九、书面表达
让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以“My volunteer work plan”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。

要求:
1. 可选择表格中的1~2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,词数90左右;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等信息。
My volunteer work plan
让青少年利用课余时间参加志愿者服务活动对其成长具有重要意义,可以帮助他们学习新技能,增强沟通能力和社会责任感。暑假将至,请根据下面表格中的内容提示,以“My volunteer work plan”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你选择的活动项目及活动计划,并谈谈参加志愿者服务活动的意义。
要求:
1. 可选择表格中的1~2个活动项目,也可自拟活动项目;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,词数90左右;
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名、地名等信息。
My volunteer work plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more people to join me. We will pick up the litter and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit sick kids in the hospital. I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.
答案
九、One possible version:
My volunteer work plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going
to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean
up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more
people to join me. We will pick up the litter
and other waste things. I hope our city will be
more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit
sick kids in the hospital. I love children and
enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the
kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I
hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other
people, but also I get to spend time doing what
I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in
the summer holiday.
My volunteer work plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going
to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean
up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more
people to join me. We will pick up the litter
and other waste things. I hope our city will be
more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit
sick kids in the hospital. I love children and
enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the
kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I
hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other
people, but also I get to spend time doing what
I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in
the summer holiday.
解析
【分析】
首先,我们要明确这篇书面表达的核心要求:以“My volunteer work plan”为题,介绍暑假志愿活动的选择、具体计划,并阐述活动意义,词数控制在90左右,可选取表格内1-2项活动或自拟活动。
解题思路分三步:
1. 开篇引入:点明暑假即将到来,表达自己要参与志愿活动的意愿,快速切入主题。
2. 主体内容:选定1-2个志愿活动,比如表格里的清理城市公园、医院帮扶患儿,详细描述具体的活动计划,内容要贴合实际、具体可操作。
3. 结尾升华:阐述参与志愿活动的意义,呼应题目中“志愿活动对青少年成长有重要意义”的要点,同时收束全文。
时态上,因为是未来的计划,主要使用一般将来时(be going to/will结构),同时要注意语句通顺连贯,避免出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇:用“The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work.”简洁引入,清晰点明主题,符合应用文的开篇要求。
2. 主体部分:
选择“clean up the city parks”,补充细节“I will ask more people to join me. We will pick up the litter and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful.”,让活动计划更具体,有可操作性。
再选择“do volunteer work in a hospital”(帮扶患病儿童),结合自身特点“I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon.”,使内容更真实生动。
3. 结尾:用“Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.”总结志愿活动的意义,既呼应题目要求,也升华了主题,同时符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My volunteer work plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going
to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean
up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more
people to join me. We will pick up the litter
and other waste things. I hope our city will be
more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit
sick kids in the hospital. I love children and
enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the
kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I
hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other
people, but also I get to spend time doing what
I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in
the summer holiday.
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 志愿活动类表达
3. 英语应用文写作
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰,开篇引入自然,主体部分选取两个志愿活动,计划内容具体真实,结尾准确阐述了志愿活动的意义,完全符合题目要求。语言通顺流畅,用词恰当,时态使用正确,词数也符合要求,是一篇优秀的志愿计划类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先,我们要明确这篇书面表达的核心要求:以“My volunteer work plan”为题,介绍暑假志愿活动的选择、具体计划,并阐述活动意义,词数控制在90左右,可选取表格内1-2项活动或自拟活动。
解题思路分三步:
1. 开篇引入:点明暑假即将到来,表达自己要参与志愿活动的意愿,快速切入主题。
2. 主体内容:选定1-2个志愿活动,比如表格里的清理城市公园、医院帮扶患儿,详细描述具体的活动计划,内容要贴合实际、具体可操作。
3. 结尾升华:阐述参与志愿活动的意义,呼应题目中“志愿活动对青少年成长有重要意义”的要点,同时收束全文。
时态上,因为是未来的计划,主要使用一般将来时(be going to/will结构),同时要注意语句通顺连贯,避免出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
【解析】
1. 开篇:用“The summer holiday is coming. I am going to do some volunteer work.”简洁引入,清晰点明主题,符合应用文的开篇要求。
2. 主体部分:
选择“clean up the city parks”,补充细节“I will ask more people to join me. We will pick up the litter and other waste things. I hope our city will be more beautiful.”,让活动计划更具体,有可操作性。
再选择“do volunteer work in a hospital”(帮扶患病儿童),结合自身特点“I love children and enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I hope they can be better soon.”,使内容更真实生动。
3. 结尾:用“Not only do I feel good about helping other people, but also I get to spend time doing what I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in the summer holiday.”总结志愿活动的意义,既呼应题目要求,也升华了主题,同时符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My volunteer work plan
The summer holiday is coming. I am going
to do some volunteer work. I will help to clean
up the city parks. Of course, I will ask more
people to join me. We will pick up the litter
and other waste things. I hope our city will be
more beautiful. Besides, I am going to visit
sick kids in the hospital. I love children and
enjoy getting along with them. I will sing to the
kids at the city hospital to cheer them up. I
hope they can be better soon.
