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五、书面表达。
在阳光中学的学习交流分享会上,你作为班级代表上台分享自己学习英语的经验和心得。请根据要求用英文完成一篇演说稿。
参考词汇:磁带 tape 记日记 keep a diary
注意:1. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear teachers and students,
I'm very glad to stand here today to share with you some of my ways to be a good English learner.
Thank you!
在阳光中学的学习交流分享会上,你作为班级代表上台分享自己学习英语的经验和心得。请根据要求用英文完成一篇演说稿。
参考词汇:磁带 tape 记日记 keep a diary
注意:1. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear teachers and students,
I'm very glad to stand here today to share with you some of my ways to be a good English learner.
First of all, it is important to make a plan for your English learning. A plan helps you learn step by step, such as deciding how many words to remember each day. Secondly, we should pay attention to the four basic skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Listen to English tapes or watch English videos to improve your listening. Speak English as much as possible in class. Read simple English articles or stories. Keep a diary in English to practice writing. Last but not least, remember that practice makes perfect. The more you practice, the better you will become. I hope my sharing is helpful to all of you. Let's work together and try our best to be good English learners!
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Dear teachers and students,
I'm very glad to stand here today to share with you some of my ways to be a good English learner.
First of all, it is important to make a plan for your English learning. A plan helps you learn step by step, such as deciding how many words to remember each day. Secondly, we should pay attention to the four basic skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Listen to English tapes or watch English videos to improve your listening. Speak English as much as possible in class. Read simple English articles or stories. Keep a diary in English to practice writing. Last but not least, remember that practice makes perfect. The more you practice, the better you will become.
I hope my sharing is helpful to all of you. Let's work together and try our best to be good English learners!
Thank you!
Dear teachers and students,
I'm very glad to stand here today to share with you some of my ways to be a good English learner.
First of all, it is important to make a plan for your English learning. A plan helps you learn step by step, such as deciding how many words to remember each day. Secondly, we should pay attention to the four basic skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Listen to English tapes or watch English videos to improve your listening. Speak English as much as possible in class. Read simple English articles or stories. Keep a diary in English to practice writing. Last but not least, remember that practice makes perfect. The more you practice, the better you will become.
I hope my sharing is helpful to all of you. Let's work together and try our best to be good English learners!
Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题要求撰写一篇关于“成为优秀英语学习者”的英文演说稿，需结合表格中的计划、听说读写建议、熟能生巧的练习要求，使用参考词汇，词数约90，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：① 承接已给的问候语，引出分享英语学习方法的主题；② 分三个核心部分展开：制定学习计划（如每日记单词）、提升听说读写技能（运用参考词汇tape、keep a diary）、强调练习的重要性；③ 结尾总结并发出号召，契合演说稿的文体特点。
【解析】按照题目要求，结合给定要点与参考词汇，分层次写作：1. 开篇承接已给内容，引出分享主题；2. 第一点说明制定学习计划的重要性，举例每日设定记单词的数量；3. 第二点围绕听说读写四项技能，分别给出具体做法：听英语磁带或视频、课上多说英语、读简单英文文章、用英语记日记；4. 第三点点明“熟能生巧”的道理，说明多练习的好处；5. 结尾总结分享内容，发出共同努力的号召，符合演说稿格式。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
I'm very glad to stand here today to share with you some of my ways to be a good English learner.
First of all, it is important to make a plan for your English learning. A plan helps you learn step by step, such as deciding how many words to remember each day. Secondly, we should pay attention to the four basic skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Listen to English tapes or watch English videos to improve your listening. Speak English as much as possible in class. Read simple English articles or stories. Keep a diary in English to practice writing. Last but not least, remember that practice makes perfect. The more you practice, the better you will become.
I hope my sharing is helpful to all of you. Let's work together and try our best to be good English learners!
Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达；英语学习方法；应用文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，合理运用参考词汇，语言通顺自然，符合演说稿的文体要求，是一篇符合标准的初中英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照题目要求，结合给定要点与参考词汇，分层次写作：1. 开篇承接已给内容，引出分享主题；2. 第一点说明制定学习计划的重要性，举例每日设定记单词的数量；3. 第二点围绕听说读写四项技能，分别给出具体做法：听英语磁带或视频、课上多说英语、读简单英文文章、用英语记日记；4. 第三点点明“熟能生巧”的道理，说明多练习的好处；5. 结尾总结分享内容，发出共同努力的号召，符合演说稿格式。
【答案】Dear teachers and students,
I'm very glad to stand here today to share with you some of my ways to be a good English learner.
First of all, it is important to make a plan for your English learning. A plan helps you learn step by step, such as deciding how many words to remember each day. Secondly, we should pay attention to the four basic skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. Listen to English tapes or watch English videos to improve your listening. Speak English as much as possible in class. Read simple English articles or stories. Keep a diary in English to practice writing. Last but not least, remember that practice makes perfect. The more you practice, the better you will become.
I hope my sharing is helpful to all of you. Let's work together and try our best to be good English learners!
Thank you!
【知识点】英语书面表达；英语学习方法；应用文写作
【点评】该作文紧扣主题，结构清晰，全面覆盖题目要求的所有要点，合理运用参考词汇，语言通顺自然，符合演说稿的文体要求，是一篇符合标准的初中英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】0.7
