四、书面表达
你校英文报刊正在征稿,主题为“The Spirit I Learn from My Favourite Athlete”。请你写一篇短文投稿:
内容必须包含:(1)你最喜欢的运动是什么;(2)你最敬佩的运动员是谁;(3)从他/她身上学到了什么精神品质(如坚持、努力、永不放弃、勇敢面对困难等)。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的个人信息;(2)80-100词,可适当发挥。
【写作思路指导】

【实战演练】
The Spirit I Learn from
My Favourite Athlete
你校英文报刊正在征稿,主题为“The Spirit I Learn from My Favourite Athlete”。请你写一篇短文投稿:
内容必须包含:(1)你最喜欢的运动是什么;(2)你最敬佩的运动员是谁;(3)从他/她身上学到了什么精神品质(如坚持、努力、永不放弃、勇敢面对困难等)。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的个人信息;(2)80-100词,可适当发挥。
【写作思路指导】
【实战演练】
The Spirit I Learn from
My Favourite Athlete
答案
One possible version:
The Spirit I Learn from My Favourite Athlete
My favourite sport is tennis. And the athlete I admire most is Alice, a very talented young tennis player.
She trains really hard every day and keeps improving herself. When she meets strong players or difficult situations, she never feels nervous or gives up easily. She always stays calm and tries her best to fight till the end.
I admire her because of her strong will and love for the sport. From her, I truly learn the spirit of hard work, courage and persistence. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study, I will learn from her and keep moving forward bravely.
(100 words)
The Spirit I Learn from My Favourite Athlete
My favourite sport is tennis. And the athlete I admire most is Alice, a very talented young tennis player.
She trains really hard every day and keeps improving herself. When she meets strong players or difficult situations, she never feels nervous or gives up easily. She always stays calm and tries her best to fight till the end.
I admire her because of her strong will and love for the sport. From her, I truly learn the spirit of hard work, courage and persistence. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study, I will learn from her and keep moving forward bravely.
(100 words)
解析
【分析】本题为英语主题书面表达,需围绕“从最喜爱的运动员身上学到的精神”展开,写作时需依次完成三个核心要求:一是明确自己最喜欢的运动;二是写出最敬佩的运动员;三是阐述从该运动员身上学到的精神品质。写作时要注意语言简洁,控制在80-100词,不得出现真实个人信息,表达需流畅自然。
【解析】首先确定写作框架:开篇点明最喜欢的运动是网球,敬佩的运动员是Alice;接着描述运动员刻苦训练、遇困难不放弃的品质;最后说明从她身上学到的努力、坚持等精神,以及对自己的积极影响。组织语言时结合简单句与复合句,确保语法正确,符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
The Spirit I Learn from My Favourite Athlete
My favourite sport is tennis. And the athlete I admire most is Alice, a very talented young tennis player.
She trains really hard every day and keeps improving herself. When she meets strong players or difficult situations, she never feels nervous or gives up easily. She always stays calm and tries her best to fight till the end.
I admire her because of her strong will and love for the sport. From her, I truly learn the spirit of hard work, courage and persistence. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study, I will learn from her and keep moving forward bravely.
(100 words)
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题写作
【点评】范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有写作要点,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合字数要求,是一篇符合征稿要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先确定写作框架:开篇点明最喜欢的运动是网球,敬佩的运动员是Alice;接着描述运动员刻苦训练、遇困难不放弃的品质;最后说明从她身上学到的努力、坚持等精神,以及对自己的积极影响。组织语言时结合简单句与复合句,确保语法正确,符合字数要求。
【答案】One possible version:
The Spirit I Learn from My Favourite Athlete
My favourite sport is tennis. And the athlete I admire most is Alice, a very talented young tennis player.
She trains really hard every day and keeps improving herself. When she meets strong players or difficult situations, she never feels nervous or gives up easily. She always stays calm and tries her best to fight till the end.
I admire her because of her strong will and love for the sport. From her, I truly learn the spirit of hard work, courage and persistence. Whenever I meet difficulties in my study, I will learn from her and keep moving forward bravely.
(100 words)
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题写作
【点评】范文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有写作要点,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合字数要求,是一篇符合征稿要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】0.6
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