【写作导引】
本单元以“了解自己”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“自我认识、自我管理、自我提升”这一主题群,围绕一些成功人士的例子来支持自己的观点和决定。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①正确看待自己的不同并保持自信;②谈论成功人士如何面对怀疑与恐惧并坚定信心。
【写作任务】
我们已经步入初二了,回想一下小学的自己,你一定在生活和自身方面发现了许多变化。假如你是李华,请以“My Changes”为题,根据下面参考信息,写一篇短文,描述自己在外貌、性格、爱好、习惯、长处方面的变化,在英语课上与同学们交流并分享你的感受。
要求:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考信息:

My Changes
Hello, I’m Li Hua. Now I am a student in Grade 8. Looking back at my life before, I find that I have changed a lot.
本单元以“了解自己”为话题,属于“人与自我”主题范畴中“自我认识、自我管理、自我提升”这一主题群,围绕一些成功人士的例子来支持自己的观点和决定。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及:①正确看待自己的不同并保持自信;②谈论成功人士如何面对怀疑与恐惧并坚定信心。
【写作任务】
我们已经步入初二了,回想一下小学的自己,你一定在生活和自身方面发现了许多变化。假如你是李华,请以“My Changes”为题,根据下面参考信息,写一篇短文,描述自己在外貌、性格、爱好、习惯、长处方面的变化,在英语课上与同学们交流并分享你的感受。
要求:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考信息:
My Changes
Hello, I’m Li Hua. Now I am a student in Grade 8. Looking back at my life before, I find that I have changed a lot.
答案
I used to be short and heavy, but now I am tall and thin. I used to be shy, but now I'm outgoing, friendly and always ready to help others. I now enjoy reading and running instead of only playing games in my childhood. I have developed good habits: I get up early, do my homework first and exercise every day. Now I'm good at running and do well in English. I feel really happy about these great changes.
解析
【分析】
本次写作任务是围绕“自身变化”这一话题,结合给定的外貌、性格、爱好、习惯、长处五个维度,用“used to...but now...”的对比结构描述从小学到初二的变化,开头已给出,最后需表达自身感受,要符合80词左右的要求,语句通顺、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,依次从外貌(对比过去和现在的身高体重)、性格(对比过去和现在的性格特点)、爱好(对比过去和现在的兴趣)、习惯(描述养成的好习惯)、长处(对比过去和现在的优势)五个方面,采用“used to...but now...”的句式体现变化;
2. 结尾表达对这些变化的积极感受,确保内容完整,符合题目要求。
【答案】
I used to be short and heavy, but now I am tall and thin. I used to be shy, but now I'm outgoing, friendly and always ready to help others. I now enjoy reading and running instead of only playing games in my childhood. I have developed good habits: I get up early, do my homework first and exercise every day. Now I'm good at running and do well in English. I feel really happy about these great changes.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、used to结构、形容词运用
【点评】
本文围绕“My Changes”主题,采用对比手法清晰展现了自身在五个方面的变化,结构完整,语句通顺,符合初二英语写作要求,准确传达主题并表达积极感受。
【难度系数】
0.6
本次写作任务是围绕“自身变化”这一话题,结合给定的外貌、性格、爱好、习惯、长处五个维度,用“used to...but now...”的对比结构描述从小学到初二的变化,开头已给出,最后需表达自身感受,要符合80词左右的要求,语句通顺、逻辑清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接开头,依次从外貌(对比过去和现在的身高体重)、性格(对比过去和现在的性格特点)、爱好(对比过去和现在的兴趣)、习惯(描述养成的好习惯)、长处(对比过去和现在的优势)五个方面,采用“used to...but now...”的句式体现变化;
2. 结尾表达对这些变化的积极感受,确保内容完整,符合题目要求。
【答案】
I used to be short and heavy, but now I am tall and thin. I used to be shy, but now I'm outgoing, friendly and always ready to help others. I now enjoy reading and running instead of only playing games in my childhood. I have developed good habits: I get up early, do my homework first and exercise every day. Now I'm good at running and do well in English. I feel really happy about these great changes.
【知识点】
英语话题写作、used to结构、形容词运用
【点评】
本文围绕“My Changes”主题,采用对比手法清晰展现了自身在五个方面的变化,结构完整,语句通顺,符合初二英语写作要求,准确传达主题并表达积极感受。
【难度系数】
0.6
跟踪演练
假如你是李想,你要参加学校举办的“新时代好少年(Model Youngsters in the New Era)”评选活动。请你根据以下内容写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的优点并请求大家的支持。
参考词汇:support 支持
注意:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Good morning, respected teachers and my dear friends. My name is Li Xiang. I’m glad to
Thank you all for listening!
