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第三节 书面表达（共15分）
你校正在举办“珍稀野生动物保护主题展”，请写一篇短文介绍华南虎，内容包括它的基本信息、现有保护措施和同学们能参与的保护行动，以便向参观的同学展示。内容可适当拓展，词数80左右。
Dear classmates, let me introduce the South China tiger at our wildlife protection exhibition.
你校正在举办“珍稀野生动物保护主题展”，请写一篇短文介绍华南虎，内容包括它的基本信息、现有保护措施和同学们能参与的保护行动，以便向参观的同学展示。内容可适当拓展，词数80左右。
Dear classmates, let me introduce the South China tiger at our wildlife protection exhibition.
The South China tiger is a strong, striped and endangered big cat. It has orange-yellow fur
with black stripes, weighs up to 180 kilograms, and can be up to 2.5 metres long. When it comes
to its home, it lives in the mountain forests of southern China. As for food, it mainly feeds on
small mammals like deer. Once, it was in great danger, because it was often hunted for its fur.
Also, human activities like cutting down forests were threatening its survival.
Now, we have taken effective measures to protect it. There is a breeding base in Shaoguan.
Keepers feed baby tigers by hand. What's more, the tiger kindergarten has been set up and
climbing frames are used to train them. Our country has also made laws to stop hunting and
established nature reserves. Thanks to these efforts, the number of South China tigers has grown.
As teenagers, we should tell our friends about the South China tiger's situation. Additionally,
we mustn't buy products made from it. Let's join hands to protect this precious animal!
with black stripes, weighs up to 180 kilograms, and can be up to 2.5 metres long. When it comes
to its home, it lives in the mountain forests of southern China. As for food, it mainly feeds on
small mammals like deer. Once, it was in great danger, because it was often hunted for its fur.
Also, human activities like cutting down forests were threatening its survival.
Now, we have taken effective measures to protect it. There is a breeding base in Shaoguan.
Keepers feed baby tigers by hand. What's more, the tiger kindergarten has been set up and
climbing frames are used to train them. Our country has also made laws to stop hunting and
established nature reserves. Thanks to these efforts, the number of South China tigers has grown.
As teenagers, we should tell our friends about the South China tiger's situation. Additionally,
we mustn't buy products made from it. Let's join hands to protect this precious animal!
答案
Dear classmates, let me introduce the South China tiger at our wildlife protection exhibition.
The South China tiger is a strong, striped and endangered big cat. It has orange-yellow fur
with black stripes, weighs up to 180 kilograms, and can be up to 2.5 metres long. When it comes
to its home, it lives in the mountain forests of southern China. As for food, it mainly feeds on
small mammals like deer. Once, it was in great danger, because it was often hunted for its fur.
Also, human activities like cutting down forests were threatening its survival.
Now, we have taken effective measures to protect it. There is a breeding base in Shaoguan.
Keepers feed baby tigers by hand. What's more, the tiger kindergarten has been set up and
climbing frames are used to train them. Our country has also made laws to stop hunting and
established nature reserves. Thanks to these efforts, the number of South China tigers has grown.
As teenagers, we should tell our friends about the South China tiger's situation. Additionally,
we mustn't buy products made from it. Let's join hands to protect this precious animal!
The South China tiger is a strong, striped and endangered big cat. It has orange-yellow fur
with black stripes, weighs up to 180 kilograms, and can be up to 2.5 metres long. When it comes
to its home, it lives in the mountain forests of southern China. As for food, it mainly feeds on
small mammals like deer. Once, it was in great danger, because it was often hunted for its fur.
Also, human activities like cutting down forests were threatening its survival.
Now, we have taken effective measures to protect it. There is a breeding base in Shaoguan.
Keepers feed baby tigers by hand. What's more, the tiger kindergarten has been set up and
climbing frames are used to train them. Our country has also made laws to stop hunting and
established nature reserves. Thanks to these efforts, the number of South China tigers has grown.
