六、书面表达。
假如你是John,你和你的朋友Bob、Tom正在不同的地方度假。请你写一篇英语短文,描述你和你的朋友们正在做的事情。

注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello! I'm John. My friends and I are having a holiday in different places. We are doing different things at the moment.
假如你是John,你和你的朋友Bob、Tom正在不同的地方度假。请你写一篇英语短文,描述你和你的朋友们正在做的事情。
注意:1.包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.70词左右(短文开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Hello! I'm John. My friends and I are having a holiday in different places. We are doing different things at the moment.
答案
Hello! I'm John. My friends and I are having a holiday in different places. We are doing different things at the moment. Bob is in Sanya. It's sunny there, so he is swimming in the sea. Tom is in Dali. It's raining now, so he is walking in the rain. I'm in Beijing. It's cloudy, and I'm visiting the Great Wall. We are all happy on holiday.
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求:以John的身份,结合表格中人物、地点、天气、活动的所有要点,用现在进行时写短文,开头已给出,需补全内容,控制词数70左右,可适当发挥。解题思路:先对应表格信息,将Bob、Tom、John各自的信息(地点、天气、活动)用现在进行时组织语言,添加合适连接词使语句通顺,最后补充简单感受,确保覆盖所有要点且符合时态要求。
【解析】1. 对应Bob的信息:Bob在三亚,天气晴朗,活动是游泳,用现在进行时表达为“Bob is in Sanya. It's sunny there, so he is swimming in the sea.”;2. 对应Tom的信息:Tom在大理,天气下雨,活动是雨中漫步,表达为“Tom is in Dali. It's raining now, so he is walking in the rain.”;3. 对应John自己的信息:在北京,天气多云,活动是参观长城,表达为“I'm in Beijing. It's cloudy, and I'm visiting the Great Wall.”;4. 补充简单感受“We are all happy on holiday.”,确保语句连贯,覆盖所有要点,符合词数要求。
【答案】Hello! I'm John. My friends and I are having a holiday in different places. We are doing different things at the moment. Bob is in Sanya. It's sunny there, so he is swimming in the sea. Tom is in Dali. It's raining now, so he is walking in the rain. I'm in Beijing. It's cloudy, and I'm visiting the Great Wall. We are all happy on holiday.
【知识点】英语书面表达、现在进行时运用
【点评】本题考查学生提取表格信息并整合运用的能力,要求正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作,是基础书面表达题型,注重时态与词汇的综合运用。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 对应Bob的信息:Bob在三亚,天气晴朗,活动是游泳,用现在进行时表达为“Bob is in Sanya. It's sunny there, so he is swimming in the sea.”;2. 对应Tom的信息:Tom在大理,天气下雨,活动是雨中漫步,表达为“Tom is in Dali. It's raining now, so he is walking in the rain.”;3. 对应John自己的信息:在北京,天气多云,活动是参观长城,表达为“I'm in Beijing. It's cloudy, and I'm visiting the Great Wall.”;4. 补充简单感受“We are all happy on holiday.”,确保语句连贯,覆盖所有要点,符合词数要求。
【答案】Hello! I'm John. My friends and I are having a holiday in different places. We are doing different things at the moment. Bob is in Sanya. It's sunny there, so he is swimming in the sea. Tom is in Dali. It's raining now, so he is walking in the rain. I'm in Beijing. It's cloudy, and I'm visiting the Great Wall. We are all happy on holiday.
【知识点】英语书面表达、现在进行时运用
【点评】本题考查学生提取表格信息并整合运用的能力,要求正确使用现在进行时描述正在发生的动作,是基础书面表达题型,注重时态与词汇的综合运用。
【难度系数】0.6
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