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六、书面表达(满分20分)
越来越多的游客来泰州游玩,为给游客留下良好的印象,学校英语俱乐部呼吁同学们化身城市小卫士,齐心协力让泰州这座古韵与活力交融的城市绽放更耀眼的光彩!请以"Act for a Better Taizhou"为主题写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:
注意事项:1. 词数:80左右;
2. 内容需涵盖上图所示要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和名字等信息。
Act for a Better Taizhou
Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is "Act for a Better Taizhou".
越来越多的游客来泰州游玩,为给游客留下良好的印象,学校英语俱乐部呼吁同学们化身城市小卫士,齐心协力让泰州这座古韵与活力交融的城市绽放更耀眼的光彩!请以"Act for a Better Taizhou"为主题写一篇英文演讲稿,内容包括:
注意事项:1. 词数:80左右;
2. 内容需涵盖上图所示要点,可适当发挥;
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和名字等信息。
Act for a Better Taizhou
Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is "Act for a Better Taizhou".
What can we do to make our city a better place to live in?
Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What's more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, at weekends we can do some cleaning in our neighbourhood. Besides, we should live a green life. We can ride bikes or walk to schools. Moreover, it's necessary for us to plant more trees.
Let's act to make a difference in a better Taizhou!
Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What's more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, at weekends we can do some cleaning in our neighbourhood. Besides, we should live a green life. We can ride bikes or walk to schools. Moreover, it's necessary for us to plant more trees.
Let's act to make a difference in a better Taizhou!
答案
六、书面表达
【审题指导】
这是一篇应用文,体裁为演讲稿;时态应以一般现在时为主。写作任务是以城市小卫士的身份阐述如何让泰州变得更好,写作需包含图中的要点(公共场所的礼仪、绿色生活、志愿服务……)。内容要逻辑自治,可适当发挥使表述更生动。注意语言风格要自然亲切,且不得出现个人真实姓名和校名,词数控制在80词左右。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 开门见山,引出话题(开头已给出)
第二步 从文明行为、社区志愿、绿色生活等方面阐述如何让泰州变好
第三步 书写结语,呼吁行动
One possible version:
Act for a Better Taizhou
Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is "Act for a Better Taizhou". What can we do to make our city a better place to live in?
Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What's more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, at weekends we can do some cleaning in our neighbourhood. Besides, we should live a green life. We can ride bikes or walk to schools. Moreover, it's necessary for us to plant more trees.
Let's act to make a difference in a better Taizhou!
【审题指导】
这是一篇应用文,体裁为演讲稿;时态应以一般现在时为主。写作任务是以城市小卫士的身份阐述如何让泰州变得更好,写作需包含图中的要点(公共场所的礼仪、绿色生活、志愿服务……)。内容要逻辑自治,可适当发挥使表述更生动。注意语言风格要自然亲切,且不得出现个人真实姓名和校名,词数控制在80词左右。
【写作指导】
步骤 内容
第一步 开门见山,引出话题(开头已给出)
第二步 从文明行为、社区志愿、绿色生活等方面阐述如何让泰州变好
第三步 书写结语,呼吁行动
One possible version:
Act for a Better Taizhou
Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is "Act for a Better Taizhou". What can we do to make our city a better place to live in?
Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What's more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, at weekends we can do some cleaning in our neighbourhood. Besides, we should live a green life. We can ride bikes or walk to schools. Moreover, it's necessary for us to plant more trees.