Not only do I feel good about helping other
people, but also I get to spend time doing what
I love to do. All in all, I will enjoy myself in
the summer holiday.
【知识点】
1. 一般将来时用法
2. 志愿活动类表达
3. 英语应用文写作
【点评】
这篇范文结构清晰,开篇引入自然,主体部分选取两个志愿活动,计划内容具体真实,结尾准确阐述了志愿活动的意义,完全符合题目要求。语言通顺流畅,用词恰当,时态使用正确,词数也符合要求,是一篇优秀的志愿计划类书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
一、完形填空
2024 南京秦淮一模 In Tennessee, you will find a "small society" of 9 women who call themselves "The 9 Nanas". The task of this group is
The 9 women
One day when the ladies got together for a card game, they started missing about the "old days" with MaMaw and PaPaw. They remembered how MaMaw made and sent cakes to families who
So the sisters
"So among the nine of us, we saved about 400 a month and our husbands didn't
And so, the "small society" of the 9 Nanas was born.
1. A. simple B. careful
C. crazy D. dangerous
2. A. report B. question
C. secret D. mistake
3. A. offer B. consider
C. promise D. recommend
4. A. relatives B. ladies
C. neighbours D. husbands
5. A. seldom B. almost C. never D. just
6. A. replied B. decided
C. praised D. doubted
7. A. notice B. produce
C. allow D. support
8. A. Before B. Until
C. Whether D. Whenever
9. A. cool B. single
C. gentle D. wealthy
10. A. said B. spoke
C. told D. explained
2024 南京秦淮一模 In Tennessee, you will find a "small society" of 9 women who call themselves "The 9 Nanas". The task of this group is
A
1—to spread happiness to those in need. The work the 9 women do has been a C
2 for over 30 years. Even their husbands had no idea what the ladies were busy with!The 9 women
B
3 themselves sisters, and have been together since childhood. Several of them were raised by MaMaw and PaPaw, a couple that were always doing good for the C
4.One day when the ladies got together for a card game, they started missing about the "old days" with MaMaw and PaPaw. They remembered how MaMaw made and sent cakes to families who
D
5 lost someone. She didn't have to know them. If MaMaw read about a death in the newspaper, she would at once go to the kitchen.So the sisters
B
6 that they should start doing good for their community too. They knew they needed money. And that's when they planned to wash their own clothes instead of paying for that in order to save money for the good things."So among the nine of us, we saved about 400 a month and our husbands didn't
A
7 anything unusual. Their shirts looked just fine," said one of the sisters.And so, the "small society" of the 9 Nanas was born.
