C(2026·宿迁泗洪期末)
亲爱的同学们,进入初中,你们开启了一段新的旅程。时光飞逝,初中生活的第一个学期即将结束。在这一学期里,你的生活一定很充实。假如你是李华,请你以"Enjoy a Wonderful Life"为题,根据表格提示内容,描述平时你是如何在校内校外度过精彩生活的。

要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;4. 词数 90 左右。
Enjoy a Wonderful Life
Hi, I'm Li Hua. How time flies! As a middle school student, I try my best to make my life wonderful at and after school every day.
I hope all of us can enjoy a wonderful life!
亲爱的同学们,进入初中,你们开启了一段新的旅程。时光飞逝,初中生活的第一个学期即将结束。在这一学期里,你的生活一定很充实。假如你是李华,请你以"Enjoy a Wonderful Life"为题,根据表格提示内容,描述平时你是如何在校内校外度过精彩生活的。
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写工整;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;4. 词数 90 左右。
Enjoy a Wonderful Life
Hi, I'm Li Hua. How time flies! As a middle school student, I try my best to make my life wonderful at and after school every day.
I hope all of us can enjoy a wonderful life!
答案
One possible version:
At school, I have many interesting classes. My favourite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from other countries. I do morning exercises every day to stay energetic, and I also eat healthily to keep fit.
After school, I plan my pocket money carefully to save up for books and help people in need. I enjoy designing clothes. I am also learning about colour matching. Besides, I'm interested in traditional Chinese festivals such as the Spring Festival. On that day, my family and I get together and have a big dinner.
At school, I have many interesting classes. My favourite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from other countries. I do morning exercises every day to stay energetic, and I also eat healthily to keep fit.
After school, I plan my pocket money carefully to save up for books and help people in need. I enjoy designing clothes. I am also learning about colour matching. Besides, I'm interested in traditional Chinese festivals such as the Spring Festival. On that day, my family and I get together and have a big dinner.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题,首先先明确核心要求:主题是描述自己校内外的精彩生活,人称用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主,必须覆盖表格全部6个要点,词数控制在90左右。首先顺着题干已经给出的开头,先写校内板块:先介绍校内有趣的课程,选定一门学科说明喜爱的原因,接着依次写每天做早操保持活力、合理饮食保持健康这两个校内要点;之后自然过渡到校外生活板块,依次对应写零花钱做规划攒钱买书、帮助有需要的人,自己喜欢设计衣服正在学习色彩搭配,再选一个中国传统节日介绍节日当天的活动,最后衔接题干给出的结尾句,适当用简单的衔接词让语句通顺,不要遗漏要点即可。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 承接给定开头,先展开校内生活部分:依次覆盖"多门有趣课程、最爱学科及原因、每日做早操充满活力、合理饮食保健康"全部校内要点,用并列连词衔接内容。
2. 过渡到校外生活部分:依次覆盖"零花钱预算攒钱买书助人、设计衣服学习色彩搭配、喜爱传统节日及对应节日活动"全部校外要点,用衔接词让行文逻辑顺畅。
3. 检查内容是否无遗漏、时态统一、没有出现真实人名校名,词数符合要求,最后衔接题干给出的结尾句。
【答案】
At school, I have many interesting classes. My favourite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from other countries. I do morning exercises every day to stay energetic, and I also eat healthily to keep fit.
