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六、书面表达。
现在,上网已经变得越来越流行了,很多学生都迷上了网络。你是怎么看待上网的? 请谈谈你的观点。
1. What do you often do online?
2. What do you think of using the Internet?
3. How can you use the Internet correctly?
注意事项:
① 90词左右;
② 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
③ 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
现在,上网已经变得越来越流行了,很多学生都迷上了网络。你是怎么看待上网的? 请谈谈你的观点。
1. What do you often do online?
2. What do you think of using the Internet?
3. How can you use the Internet correctly?
注意事项:
① 90词左右;
② 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
③ 文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
One possible version:
Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most
important parts in people's daily life.
I often use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information
everyday. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer
games on it. It is bad for their health and study. As students, we should know that
study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing
computer games.
答案
六、One possible version:
Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most
important parts in people's daily life.
I often use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information
everyday. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer
games on it. It is bad for their health and study. As students, we should know that
study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing
computer games.
Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most
important parts in people's daily life.
I often use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information
everyday. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer
games on it. It is bad for their health and study. As students, we should know that
study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing
computer games.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确核心要求：要全部覆盖题干给出的三个问题要点，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实个人信息。解题思路可以按三步走：第一，先开篇铺垫当下网络普及的大背景，自然引出话题；第二，依次回应三个指定问题：先说明自己日常上网常做的事，比如查学习资料、发邮件、线上学习这类符合学生身份的行为，再辩证评价上网的利弊，既认可网络的便利性，也点出沉迷网聊、网游对学习和健康的负面影响，最后说明作为学生正确使用网络的做法，明确学习优先、控制上网时长、多参与线下活动，最后把内容串联润色，保证语句连贯通顺，符合词数要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：先点明互联网让沟通更便捷，已经成为人们日常生活的重要组成部分，快速引入话题，符合议论文开篇的逻辑；
2. 回应第一个要点：说明自己日常经常用网络学习、发邮件、搜索信息，清晰交代自己的上网行为；
3. 回应第二个要点：对比部分学生沉迷网聊、玩网游的行为，指出这类行为对健康和学习的坏处，客观表达对上网的辩证看法；
4. 回应第三个要点：明确学生要以学习为先，多花时间做运动而不是玩网游，给出正确使用网络的具体做法，所有要点全部覆盖，调整语句衔接，最终形成符合词数要求的完整短文。
【答案】
Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most important parts in people's daily life.
I often use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information everyday. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer games on it. It is bad for their health and study. As students, we should know that study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing computer games.
【知识点】
观点类英语写作
要点整合表达
日常话题词汇运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干要求的三个核心要点，逻辑层次清晰，从背景引入到个人行为、利弊评价再到正确做法层层递进，内容贴合学生身份，语言表达流畅自然，词数符合90词左右的要求，没有出现任何真实个人隐私信息，适当补充的沉迷网络的危害内容让短文逻辑更通顺完整，完全符合题目的各项评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确核心要求：要全部覆盖题干给出的三个问题要点，词数控制在90左右，不能出现真实个人信息。解题思路可以按三步走：第一，先开篇铺垫当下网络普及的大背景，自然引出话题；第二，依次回应三个指定问题：先说明自己日常上网常做的事，比如查学习资料、发邮件、线上学习这类符合学生身份的行为，再辩证评价上网的利弊，既认可网络的便利性，也点出沉迷网聊、网游对学习和健康的负面影响，最后说明作为学生正确使用网络的做法，明确学习优先、控制上网时长、多参与线下活动，最后把内容串联润色，保证语句连贯通顺，符合词数要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：先点明互联网让沟通更便捷，已经成为人们日常生活的重要组成部分，快速引入话题，符合议论文开篇的逻辑；
2. 回应第一个要点：说明自己日常经常用网络学习、发邮件、搜索信息，清晰交代自己的上网行为；
3. 回应第二个要点：对比部分学生沉迷网聊、玩网游的行为，指出这类行为对健康和学习的坏处，客观表达对上网的辩证看法；
4. 回应第三个要点：明确学生要以学习为先，多花时间做运动而不是玩网游，给出正确使用网络的具体做法，所有要点全部覆盖，调整语句衔接，最终形成符合词数要求的完整短文。
【答案】
Internet has made communication much easier. It has become one of the most important parts in people's daily life.
I often use the Internet to study, send emails and search for information everyday. But many others are crazy about chatting online or playing computer games on it. It is bad for their health and study. As students, we should know that study comes first. And we should spend more time doing sports instead of playing computer games.
【知识点】
观点类英语写作
要点整合表达
日常话题词汇运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干要求的三个核心要点，逻辑层次清晰，从背景引入到个人行为、利弊评价再到正确做法层层递进，内容贴合学生身份，语言表达流畅自然，词数符合90词左右的要求，没有出现任何真实个人隐私信息，适当补充的沉迷网络的危害内容让短文逻辑更通顺完整，完全符合题目的各项评分标准。
【难度系数】
0.7