As teenagers, we should tell our friends about the South China tiger's situation. Additionally,
we mustn't buy products made from it. Let's join hands to protect this precious animal!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“珍稀野生动物保护主题展”介绍华南虎，需涵盖三个核心内容：①华南虎的基本信息（外形、栖息地、食性、濒危原因）；②现有保护措施；③同学们可参与的保护行动。写作时需遵循“开头引入→分述要点→结尾呼吁”的结构，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，确保要点完整。
【解析】
1. 开头直接使用题目给定语句；2. 基本信息部分：描述华南虎的外形（带黑色条纹的橙黄色皮毛）、体型数据（体重可达180公斤、体长可达2.5米）、栖息地（中国南方山林）、食性（以鹿等小型哺乳动物为食），并说明其濒危原因（被猎杀取皮、森林砍伐威胁生存）；3. 保护措施部分：提及我国建立的韶关繁育基地、人工喂养幼虎、设置训练设施、相关法律禁止捕猎及建立自然保护区等有效举措；4. 学生行动部分：说明青少年可做的事（向朋友宣传华南虎现状、不购买相关制品），最后发出携手保护的呼吁；5. 整体逻辑连贯，用词准确，符合书面表达规范。
【答案】
Dear classmates, let me introduce the South China tiger at our wildlife protection exhibition.
The South China tiger is a strong, striped and endangered big cat. It has orange-yellow fur
with black stripes, weighs up to 180 kilograms, and can be up to 2.5 metres long. When it comes
to its home, it lives in the mountain forests of southern China. As for food, it mainly feeds on
small mammals like deer. Once, it was in great danger, because it was often hunted for its fur.
Also, human activities like cutting down forests were threatening its survival.
Now, we have taken effective measures to protect it. There is a breeding base in Shaoguan.
Keepers feed baby tigers by hand. What's more, the tiger kindergarten has been set up and
climbing frames are used to train them. Our country has also made laws to stop hunting and
established nature reserves. Thanks to these efforts, the number of South China tigers has grown.
As teenagers, we should tell our friends about the South China tiger's situation. Additionally,
we mustn't buy products made from it. Let's join hands to protect this precious animal!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、珍稀动物话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖华南虎的基本信息、保护措施及学生参与的保护行动，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，用词准确恰当，既符合书面表达的规范，又传递了保护珍稀野生动物的理念，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“珍稀野生动物保护主题展”介绍华南虎，需涵盖三个核心内容：①华南虎的基本信息（外形、栖息地、食性、濒危原因）；②现有保护措施；③同学们可参与的保护行动。写作时需遵循“开头引入→分述要点→结尾呼吁”的结构，语言简洁通顺，符合词数要求，确保要点完整。
【解析】
1. 开头直接使用题目给定语句；2. 基本信息部分：描述华南虎的外形（带黑色条纹的橙黄色皮毛）、体型数据（体重可达180公斤、体长可达2.5米）、栖息地（中国南方山林）、食性（以鹿等小型哺乳动物为食），并说明其濒危原因（被猎杀取皮、森林砍伐威胁生存）；3. 保护措施部分：提及我国建立的韶关繁育基地、人工喂养幼虎、设置训练设施、相关法律禁止捕猎及建立自然保护区等有效举措；4. 学生行动部分：说明青少年可做的事（向朋友宣传华南虎现状、不购买相关制品），最后发出携手保护的呼吁；5. 整体逻辑连贯，用词准确，符合书面表达规范。
【答案】
Dear classmates, let me introduce the South China tiger at our wildlife protection exhibition.
The South China tiger is a strong, striped and endangered big cat. It has orange-yellow fur
with black stripes, weighs up to 180 kilograms, and can be up to 2.5 metres long. When it comes
to its home, it lives in the mountain forests of southern China. As for food, it mainly feeds on
small mammals like deer. Once, it was in great danger, because it was often hunted for its fur.
Also, human activities like cutting down forests were threatening its survival.
Now, we have taken effective measures to protect it. There is a breeding base in Shaoguan.
Keepers feed baby tigers by hand. What's more, the tiger kindergarten has been set up and
climbing frames are used to train them. Our country has also made laws to stop hunting and
established nature reserves. Thanks to these efforts, the number of South China tigers has grown.
As teenagers, we should tell our friends about the South China tiger's situation. Additionally,
we mustn't buy products made from it. Let's join hands to protect this precious animal!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、珍稀动物话题写作、要点式写作
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求，全面覆盖华南虎的基本信息、保护措施及学生参与的保护行动，结构清晰，语言流畅自然，用词准确恰当，既符合书面表达的规范，又传递了保护珍稀野生动物的理念，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