After school, I plan my pocket money carefully to save up for books and help people in need. I enjoy designing clothes. I am also learning about colour matching. Besides, I'm interested in traditional Chinese festivals such as the Spring Festival. On that day, my family and I get together and have a big dinner.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,一般现在时运用,要点整合
【点评】
本题是贴合初一学生校园生活的提示类作文,所有核心要点都已经在表格中给出,不需要学生进行大量的创意发挥,只需要准确将要点转化为通顺的英文表达,适当添加简单衔接词理顺逻辑,注意避免基础语法错误,就能完成符合要求的作文,同时题目也引导学生关注自己的日常学习生活,建立健康积极的生活观念。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题,首先先明确核心要求:主题是描述自己校内外的精彩生活,人称用第一人称,时态以一般现在时为主,必须覆盖表格全部6个要点,词数控制在90左右。首先顺着题干已经给出的开头,先写校内板块:先介绍校内有趣的课程,选定一门学科说明喜爱的原因,接着依次写每天做早操保持活力、合理饮食保持健康这两个校内要点;之后自然过渡到校外生活板块,依次对应写零花钱做规划攒钱买书、帮助有需要的人,自己喜欢设计衣服正在学习色彩搭配,再选一个中国传统节日介绍节日当天的活动,最后衔接题干给出的结尾句,适当用简单的衔接词让语句通顺,不要遗漏要点即可。
【解析】
写作步骤:
1. 承接给定开头,先展开校内生活部分:依次覆盖"多门有趣课程、最爱学科及原因、每日做早操充满活力、合理饮食保健康"全部校内要点,用并列连词衔接内容。
2. 过渡到校外生活部分:依次覆盖"零花钱预算攒钱买书助人、设计衣服学习色彩搭配、喜爱传统节日及对应节日活动"全部校外要点,用衔接词让行文逻辑顺畅。
3. 检查内容是否无遗漏、时态统一、没有出现真实人名校名,词数符合要求,最后衔接题干给出的结尾句。
【答案】
At school, I have many interesting classes. My favourite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from other countries. I do morning exercises every day to stay energetic, and I also eat healthily to keep fit.
After school, I plan my pocket money carefully to save up for books and help people in need. I enjoy designing clothes. I am also learning about colour matching. Besides, I'm interested in traditional Chinese festivals such as the Spring Festival. On that day, my family and I get together and have a big dinner.
【知识点】
提纲类英语写作,一般现在时运用,要点整合
【点评】
本题是贴合初一学生校园生活的提示类作文,所有核心要点都已经在表格中给出,不需要学生进行大量的创意发挥,只需要准确将要点转化为通顺的英文表达,适当添加简单衔接词理顺逻辑,注意避免基础语法错误,就能完成符合要求的作文,同时题目也引导学生关注自己的日常学习生活,建立健康积极的生活观念。
【难度系数】
0.7
D
假如你是John,你打算向ABC English杂志投稿,请补全标题并根据下面的内容提示写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,可适当发挥,并谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响。
内容提示:1. What do you usually have for meals? 2. How often do you exercise? 3. How many hours do you sleep every night? 4. What do you think of your living habits?
要求:1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;2. 短文须包括提示里的所有要点,自拟相关内容并适当发挥。
Good Living Habits Make Me
假如你是John,你打算向ABC English杂志投稿,请补全标题并根据下面的内容提示写一篇不少于80词的英语短文,可适当发挥,并谈谈良好的生活习惯对你的积极影响。
内容提示:1. What do you usually have for meals? 2. How often do you exercise? 3. How many hours do you sleep every night? 4. What do you think of your living habits?
要求:1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名;2. 短文须包括提示里的所有要点,自拟相关内容并适当发挥。
Good Living Habits Make Me
答案
One possible version:
Good Living Habits Make Me Happy
I'm John. I'm a middle school student. I think good living habits are important for us.
I have a healthy diet. I usually have milk,eggs and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I often eat meat and vegetables. For dinner, I like eating some fish and fruit.
I exercise for 20 minutes every evening. At weekends, I often play basketball with my friends or go climbing with my family. I sleep for 9 hours every night. A good sleep helps me start a new day.
I think I have good living habits. They make me happy.
Good Living Habits Make Me Happy
I'm John. I'm a middle school student. I think good living habits are important for us.
I have a healthy diet. I usually have milk,eggs and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I often eat meat and vegetables. For dinner, I like eating some fish and fruit.
I exercise for 20 minutes every evening. At weekends, I often play basketball with my friends or go climbing with my family. I sleep for 9 hours every night. A good sleep helps me start a new day.
