五、书面表达
假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚好友卡尔来信说想了解中国的传统节日,请根据表格提示给他写一封70词左右的英语短文介绍你最喜欢的节日——中秋节。

Dear Karl,
I am very glad to tell you something about my favourite festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
I hope you can come to China to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with us one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的澳大利亚好友卡尔来信说想了解中国的传统节日,请根据表格提示给他写一封70词左右的英语短文介绍你最喜欢的节日——中秋节。
Dear Karl,
I am very glad to tell you something about my favourite festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
I hope you can come to China to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with us one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Karl,
I am very glad to tell you something about my favourite festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is important in China. It often comes in September or October. On the evening of the day, there is a big family dinner. It's the time for the family to get together. There's a lot of delicious food. After dinner, we usually enjoy the full moon and eat moon cakes. Moon cakes are traditional food with special meanings. They are round and look like the moon. Children like listening to stories about the moon.
I hope you can come to China to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with us one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
I am very glad to tell you something about my favourite festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is important in China. It often comes in September or October. On the evening of the day, there is a big family dinner. It's the time for the family to get together. There's a lot of delicious food. After dinner, we usually enjoy the full moon and eat moon cakes. Moon cakes are traditional food with special meanings. They are round and look like the moon. Children like listening to stories about the moon.
I hope you can come to China to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with us one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份给澳大利亚好友卡尔介绍中国传统节日中秋节。解题思路:首先提取表格中的关键信息(时间:九月或十月;意义:家人团聚的重要节日;传统民俗:家庭聚餐、赏月吃月饼、听月亮故事),再结合这些信息用英语组织连贯的短文,注意符合书信格式、词数要求,补充合理细节让内容自然,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据题目要求,围绕中秋节的核心信息展开写作:先点明节日时间,再说明其作为家人团聚重要节日的意义,接着介绍传统民俗(家庭聚餐、赏月吃月饼、孩子们听月亮故事),补充月饼的相关细节(圆形、像月亮),最后呼应结尾完成短文,确保内容连贯、符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
Dear Karl,
I am very glad to tell you something about my favourite festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is important in China. It often comes in September or October. On the evening of the day, there is a big family dinner. It's the time for the family to get together. There's a lot of delicious food. After dinner, we usually enjoy the full moon and eat moon cakes. Moon cakes are traditional food with special meanings. They are round and look like the moon. Children like listening to stories about the moon.
I hope you can come to China to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with us one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达;节日介绍
【点评】
本题考查学生对中国传统节日的英语写作能力,既要求准确运用英语语言,又需传递节日文化内涵,是常见的英语写作题型,能考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是英语书面表达题,要求以李华的身份给澳大利亚好友卡尔介绍中国传统节日中秋节。解题思路:首先提取表格中的关键信息(时间:九月或十月;意义:家人团聚的重要节日;传统民俗:家庭聚餐、赏月吃月饼、听月亮故事),再结合这些信息用英语组织连贯的短文,注意符合书信格式、词数要求,补充合理细节让内容自然,符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】
根据题目要求,围绕中秋节的核心信息展开写作:先点明节日时间,再说明其作为家人团聚重要节日的意义,接着介绍传统民俗(家庭聚餐、赏月吃月饼、孩子们听月亮故事),补充月饼的相关细节(圆形、像月亮),最后呼应结尾完成短文,确保内容连贯、符合英语表达规范。
【答案】
Dear Karl,
I am very glad to tell you something about my favourite festival, the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is important in China. It often comes in September or October. On the evening of the day, there is a big family dinner. It's the time for the family to get together. There's a lot of delicious food. After dinner, we usually enjoy the full moon and eat moon cakes. Moon cakes are traditional food with special meanings. They are round and look like the moon. Children like listening to stories about the moon.
I hope you can come to China to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival with us one day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达;节日介绍
【点评】
本题考查学生对中国传统节日的英语写作能力,既要求准确运用英语语言,又需传递节日文化内涵,是常见的英语写作题型,能考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
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