2 典例赏析
奥运精神不仅是体育竞技中的灯塔，更是我们人生旅途中的宝贵指南。同学们，让我们将奥运精神内化于心，外化于行。请以 “The Olympic Spirit that Has Influenced Me Most” 为题写一篇80~100词的短文。
要点：1. 你理解的奥运精神有哪些？
2. 奥运精神给你的成长带来什么启示？
3. 对你影响最深的奥运精神是什么？它是如何影响你的？
审题指导：
1. 体裁：记叙文 2. 时态：以一般现在时为主 3. 人称：第一人称、第三人称
写作框架：

精彩范文：

The Olympic Spirit that Has Influenced Me Most
The Olympic spirit means friendship, respect and never giving up. It teaches us to work hard and treat others with kindness.
It has taught me that winning isn't everything. What matters most is trying my full best. It helps me realize it's okay to fail as long as I learn from the mistake.
The spirit that influences me most is perseverance. When I meet difficulties in my study, it always encourages me to keep trying and never give up.

【分析】首先审题，确定体裁为记叙文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称结合第一、第三人称；明确写作需涵盖三个要点：①理解的奥运精神；②奥运精神带来的成长启示；③影响最深的奥运精神及具体影响。写作时需紧扣主题，控制词数在80~100之间，结构清晰，逻辑连贯。
【解析】先点明奥运精神的核心内涵（友谊、尊重、永不放弃），再阐述其对自身的成长启示（重在努力而非输赢，失败后要总结学习），最后说明影响最深的是毅力，结合学习中遇到困难时的鼓励，体现奥运精神的实际影响，确保内容紧扣要点且符合词数要求。
【答案】The Olympic Spirit that Has Influenced Me Most
The Olympic spirit means friendship, respect and never giving up. It teaches us to work hard and treat others with kindness.
It has taught me that winning isn't everything. What matters most is trying my full best. It helps me realize it's okay to fail as long as I learn from the mistake.
The spirit that influences me most is perseverance. When I meet difficulties in my study, it always encourages me to keep trying and never give up.
【知识点】英语短文写作；奥运精神英语表达
【点评】范文紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁流畅，符合词数要求，准确传达了奥运精神对自身的积极影响，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.6