D
8 they heard of someone in need, they'd try their best to help pay a bill for a woman who lost her husband or buy new clothes for the children of a B
9 mum. A package would be sent, and would include one of MaMaw's cakes and a note that A
10 "Somebody loves you." These 9 women prove that a small plan can make a big difference.1. A. simple B. careful
C. crazy D. dangerous
2. A. report B. question
C. secret D. mistake
3. A. offer B. consider
C. promise D. recommend
4. A. relatives B. ladies
C. neighbours D. husbands
5. A. seldom B. almost C. never D. just
6. A. replied B. decided
C. praised D. doubted
7. A. notice B. produce
C. allow D. support
8. A. Before B. Until
C. Whether D. Whenever
9. A. cool B. single
C. gentle D. wealthy
10. A. said B. spoke
C. told D. explained
答案
【语篇导读】本文介绍了一个由九位女性
组成的团体,她们通过帮助有需要的人
来传递快乐。
1. A 提示:simple简单的;careful小心的;crazy
疯狂的;dangerous危险的。句意:这个团体的
任务很简单——将快乐传递给需要帮助
的人。
2. C 提示:report报告;question问题;secret秘
密;mistake错误。根据下文"Even their husbands
had no idea what the ladies were busy with!"可
知,三十多年来这九位女性所做的工作一直
是个秘密。
3. B 提示:offer提供;consider考虑;认为;
promise承诺;recommend推荐。句意:这九位
女性认为她们是姐妹,她们自童年时就在
一起。
4. C 提示:relative亲戚;lady女士;neighbour
邻居;husband丈夫。根据下文"they should
start doing good for their community too"可知,
这对夫妇总是为邻居做好事。
5. D 提示:seldom很少;almost几乎;never从
不;just恰好,正好。句意:她们记得阿妈是如
何制作蛋糕,并把蛋糕送给刚刚失去亲人的
家庭的。
6. B 提示:reply回答;decide决定;praise赞
扬;doubt怀疑。句意:于是姐妹们决定,她们
也应该开始为社区做点好事。
7. A 提示:notice注意;produce生产;allow允
许;support支持。句意:……我们一个月省下
大约400美元,我们的丈夫也没注意到什么
不寻常的事情。
8. D 提示:before在……之前;until直到;
whether是否;whenever每当,无论何时。句
意:无论何时她们听说有人需要帮助,她们会
尽最大努力帮助失去丈夫的妇女支付账
单……
9. B 提示:cool酷的;single单身的;gentle温
柔的;wealthy富有的。从上文可知,这帮姐妹
们帮助的都是需要帮助之人,由此推断,她们
是给单亲母亲的孩子买衣服。
10. A 提示:say说;speak说话;tell告诉;
explain解释。句意:她们会寄去一个包裹,
里面会有一个阿妈做的那样的蛋糕和一张
纸条,上面写着"有人爱你。"
组成的团体,她们通过帮助有需要的人
来传递快乐。
1. A 提示:simple简单的;careful小心的;crazy
疯狂的;dangerous危险的。句意:这个团体的
任务很简单——将快乐传递给需要帮助
的人。
2. C 提示:report报告;question问题;secret秘
密;mistake错误。根据下文"Even their husbands
had no idea what the ladies were busy with!"可
知,三十多年来这九位女性所做的工作一直
是个秘密。
3. B 提示:offer提供;consider考虑;认为;
promise承诺;recommend推荐。句意:这九位
女性认为她们是姐妹,她们自童年时就在
一起。
4. C 提示:relative亲戚;lady女士;neighbour
邻居;husband丈夫。根据下文"they should
start doing good for their community too"可知,
这对夫妇总是为邻居做好事。
5. D 提示:seldom很少;almost几乎;never从
不;just恰好,正好。句意:她们记得阿妈是如
何制作蛋糕,并把蛋糕送给刚刚失去亲人的
家庭的。
6. B 提示:reply回答;decide决定;praise赞
扬;doubt怀疑。句意:于是姐妹们决定,她们
也应该开始为社区做点好事。