I think I have good living habits. They make me happy.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语半命题投稿类写作题,解题思路如下:第一步先补全标题,选择贴合主旨的积极类形容词,比如Happy、Healthy都符合要求;第二步搭建行文逻辑框架,开头先做简单自我介绍,点明良好生活习惯的核心主题;第三步按照题干给出的4个提示要点逐一填充内容:先介绍自己一日三餐的具体饮食安排,再说明日常和周末的运动频率,接着介绍每晚的睡眠时长,最后评价自己的生活习惯,补充这类习惯给自己带来的积极影响,适当扩充细节保证字数超过80词,全程注意不要出现真实姓名和学校信息,保证内容通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照以下规范步骤完成:
1. 补全标题:选择褒义形容词Happy填入空白处,确定全文核心主旨为良好生活习惯让自己保持愉悦。
2. 开篇段:自我介绍为John,身份是中学生,开门见山点明良好生活习惯对我们十分重要,总领全文。
3. 主体第一段:对应第一个要点,介绍自己的健康饮食安排:早餐常吃牛奶、鸡蛋和面包,午餐吃肉和蔬菜,晚餐选择鱼和水果,清晰说明三餐的内容。
4. 主体第二段:对应第二、第三个要点,说明运动频率:每晚锻炼20分钟,周末会和朋友打篮球、和家人爬山;同时说明自己每晚睡9小时,补充充足睡眠能帮助自己更好地开启新的一天。
5. 结尾段:对应第四个要点,评价自己的生活习惯十分不错,点明这些习惯让自己保持愉悦,呼应标题,完成全文,所有要点全部覆盖,字数符合要求,没有出现违规的真实个人信息。
【答案】
Good Living Habits Make Me Happy
I'm John. I'm a middle school student. I think good living habits are important for us.
I have a healthy diet. I usually have milk,eggs and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I often eat meat and vegetables. For dinner, I like eating some fish and fruit.
I exercise for 20 minutes every evening. At weekends, I often play basketball with my friends or go climbing with my family. I sleep for 9 hours every night. A good sleep helps me start a new day.
I think I have good living habits. They make me happy.
【知识点】
英语投稿写作
半命题作文补全
要点整合表达
【点评】
本篇习作完全覆盖题干给出的所有提示要点,行文逻辑流畅自然,从饮食、运动、睡眠三个维度清晰介绍了自身的生活习惯,最后点明习惯带来的积极影响,精准呼应标题,用词平实准确,字数达标,没有出现违规的真实个人信息,完全符合投稿写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇英语半命题投稿类写作题,解题思路如下:第一步先补全标题,选择贴合主旨的积极类形容词,比如Happy、Healthy都符合要求;第二步搭建行文逻辑框架,开头先做简单自我介绍,点明良好生活习惯的核心主题;第三步按照题干给出的4个提示要点逐一填充内容:先介绍自己一日三餐的具体饮食安排,再说明日常和周末的运动频率,接着介绍每晚的睡眠时长,最后评价自己的生活习惯,补充这类习惯给自己带来的积极影响,适当扩充细节保证字数超过80词,全程注意不要出现真实姓名和学校信息,保证内容通顺连贯即可。
【解析】
写作可按照以下规范步骤完成:
1. 补全标题:选择褒义形容词Happy填入空白处,确定全文核心主旨为良好生活习惯让自己保持愉悦。
2. 开篇段:自我介绍为John,身份是中学生,开门见山点明良好生活习惯对我们十分重要,总领全文。
3. 主体第一段:对应第一个要点,介绍自己的健康饮食安排:早餐常吃牛奶、鸡蛋和面包,午餐吃肉和蔬菜,晚餐选择鱼和水果,清晰说明三餐的内容。
4. 主体第二段:对应第二、第三个要点,说明运动频率:每晚锻炼20分钟,周末会和朋友打篮球、和家人爬山;同时说明自己每晚睡9小时,补充充足睡眠能帮助自己更好地开启新的一天。
5. 结尾段:对应第四个要点,评价自己的生活习惯十分不错,点明这些习惯让自己保持愉悦,呼应标题,完成全文,所有要点全部覆盖,字数符合要求,没有出现违规的真实个人信息。
【答案】
Good Living Habits Make Me Happy
I'm John. I'm a middle school student. I think good living habits are important for us.
I have a healthy diet. I usually have milk,eggs and bread for breakfast. For lunch, I often eat meat and vegetables. For dinner, I like eating some fish and fruit.
I exercise for 20 minutes every evening. At weekends, I often play basketball with my friends or go climbing with my family. I sleep for 9 hours every night. A good sleep helps me start a new day.
I think I have good living habits. They make me happy.
【知识点】
英语投稿写作
半命题作文补全
要点整合表达
【点评】
本篇习作完全覆盖题干给出的所有提示要点,行文逻辑流畅自然,从饮食、运动、睡眠三个维度清晰介绍了自身的生活习惯,最后点明习惯带来的积极影响,精准呼应标题,用词平实准确,字数达标,没有出现违规的真实个人信息,完全符合投稿写作的要求。
【难度系数】
0.7
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