Let's act to make a difference in a better Taizhou!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇情景类英语演讲稿写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，体裁为演讲稿，语言风格要亲切有号召力，时态以一般现在时为主；第二，必须覆盖题干给出的三个核心要点：公共场合文明礼仪、社区志愿服务、绿色生活方式；第三，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实个人相关信息。思考路径：给定开头已经铺垫好主题，接下来可以用设问自然引出“我们可以为建设更好的泰州做些什么”的话题，之后给三个要点补充合理的生活化细节让内容更充实，最后用简短的呼吁收尾，既符合演讲稿的结构逻辑，也能保证所有给定要点不遗漏。
【解析】
第一步：审题定位
明确写作身份是城市小卫士，写作目的是呼吁同学们共同行动建设更美好的泰州，核心必写三个模块：①公共文明礼仪 ②社区志愿服务 ③绿色生活方式，人称以第一人称we为主，时态选用一般现在时，词数控制在80左右。
第二步：搭建行文框架
1. 承接给定开头，用设问句引出下文的行动倡议；
2. 分三个模块依次展开内容：
公共礼仪部分：举例说明不在公共场所大声喧哗、购物时自觉排队等文明行为；
志愿服务部分：举例说明可以在周末参与社区清扫等志愿活动，服务社区居民；
绿色生活部分：举例说明选择步行/骑行上学、多植树等环保行为；
3. 结尾发出行动号召，收束全文，符合演讲稿的感染力要求。
第三步：完整参考行文
Act for a Better Taizhou
Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is "Act for a Better Taizhou". What can we do to make our city a better place to live in?
Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What's more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, at weekends we can do some cleaning in our neighbourhood. Besides, we should live a green life. We can ride bikes or walk to schools. Moreover, it's necessary for us to plant more trees.
Let's act to make a difference in a better Taizhou!
【答案】
参考范文如上
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，要点类书面表达，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题属于情景应用型书面表达，结合本土城市宣传的真实生活情境，给出的写作提示要点清晰，学生只需要把提示的三个方向补充合理的生活化细节，保证行文逻辑通顺、语言表达准确，符合演讲稿的口语化风格，控制好词数即可拿到不错的分数，同时也引导学生将英语写作和实际生活行动结合起来。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇情景类英语演讲稿写作，解题时首先要明确核心要求：第一，体裁为演讲稿，语言风格要亲切有号召力，时态以一般现在时为主；第二，必须覆盖题干给出的三个核心要点：公共场合文明礼仪、社区志愿服务、绿色生活方式；第三，词数控制在80左右，不能出现真实个人相关信息。思考路径：给定开头已经铺垫好主题，接下来可以用设问自然引出“我们可以为建设更好的泰州做些什么”的话题，之后给三个要点补充合理的生活化细节让内容更充实，最后用简短的呼吁收尾，既符合演讲稿的结构逻辑，也能保证所有给定要点不遗漏。
【解析】
第一步：审题定位
明确写作身份是城市小卫士，写作目的是呼吁同学们共同行动建设更美好的泰州，核心必写三个模块：①公共文明礼仪 ②社区志愿服务 ③绿色生活方式，人称以第一人称we为主，时态选用一般现在时，词数控制在80左右。
第二步：搭建行文框架
1. 承接给定开头，用设问句引出下文的行动倡议；
2. 分三个模块依次展开内容：
公共礼仪部分：举例说明不在公共场所大声喧哗、购物时自觉排队等文明行为；
志愿服务部分：举例说明可以在周末参与社区清扫等志愿活动，服务社区居民；
绿色生活部分：举例说明选择步行/骑行上学、多植树等环保行为；
3. 结尾发出行动号召，收束全文，符合演讲稿的感染力要求。
第三步：完整参考行文
Act for a Better Taizhou
Hello, everyone! Today I will give a speech and the title is "Act for a Better Taizhou". What can we do to make our city a better place to live in?
Good manners play a very important role in social development. We should not talk loudly in public and we should wait in line when we buy things. What's more, we can do some voluntary work to make the community better and better. For example, at weekends we can do some cleaning in our neighbourhood. Besides, we should live a green life. We can ride bikes or walk to schools. Moreover, it's necessary for us to plant more trees.
Let's act to make a difference in a better Taizhou!
【答案】
参考范文如上
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，要点类书面表达，一般现在时应用
【点评】
本题属于情景应用型书面表达，结合本土城市宣传的真实生活情境，给出的写作提示要点清晰，学生只需要把提示的三个方向补充合理的生活化细节，保证行文逻辑通顺、语言表达准确，符合演讲稿的口语化风格，控制好词数即可拿到不错的分数，同时也引导学生将英语写作和实际生活行动结合起来。
【难度系数】
0.7
