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寒假即将来临,为了倡导同学们度过一个健康而充实的假期,21世纪英语学习报开设了题为"Plan for My Winter Holiday"的专栏。请你根据以下图片内容,尝试从三个方面讲述你的寒假生活计划并投稿。不少于80词。
视频学重难
What do you plan to do to keep healthy this winter holiday?
What new clothes do you want for the Spring Festival? Why?
What would you like to do with your lucky money?
How will you plan your study?
Plan for My Winter Holiday
寒假即将来临,为了倡导同学们度过一个健康而充实的假期,21世纪英语学习报开设了题为"Plan for My Winter Holiday"的专栏。请你根据以下图片内容,尝试从三个方面讲述你的寒假生活计划并投稿。不少于80词。
视频学重难
What do you plan to do to keep healthy this winter holiday?
What new clothes do you want for the Spring Festival? Why?
What would you like to do with your lucky money?
How will you plan your study?
Plan for My Winter Holiday
答案
One possible version:
The winter holiday is coming soon. I want to spend it in a healthy and meaningful way. Here is my detailed plan.
First, to keep healthy, I will stick to regular exercise. Every morning, I will go for a 20-minute run in the community. On weekends, I will play badminton with my friends to strengthen my body. I will also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food, and drink enough water every day.
Second, for the Spring Festival, I want a red sweater and a pair of dark blue jeans. Red is a lucky colour in Chinese culture, which stands for joy and good fortune. The sweater is warm and comfortable, and the jeans are easy to match, so they are perfect for the holiday.
Third, I have a proper plan for my lucky money. I will save most of it in the bank for my future study, such as buying reference books. I will use a small part to buy gifts for my parents and grandparents to show my love. Besides, I will donate some money to charity to help people in need.
Finally, I will balance play and study. I will finish my winter homework on time. Every day, I will spend 30 minutes reading English stories and practising writing. I will also review the key knowledge of last term and preview the new lessons for next term to get a head start.
I believe this winter holiday will be enjoyable and rewarding. I am looking forward to it!
The winter holiday is coming soon. I want to spend it in a healthy and meaningful way. Here is my detailed plan.
First, to keep healthy, I will stick to regular exercise. Every morning, I will go for a 20-minute run in the community. On weekends, I will play badminton with my friends to strengthen my body. I will also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food, and drink enough water every day.
Second, for the Spring Festival, I want a red sweater and a pair of dark blue jeans. Red is a lucky colour in Chinese culture, which stands for joy and good fortune. The sweater is warm and comfortable, and the jeans are easy to match, so they are perfect for the holiday.
Third, I have a proper plan for my lucky money. I will save most of it in the bank for my future study, such as buying reference books. I will use a small part to buy gifts for my parents and grandparents to show my love. Besides, I will donate some money to charity to help people in need.
Finally, I will balance play and study. I will finish my winter homework on time. Every day, I will spend 30 minutes reading English stories and practising writing. I will also review the key knowledge of last term and preview the new lessons for next term to get a head start.
I believe this winter holiday will be enjoyable and rewarding. I am looking forward to it!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：这是一篇投稿类话题作文，主题是寒假计划，需要覆盖图片给出的三个核心方向：保持健康、庆祝春节、规划学习，同时还要自然融入题干给出的几个拓展问题，总词数不少于80词。首先第一步先搭建文章的整体逻辑：开头先总起，点明寒假即将到来，自己打算度过一个健康充实的假期，引出后续的具体计划；然后分模块依次展开内容，第一个模块专门写保持健康的具体做法，第二个模块围绕春节展开，把挑选新年衣服的理由、压岁钱的使用规划都融入进去，第三个模块写具体的学习安排；最后收尾表达对假期的期待。写作时注意用first、second这类连接词让逻辑更清晰，内容要贴合中学生的真实生活，避免内容空洞，同时控制好词数，保证没有基础语法错误。
【解析】
写作按照以下规范步骤完成：
步骤1：审题定要素：文体为英语专栏投稿，人称使用第一人称，时态以一般将来时、一般现在时为主，必须覆盖所有指定要点，词数不少于80词。
步骤2：搭建完整行文框架：
① 开篇引入：点明寒假将至，说明自己计划以健康有意义的方式度过假期，总领全文。
② 第一部分（健康计划）：具体说明自己的健康安排，包括每日晨跑、和朋友打球的运动规划，以及多吃蔬果、远离垃圾食品的饮食规划，落实"Keep healthy"的要求。
③ 第二部分（春节安排）：先介绍自己想要的新年衣物，解释红色毛衣对应中国文化里吉祥好运的寓意、牛仔裤舒适百搭的优势；再说明压岁钱的分配方案：大部分存起来用于购置学习资料，小部分给长辈买礼物表心意，部分捐赠给公益帮助有需要的人，覆盖"Celebrate the Spring Festival"的全部相关要点。
④ 第三部分（学习规划）：说明自己会平衡玩乐和学习，按时完成寒假作业，每日安排英语阅读和写作练习，复习上学期重难点、预习下学期新课，落实"Plan your study"的要求。
⑤ 结尾收束：表达对充实愉快的寒假的期待，完成全文。
步骤3：润色语句，调整连接词让行文流畅，检查语法错误，确认词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
The winter holiday is coming soon. I want to spend it in a healthy and meaningful way. Here is my detailed plan.
