要点,语言符合八年级英语水平,词数约100,行文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Social media helps me in many ways. I can chat with my friends easily. I watch fun videos to learn new things. Sometimes, I can find answers to my difficulties. But social media also causes me some problems. I spend too much time looking at my phone. It makes my eyes tired and I sleep late. Sometimes I even have no time to do my homework! So, I make one rule for myself:Stop using social media at 9 o'clock every night. I put my phone away. This helps me go to bed early and study better. Social media can help us, but we need to use it in the right way.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作,要点式书面表达,英语遣词造句
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有要求要点,内容具体充实,逻辑清晰,语言简单规范,符合八年级学生的英语表达水平,通过具体事例体现社交媒体的利弊,规则明确,收尾点明合理使用的意义,行文连贯流畅,符合书面表达的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题为英语话题书面表达题,主题是“社交媒体如何改变我的生活”,需覆盖三个核心要点:社交媒体在日常中的帮助、带来的问题、明智使用的规则。解题思路为:先承接给定开头,第一部分列举社交媒体的益处(如方便交友、学习知识、解决难题);第二部分说明过度使用的困扰(如耗时过长、影响健康和学业);第三部分提出个人制定的使用规则;最后收尾点明合理使用社交媒体的重要性,同时确保行文连贯、语法正确、词数符合要求。
【解析】
写作步骤如下:1. 承接给定开头,用简单句阐述社交媒体的帮助:如“Social media helps me in many ways. I can chat with my friends easily. I watch fun videos to learn new things. Sometimes, I can find answers to my difficulties.”;2. 接着说明问题:“But social media also causes me some problems. I spend too much time looking at my phone. It makes my eyes tired and I sleep late. Sometimes I even have no time to do my homework!”;3. 再写明智使用的规则:“So, I make one rule for myself: Stop using social media at 9 o'clock every night. I put my phone away. This helps me go to bed early and study better.”;4. 最后收尾点题:“Social media can help us, but we need to use it in the right way.”,全程紧扣要点,语言符合八年级英语水平,词数约100,行文连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Social media helps me in many ways. I can chat with my friends easily. I watch fun videos to learn new things. Sometimes, I can find answers to my difficulties. But social media also causes me some problems. I spend too much time looking at my phone. It makes my eyes tired and I sleep late. Sometimes I even have no time to do my homework! So, I make one rule for myself:Stop using social media at 9 o'clock every night. I put my phone away. This helps me go to bed early and study better. Social media can help us, but we need to use it in the right way.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作,要点式书面表达,英语遣词造句
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题,全面覆盖所有要求要点,内容具体充实,逻辑清晰,语言简单规范,符合八年级学生的英语表达水平,通过具体事例体现社交媒体的利弊,规则明确,收尾点明合理使用的意义,行文连贯流畅,符合书面表达的各项要求。
【难度系数】
0.3
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