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俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前，先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据所学的关于英国的习俗和历史，写一篇短文，投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物上。
提示:1.第一次见面通常握手;跟年长的人说话要用Mr和Mrs;
2.在茶会(tea party)上可以喝茶、咖啡或果汁；
3.拜访别人时最好带一个小礼物,比如鲜花或一盒糖果;
4.在公共场合不要大声说话。
要求:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about
its customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
The golden rule is: Watch what every-
one else does. Do as they do.
俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前，先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据所学的关于英国的习俗和历史，写一篇短文，投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物上。
提示:1.第一次见面通常握手;跟年长的人说话要用Mr和Mrs;
2.在茶会(tea party)上可以喝茶、咖啡或果汁；
3.拜访别人时最好带一个小礼物,比如鲜花或一盒糖果;
4.在公共场合不要大声说话。
要求:80词左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about
its customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
The golden rule is: Watch what every-
one else does. Do as they do.
答案
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【高分范文】
Before we go to another country, it is
necessary for us to learn something about its
customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
We usually shake hands when we meet
for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs
when we talk with older people. Besides, we
can drink tea, coffee or juice at a tea party.
What's more, when we're going to visit
someone, we'd better bring a small gift, like
flowers or a box of sweets. When we are in
Britain, we are not expected to talk loudly in
public. And we are supposed to stand in a line
when we wait for buses or trains.
The golden rule is: Watch what everyone
else does. Do as they do.
【高分范文】
Before we go to another country, it is
necessary for us to learn something about its
customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
We usually shake hands when we meet
for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs
when we talk with older people. Besides, we
can drink tea, coffee or juice at a tea party.
What's more, when we're going to visit
someone, we'd better bring a small gift, like
flowers or a box of sweets. When we are in
Britain, we are not expected to talk loudly in
public. And we are supposed to stand in a line
when we wait for buses or trains.
The golden rule is: Watch what everyone
else does. Do as they do.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求结合给定的英国习俗提示，完成一篇关于英国社交礼仪的短文，开头和结尾已固定。解题思路为：先承接开头引出英国的习俗，再依次将提示的4个要点（首次见面礼仪、茶会礼仪、拜访礼仪、公共场合礼仪）用连贯的英语句子串联，使用合适的连接词（如besides、what's more）使文章流畅，注意时态用一般现在时，用词准确，控制字数在要求范围内，最后衔接给定的结尾。
【解析】1. 承接开头引出英国的习俗；2. 介绍首次见面礼仪：We usually shake hands when we meet for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs when we talk with older people；3. 介绍茶会礼仪：Besides, we can drink tea, coffee or juice at a tea party；4. 介绍拜访礼仪：What's more, when we're going to visit someone, we'd better bring a small gift, like flowers or a box of sweets；5. 介绍公共场合礼仪：When we are in Britain, we are not expected to talk loudly in public；6. 用连接词串联内容，最后衔接给定的结尾，确保文章连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
We usually shake hands when we meet for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs when we talk with older people. Besides, we can drink tea, coffee or juice at a tea party. What's more, when we're going to visit someone, we'd better bring a small gift, like flowers or a box of sweets. When we are in Britain, we are not expected to talk loudly in public. And we are supposed to stand in a line when we wait for buses or trains.
The golden rule is: Watch what everyone else does. Do as they do.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英国社交习俗、英语语句连贯表达
【点评】本题将跨文化交际知识与英语写作能力相结合，既考查学生对英国基本社交礼仪的掌握，又考查英语语言的组织运用能力，有助于培养学生的跨文化意识，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 承接开头引出英国的习俗；2. 介绍首次见面礼仪：We usually shake hands when we meet for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs when we talk with older people；3. 介绍茶会礼仪：Besides, we can drink tea, coffee or juice at a tea party；4. 介绍拜访礼仪：What's more, when we're going to visit someone, we'd better bring a small gift, like flowers or a box of sweets；5. 介绍公共场合礼仪：When we are in Britain, we are not expected to talk loudly in public；6. 用连接词串联内容，最后衔接给定的结尾，确保文章连贯、符合字数要求。
【答案】Before we go to another country, it is necessary for us to learn something about its customs and history. Take Britain as an example.
We usually shake hands when we meet for the first time. We should say Mr and Mrs when we talk with older people. Besides, we can drink tea, coffee or juice at a tea party. What's more, when we're going to visit someone, we'd better bring a small gift, like flowers or a box of sweets. When we are in Britain, we are not expected to talk loudly in public. And we are supposed to stand in a line when we wait for buses or trains.
The golden rule is: Watch what everyone else does. Do as they do.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英国社交习俗、英语语句连贯表达
【点评】本题将跨文化交际知识与英语写作能力相结合，既考查学生对英国基本社交礼仪的掌握，又考查英语语言的组织运用能力，有助于培养学生的跨文化意识，符合英语学科核心素养的培养要求。
【难度系数】0.5