First, to keep healthy, I will stick to regular exercise. Every morning, I will go for a 20-minute run in the community. On weekends, I will play badminton with my friends to strengthen my body. I will also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food, and drink enough water every day.
Second, for the Spring Festival, I want a red sweater and a pair of dark blue jeans. Red is a lucky colour in Chinese culture, which stands for joy and good fortune. The sweater is warm and comfortable, and the jeans are easy to match, so they are perfect for the holiday.
Third, I have a proper plan for my lucky money. I will save most of it in the bank for my future study, such as buying reference books. I will use a small part to buy gifts for my parents and grandparents to show my love. Besides, I will donate some money to charity to help people in need.
Finally, I will balance play and study. I will finish my winter homework on time. Every day, I will spend 30 minutes reading English stories and practising writing. I will also review the key knowledge of last term and preview the new lessons for next term to get a head start.
I believe this winter holiday will be enjoyable and rewarding. I am looking forward to it!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般将来时运用
话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
这篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干要求的所有要点，逻辑层次清晰分明，用衔接词把健康规划、春节安排、学习计划三个部分自然串联，题干给出的所有拓展问题都被合理融入行文内容中，内容贴合中学生的真实生活，用词地道准确，长短句搭配合理，完全符合英语专栏投稿的写作要求，学生写作时可以参考这种分点阐述的结构，能有效避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：这是一篇投稿类话题作文，主题是寒假计划，需要覆盖图片给出的三个核心方向：保持健康、庆祝春节、规划学习，同时还要自然融入题干给出的几个拓展问题，总词数不少于80词。首先第一步先搭建文章的整体逻辑：开头先总起，点明寒假即将到来，自己打算度过一个健康充实的假期，引出后续的具体计划；然后分模块依次展开内容，第一个模块专门写保持健康的具体做法，第二个模块围绕春节展开，把挑选新年衣服的理由、压岁钱的使用规划都融入进去，第三个模块写具体的学习安排；最后收尾表达对假期的期待。写作时注意用first、second这类连接词让逻辑更清晰，内容要贴合中学生的真实生活，避免内容空洞，同时控制好词数，保证没有基础语法错误。
【解析】
写作按照以下规范步骤完成：
步骤1：审题定要素：文体为英语专栏投稿，人称使用第一人称，时态以一般将来时、一般现在时为主，必须覆盖所有指定要点，词数不少于80词。
步骤2：搭建完整行文框架：
① 开篇引入：点明寒假将至，说明自己计划以健康有意义的方式度过假期，总领全文。
② 第一部分（健康计划）：具体说明自己的健康安排，包括每日晨跑、和朋友打球的运动规划，以及多吃蔬果、远离垃圾食品的饮食规划，落实"Keep healthy"的要求。
③ 第二部分（春节安排）：先介绍自己想要的新年衣物，解释红色毛衣对应中国文化里吉祥好运的寓意、牛仔裤舒适百搭的优势；再说明压岁钱的分配方案：大部分存起来用于购置学习资料，小部分给长辈买礼物表心意，部分捐赠给公益帮助有需要的人，覆盖"Celebrate the Spring Festival"的全部相关要点。
④ 第三部分（学习规划）：说明自己会平衡玩乐和学习，按时完成寒假作业，每日安排英语阅读和写作练习，复习上学期重难点、预习下学期新课，落实"Plan your study"的要求。
⑤ 结尾收束：表达对充实愉快的寒假的期待，完成全文。
步骤3：润色语句，调整连接词让行文流畅，检查语法错误，确认词数达标。
【答案】
One possible version:
The winter holiday is coming soon. I want to spend it in a healthy and meaningful way. Here is my detailed plan.
First, to keep healthy, I will stick to regular exercise. Every morning, I will go for a 20-minute run in the community. On weekends, I will play badminton with my friends to strengthen my body. I will also eat more vegetables and fruit instead of junk food, and drink enough water every day.
Second, for the Spring Festival, I want a red sweater and a pair of dark blue jeans. Red is a lucky colour in Chinese culture, which stands for joy and good fortune. The sweater is warm and comfortable, and the jeans are easy to match, so they are perfect for the holiday.
Third, I have a proper plan for my lucky money. I will save most of it in the bank for my future study, such as buying reference books. I will use a small part to buy gifts for my parents and grandparents to show my love. Besides, I will donate some money to charity to help people in need.
Finally, I will balance play and study. I will finish my winter homework on time. Every day, I will spend 30 minutes reading English stories and practising writing. I will also review the key knowledge of last term and preview the new lessons for next term to get a head start.
I believe this winter holiday will be enjoyable and rewarding. I am looking forward to it!
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作
一般将来时运用
话题作文谋篇布局
【点评】
这篇参考范文完整覆盖了题干要求的所有要点，逻辑层次清晰分明，用衔接词把健康规划、春节安排、学习计划三个部分自然串联，题干给出的所有拓展问题都被合理融入行文内容中，内容贴合中学生的真实生活，用词地道准确，长短句搭配合理，完全符合英语专栏投稿的写作要求，学生写作时可以参考这种分点阐述的结构，能有效避免遗漏得分点。
【难度系数】
0.6
