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积极参加体育运动可以帮助我们增强自信,塑造健全的人格,也有助于我们实现体育强国之梦。
校英文报 Teen Talk 栏目现面向中学生征文。请你以 “Doing Sports Makes Me ” 为题,写一篇 80~100 词的短文投稿。

要求:1.补全标题;2.短文须包含思维导图中的所有内容;3.重点谈谈运动的重要性以及做运动的建议;4.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
积极参加体育运动可以帮助我们增强自信,塑造健全的人格,也有助于我们实现体育强国之梦。
校英文报 Teen Talk 栏目现面向中学生征文。请你以 “Doing Sports Makes Me ” 为题,写一篇 80~100 词的短文投稿。
要求:1.补全标题;2.短文须包含思维导图中的所有内容;3.重点谈谈运动的重要性以及做运动的建议;4.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
答案
Doing Sports Makes Me Confident
I like different kinds of sports, especially running and playing basketball. I have a good habit of jogging for 30 minutes every morning, and I play basketball with my friends for an hour on weekends.
Doing sports builds up our body, reduces our study pressure and makes us more confident, which is really good for both our physical and mental health. I advise everyone to choose sports you truly like, keep exercising regularly, and warm up before sports to avoid getting hurt.
I like different kinds of sports, especially running and playing basketball. I have a good habit of jogging for 30 minutes every morning, and I play basketball with my friends for an hour on weekends.
Doing sports builds up our body, reduces our study pressure and makes us more confident, which is really good for both our physical and mental health. I advise everyone to choose sports you truly like, keep exercising regularly, and warm up before sports to avoid getting hurt.
解析
【分析】首先需补全标题,结合主题选择合适的形容词(如Confident);写作时要覆盖思维导图的四个要点:喜欢的运动、运动习惯、运动的重要性、运动建议;需控制字数在80-100词,避免真实姓名和学校,结构清晰,先介绍个人运动相关情况,再阐述重要性,最后给出建议。
【解析】1. 补全标题为“Doing Sports Makes Me Confident”;2. 介绍喜欢的运动:跑步和篮球;3. 说明运动习惯:每天慢跑30分钟,周末和朋友打1小时篮球;4. 阐述重要性:增强体质、减轻学习压力、提升自信,有益身心健康;5. 给出建议:选喜欢的运动、规律锻炼、运动前热身防受伤。
【答案】Doing Sports Makes Me Confident
I like different kinds of sports, especially running and playing basketball. I have a good habit of jogging for 30 minutes every morning, and I play basketball with my friends for an hour on weekends.
Doing sports builds up our body, reduces our study pressure and makes us more confident, which is really good for both our physical and mental health. I advise everyone to choose sports you truly like, keep exercising regularly, and warm up before sports to avoid getting hurt.
【知识点】英语话题作文;应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题,补全标题合理,覆盖思维导图所有内容,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合字数要求,准确表达核心内容,符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 补全标题为“Doing Sports Makes Me Confident”;2. 介绍喜欢的运动:跑步和篮球;3. 说明运动习惯:每天慢跑30分钟,周末和朋友打1小时篮球;4. 阐述重要性:增强体质、减轻学习压力、提升自信,有益身心健康;5. 给出建议:选喜欢的运动、规律锻炼、运动前热身防受伤。
【答案】Doing Sports Makes Me Confident
I like different kinds of sports, especially running and playing basketball. I have a good habit of jogging for 30 minutes every morning, and I play basketball with my friends for an hour on weekends.
Doing sports builds up our body, reduces our study pressure and makes us more confident, which is really good for both our physical and mental health. I advise everyone to choose sports you truly like, keep exercising regularly, and warm up before sports to avoid getting hurt.
【知识点】英语话题作文;应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题,补全标题合理,覆盖思维导图所有内容,结构清晰,语言通顺,符合字数要求,准确表达核心内容,符合征文要求。
【难度系数】0.6
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