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一、写作“不同国家的礼仪习俗”类短文参考短语
1. shake hands
2. kiss cheeks
3. rub noses
4. bump fists
5. press palms
6. sit up
7. keep ... off
8. serving chopsticks
9. be used to
10. go a long way
11. hear from
12. arrive on time
二、写作“不同国家的礼仪习俗”类短文参考句式
1. I will tell you something about Chinese customs.
2. Before you come, you should know about table manners in our country.
3. When you're eating at the table, it's
impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food.
4. It's polite to accept it when the host adds food to your plate or bowl.
5. Don't point at anyone with your chopsticks.
6. If you are invited by a Chinese family, it is good to bring a small gift, such as some flowers or fruit.
7. I hope this is helpful.
8. Anyhow, different cultures have different customs.
三、写作“不同国家的礼仪习俗”类短文参考模板
I'm so glad you're coming to ... !
Firstly, you should ... when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at ... Besides, if you are going to a party, you should ... What's more, you shouldn't ...
I'm sure that you'll enjoy ...
典例观摩
假如你是赵凯，你的美国笔友Paul将来中国度假。他发电子邮件向你请教中国的礼仪。请你根据以下提示，给Paul回一封电子邮件。
提示:1.初次见面时要握手;2.就餐时不要用筷子指人;3.赴宴时要按时到或早到一会儿;4.不要把钟表作为礼物送人。
要求:80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Paul,
I'm glad that you'll spend your holiday in China. Here are some things you need to know when you stay in China.
Yours,
Zhao Kai
范文欣赏
Dear Paul,
I'm glad that you'll spend your holiday in China. Here are some things you need to know when you stay in China.
Firstly, you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. Besides, if you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. What's more, you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Zhao Kai
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求,运用所学词汇和句式,有条理地对中国礼仪进行了详细的描述,结尾用谚语点题更是点睛之笔。连接词和句式的使用使文章前后连贯,语句流畅,体现了作者良好的写作功底。
·亮点词汇:shake hands, point at, arrive on time等。
·高分句式:
1. It's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. (It's +adj.+to do sth句型)
2. If you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. (if引导条件状语从句)
3. I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China. (that引导宾语从句)
一、写作“不同国家的礼仪习俗”类短文参考短语
1. shake hands
2. kiss cheeks
3. rub noses
4. bump fists
5. press palms
6. sit up
7. keep ... off
8. serving chopsticks
9. be used to
10. go a long way
11. hear from
12. arrive on time
二、写作“不同国家的礼仪习俗”类短文参考句式
1. I will tell you something about Chinese customs.
2. Before you come, you should know about table manners in our country.
3. When you're eating at the table, it's
impolite to stick your chopsticks into your food.
4. It's polite to accept it when the host adds food to your plate or bowl.
5. Don't point at anyone with your chopsticks.
6. If you are invited by a Chinese family, it is good to bring a small gift, such as some flowers or fruit.
7. I hope this is helpful.
8. Anyhow, different cultures have different customs.
三、写作“不同国家的礼仪习俗”类短文参考模板
I'm so glad you're coming to ... !
Firstly, you should ... when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at ... Besides, if you are going to a party, you should ... What's more, you shouldn't ...
I'm sure that you'll enjoy ...
典例观摩
假如你是赵凯，你的美国笔友Paul将来中国度假。他发电子邮件向你请教中国的礼仪。请你根据以下提示，给Paul回一封电子邮件。
提示:1.初次见面时要握手;2.就餐时不要用筷子指人;3.赴宴时要按时到或早到一会儿;4.不要把钟表作为礼物送人。
要求:80词左右(邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Paul,
I'm glad that you'll spend your holiday in China. Here are some things you need to know when you stay in China.
Yours,
Zhao Kai
范文欣赏
Dear Paul,
I'm glad that you'll spend your holiday in China. Here are some things you need to know when you stay in China.
Firstly, you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. Besides, if you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. What's more, you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China.
Yours,
Zhao Kai
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求,运用所学词汇和句式,有条理地对中国礼仪进行了详细的描述,结尾用谚语点题更是点睛之笔。连接词和句式的使用使文章前后连贯,语句流畅,体现了作者良好的写作功底。
·亮点词汇:shake hands, point at, arrive on time等。
·高分句式:
1. It's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. (It's +adj.+to do sth句型)
2. If you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. (if引导条件状语从句)
3. I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China. (that引导宾语从句)
答案
Firstly, you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. Besides, if you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. What's more, you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求给美国笔友Paul写邮件介绍中国礼仪。解题思路：1. 明确邮件格式（开头、结尾已给出，仅需补写中间主体内容）；2. 紧扣题目给出的4个提示要点（初次见面握手、就餐不用筷子指人、赴宴按时/早到、不送钟）；3. 使用参考短语（如shake hands、arrive on time）和常用句式（如It's + adj. + to do sth.），搭配连接词（firstly、secondly等）让文章条理清晰；4. 结尾用合适的谚语点题，再加上祝福句，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头的提示句，用firstly引出初次见面的礼仪：you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time；接着用secondly讲就餐礼仪，运用参考句式It's not polite to...表达：it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks；然后用besides说明赴宴的时间要求：you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier；再用what's more补充送礼禁忌：you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts；最后加入谚语“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”点题，再用祝福句收尾，完成邮件主体内容，符合所有要求。
【答案】
Firstly, you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. Besides, if you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. What's more, you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、礼仪类英语表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，连接词使用恰当，句式丰富多样，结尾谚语升华主题，符合邮件写作的规范，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求给美国笔友Paul写邮件介绍中国礼仪。解题思路：1. 明确邮件格式（开头、结尾已给出，仅需补写中间主体内容）；2. 紧扣题目给出的4个提示要点（初次见面握手、就餐不用筷子指人、赴宴按时/早到、不送钟）；3. 使用参考短语（如shake hands、arrive on time）和常用句式（如It's + adj. + to do sth.），搭配连接词（firstly、secondly等）让文章条理清晰；4. 结尾用合适的谚语点题，再加上祝福句，控制词数在要求范围内。
【解析】
写作时，先承接开头的提示句，用firstly引出初次见面的礼仪：you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time；接着用secondly讲就餐礼仪，运用参考句式It's not polite to...表达：it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks；然后用besides说明赴宴的时间要求：you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier；再用what's more补充送礼禁忌：you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts；最后加入谚语“When in Rome, do as the Romans do.”点题，再用祝福句收尾，完成邮件主体内容，符合所有要求。
【答案】
Firstly, you should shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, when you eat dinner, it's not polite to point at others with your chopsticks. Besides, if you are going to a party, you should arrive on time, or a few minutes earlier. What's more, you shouldn't give clocks to your friends as gifts.
When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
I'm sure that you'll enjoy your stay in China.
【知识点】
英语邮件写作、礼仪类英语表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，连接词使用恰当，句式丰富多样，结尾谚语升华主题，符合邮件写作的规范，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.4