7. A 提示:notice注意;produce生产;allow允
许;support支持。句意:……我们一个月省下
大约400美元,我们的丈夫也没注意到什么
不寻常的事情。
8. D 提示:before在……之前;until直到;
whether是否;whenever每当,无论何时。句
意:无论何时她们听说有人需要帮助,她们会
尽最大努力帮助失去丈夫的妇女支付账
单……
9. B 提示:cool酷的;single单身的;gentle温
柔的;wealthy富有的。从上文可知,这帮姐妹
们帮助的都是需要帮助之人,由此推断,她们
是给单亲母亲的孩子买衣服。
10. A 提示:say说;speak说话;tell告诉;
explain解释。句意:她们会寄去一个包裹,
里面会有一个阿妈做的那样的蛋糕和一张
纸条,上面写着"有人爱你。"
解析
【分析】
首先,我们需要先通读全文,了解文章主旨:本文讲述了9位女性组成“The 9 Nanas”团体,传承长辈的善意,默默帮助社区有需要的人的故事。接下来逐个解题时,要结合上下文语境、词义辨析来判断:
1. 第1空:根据破折号后“to spread happiness to those in need”可知,这个团体的任务内容明确且不复杂,应选表示“简单的”选项。
2. 第2空:根据后文“Even their husbands had no idea what the ladies were busy with!”可知,她们做的事连丈夫都不知道,所以是一个“秘密”。
3. 第3空:根据“have been together since childhood”,她们从小一起长大,彼此“认为”是姐妹,结合选项词义判断。
4. 第4空:根据后文“they should start doing good for their community too”,可知长辈是为“社区里的邻居”做好事,她们以此为榜样。
5. 第5空:结合语境,MaMaw给刚失去亲人的家庭送蛋糕,“just”表示“刚刚”,符合语境。
6. 第6空:回忆起长辈的善举后,她们“决定”自己也为社区做好事,从选项词义里选表示“决定”的词。
7. 第7空:她们自己洗衣服省钱,丈夫没“注意到”异常,因为衣服看起来还是好的,所以选“注意”相关的词。
8. 第8空:此处表示“无论何时”听说有人需要帮助,她们就会伸出援手,引导时间状语从句的连词选whenever。
9. 第9空:她们帮助的是有需要的人,单亲母亲的孩子属于需要帮助的群体,所以选“single”(单身的,单亲的)。
10. 第10空:纸条上“写着”内容,用say来表示文字内容的“写着、说着”,这是固定用法。
【解析】
1. 第1题:A。simple(简单的);careful(小心的);crazy(疯狂的);dangerous(危险的)。根据破折号后的内容“to spread happiness to those in need”,可知这个团体的任务很简单,故选A。
2. 第2题:C。report(报告);question(问题);secret(秘密);mistake(错误)。由下文“Even their husbands had no idea what the ladies were busy with!”可知,她们的工作连丈夫都不知道,是一个秘密,故选C。
3. 第3题:B。offer(提供);consider(认为);promise(承诺);recommend(推荐)。结合“have been together since childhood”,她们从小一起长大,彼此认为对方是姐妹,“consider sb. sth.”表示“认为某人是……”,故选B。
4. 第4题:C。relatives(亲戚);ladies(女士);neighbours(邻居);husbands(丈夫)。根据后文“they should start doing good for their community too”,可知这对夫妇是为社区里的邻居做好事,她们以此为榜样,故选C。
5. 第5题:D。seldom(很少);almost(几乎);never(从不);just(刚刚)。根据语境,MaMaw给刚刚失去亲人的家庭送蛋糕,“just”符合语境,故选D。
6. 第6题:B。replied(回答);decided(决定);praised(赞扬);doubted(怀疑)。回忆起长辈的善举后,她们决定自己也为社区做好事,故选B。
7. 第7题:A。notice(注意);produce(生产);allow(允许);support(支持)。她们自己洗衣服省钱,丈夫没注意到异常,因为衣服看起来依旧整洁,故选A。
8. 第8题:D。Before(在……之前);Until(直到);Whether(是否);Whenever(无论何时)。此处表示无论何时听说有人需要帮助,她们都会尽力帮忙,whenever引导时间状语从句,符合语境,故选D。
9. 第9题:B。cool(酷的);single(单身的);gentle(温柔的);wealthy(富有的)。她们帮助的是有需要的群体,单亲母亲的孩子需要帮助,“single”表示“单亲的”,故选B。
10. 第10题:A。said(写着,说着);spoke(说话,后常接语言);told(告诉,后接宾语);explained(解释)。表示纸条上的内容“写着”,常用say,故选A。
【答案】
1. A
2. C
3. B
4. C
5. D
6. B
7. A
8. D
9. B
10. A
【知识点】
1. 词义辨析
2. 上下文语境推断
3. 动词用法辨析
【点评】