假如你是李想,你要参加学校举办的“新时代好少年(Model Youngsters in the New Era)”评选活动。请你根据以下内容写一篇演讲稿,谈谈你的优点并请求大家的支持。
参考词汇:support 支持
注意:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, respected teachers and my dear friends. My name is Li Xiang. I’m glad to
stand here and share with you the reasons why I can be a model youngster in the new era.
First, I always have a dream. I study hard every day and never give up when I face challenges. Also, I know about art. I enjoy traditional Chinese culture, like calligraphy and paper-cutting. They help me understand our history, and they stand for the beauty of our country. Besides, I am healthy and positive. I love myself and always try to stay happy and active. Please support me!
Thank you all for listening!
答案
写作提优练
跟踪演练
Good morning, respected teachers and my dear friends. My name is Li Xiang. I'm glad to stand here and share with you the reasons why I can be a model youngster in the new era.
First, I always have a dream. I study hard every day and never give up when I face challenges. Also, I know about art. I enjoy traditional Chinese culture, like calligraphy and paper-cutting. They help me understand our history, and they stand for the beauty of our country. Besides, I am healthy and positive. I love myself and always try to stay happy and active. Please support me!
Thank you all for listening!
跟踪演练
Good morning, respected teachers and my dear friends. My name is Li Xiang. I'm glad to stand here and share with you the reasons why I can be a model youngster in the new era.
First, I always have a dream. I study hard every day and never give up when I face challenges. Also, I know about art. I enjoy traditional Chinese culture, like calligraphy and paper-cutting. They help me understand our history, and they stand for the beauty of our country. Besides, I am healthy and positive. I love myself and always try to stay happy and active. Please support me!
Thank you all for listening!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇竞选演讲稿写作题,需围绕“成为新时代好少年”的主题,结合给定的三个核心要点(有梦想、了解艺术、健康积极)完成内容补充,开头和结尾已给出,需确保覆盖所有提示信息,适当拓展细节,最后请求支持,符合词数要求与演讲稿的表达逻辑。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头,点明参加评选的目的,引出下文内容;
2. 围绕“有梦想”展开:说明自己努力学习,面对挑战不放弃,对应提示要点;
3. 围绕“了解艺术”展开:举例享受传统文化(如书法、剪纸),说明其意义,对应提示要点;
4. 围绕“健康积极”展开:说明自己爱自己、保持积极的状态,对应提示要点;
5. 结尾明确请求大家支持,符合演讲稿的表达要求,确保语言通顺、要点完整。
【答案】
Good morning, respected teachers and my dear friends. My name is Li Xiang. I'm glad to stand here and share with you the reasons why I can be a model youngster in the new era.
First, I always have a dream. I study hard every day and never give up when I face challenges. Also, I know about art. I enjoy traditional Chinese culture, like calligraphy and paper-cutting. They help me understand our history, and they stand for the beauty of our country. Besides, I am healthy and positive. I love myself and always try to stay happy and active. Please support me!
Thank you all for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,适当拓展了传统文化的具体例子,语言通顺流畅,符合演讲稿的格式要求,词数达标,是一篇合格的竞选演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇竞选演讲稿写作题,需围绕“成为新时代好少年”的主题,结合给定的三个核心要点(有梦想、了解艺术、健康积极)完成内容补充,开头和结尾已给出,需确保覆盖所有提示信息,适当拓展细节,最后请求支持,符合词数要求与演讲稿的表达逻辑。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头,点明参加评选的目的,引出下文内容;
2. 围绕“有梦想”展开:说明自己努力学习,面对挑战不放弃,对应提示要点;
3. 围绕“了解艺术”展开:举例享受传统文化(如书法、剪纸),说明其意义,对应提示要点;
4. 围绕“健康积极”展开:说明自己爱自己、保持积极的状态,对应提示要点;
5. 结尾明确请求大家支持,符合演讲稿的表达要求,确保语言通顺、要点完整。
【答案】
Good morning, respected teachers and my dear friends. My name is Li Xiang. I'm glad to stand here and share with you the reasons why I can be a model youngster in the new era.
First, I always have a dream. I study hard every day and never give up when I face challenges. Also, I know about art. I enjoy traditional Chinese culture, like calligraphy and paper-cutting. They help me understand our history, and they stand for the beauty of our country. Besides, I am healthy and positive. I love myself and always try to stay happy and active. Please support me!
Thank you all for listening!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、演讲稿写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有提示要点,适当拓展了传统文化的具体例子,语言通顺流畅,符合演讲稿的格式要求,词数达标,是一篇合格的竞选演讲稿。
【难度系数】
0.5
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