本文通过讲述9位女性默默传递善意的故事,传递了“小善举也能有大影响”的正能量。解题时需紧密结合上下文语境,准确辨析词汇含义,同时注意动词的固定用法,比如表示文字内容“写着”常用say。同学们在做完形填空时,要先通读全文把握主旨,再逐个分析选项,代入语境验证合理性。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先,我们需要先通读全文,了解文章主旨:本文讲述了9位女性组成“The 9 Nanas”团体,传承长辈的善意,默默帮助社区有需要的人的故事。接下来逐个解题时,要结合上下文语境、词义辨析来判断:
1. 第1空:根据破折号后“to spread happiness to those in need”可知,这个团体的任务内容明确且不复杂,应选表示“简单的”选项。
2. 第2空:根据后文“Even their husbands had no idea what the ladies were busy with!”可知,她们做的事连丈夫都不知道,所以是一个“秘密”。
3. 第3空:根据“have been together since childhood”,她们从小一起长大,彼此“认为”是姐妹,结合选项词义判断。
4. 第4空:根据后文“they should start doing good for their community too”,可知长辈是为“社区里的邻居”做好事,她们以此为榜样。
5. 第5空:结合语境,MaMaw给刚失去亲人的家庭送蛋糕,“just”表示“刚刚”,符合语境。
6. 第6空:回忆起长辈的善举后,她们“决定”自己也为社区做好事,从选项词义里选表示“决定”的词。
7. 第7空:她们自己洗衣服省钱,丈夫没“注意到”异常,因为衣服看起来还是好的,所以选“注意”相关的词。
8. 第8空:此处表示“无论何时”听说有人需要帮助,她们就会伸出援手,引导时间状语从句的连词选whenever。
9. 第9空:她们帮助的是有需要的人,单亲母亲的孩子属于需要帮助的群体,所以选“single”(单身的,单亲的)。
10. 第10空:纸条上“写着”内容,用say来表示文字内容的“写着、说着”,这是固定用法。
【解析】
1. 第1题:A。simple(简单的);careful(小心的);crazy(疯狂的);dangerous(危险的)。根据破折号后的内容“to spread happiness to those in need”,可知这个团体的任务很简单,故选A。
2. 第2题:C。report(报告);question(问题);secret(秘密);mistake(错误)。由下文“Even their husbands had no idea what the ladies were busy with!”可知,她们的工作连丈夫都不知道,是一个秘密,故选C。
3. 第3题:B。offer(提供);consider(认为);promise(承诺);recommend(推荐)。结合“have been together since childhood”,她们从小一起长大,彼此认为对方是姐妹,“consider sb. sth.”表示“认为某人是……”,故选B。
4. 第4题:C。relatives(亲戚);ladies(女士);neighbours(邻居);husbands(丈夫)。根据后文“they should start doing good for their community too”,可知这对夫妇是为社区里的邻居做好事,她们以此为榜样,故选C。
5. 第5题:D。seldom(很少);almost(几乎);never(从不);just(刚刚)。根据语境,MaMaw给刚刚失去亲人的家庭送蛋糕,“just”符合语境,故选D。
6. 第6题:B。replied(回答);decided(决定);praised(赞扬);doubted(怀疑)。回忆起长辈的善举后,她们决定自己也为社区做好事,故选B。
7. 第7题:A。notice(注意);produce(生产);allow(允许);support(支持)。她们自己洗衣服省钱,丈夫没注意到异常,因为衣服看起来依旧整洁,故选A。
8. 第8题:D。Before(在……之前);Until(直到);Whether(是否);Whenever(无论何时)。此处表示无论何时听说有人需要帮助,她们都会尽力帮忙,whenever引导时间状语从句,符合语境,故选D。
9. 第9题:B。cool(酷的);single(单身的);gentle(温柔的);wealthy(富有的)。她们帮助的是有需要的群体,单亲母亲的孩子需要帮助,“single”表示“单亲的”,故选B。
10. 第10题:A。said(写着,说着);spoke(说话,后常接语言);told(告诉,后接宾语);explained(解释)。表示纸条上的内容“写着”,常用say,故选A。
【答案】
1. A
2. C
3. B
4. C
5. D
6. B
7. A
8. D
9. B
10. A
【知识点】
1. 词义辨析
2. 上下文语境推断
3. 动词用法辨析
【点评】
本文通过讲述9位女性默默传递善意的故事,传递了“小善举也能有大影响”的正能量。解题时需紧密结合上下文语境,准确辨析词汇含义,同时注意动词的固定用法,比如表示文字内容“写着”常用say。同学们在做完形填空时,要先通读全文把握主旨,再逐个分析选项,代入语境验证合理性。
【难度系数】
0.6
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