登录
任务情境
假设你的学校正在举办一场主题为“The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart”的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇演讲稿,介绍一位你认为最鼓舞人心的人。
要点提示:
1. Who is he / she? What does he / she do?
2. What makes him / her admirable?
3. How has he / she inspired you?
注意:
1. 文中应包含以上要点提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第三人称为主
2. 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①充满勇气与智慧
②钦佩;仰慕
③成功做成某事
④不畏严寒
⑤留下;遗留
⑥鼓励某人做某事
⑦继续存在;继续活着
⑧最重要的是;尤其是
⑨与……作斗争
2. 句型仿写
①It’s really very nice of him to support and encourage my exchange study here. (教材p.14 3a)
句型:It is / was ... (of / for sb) to do sth.
仿写:他一生致力于帮助人们解决温饱问题,真是非常善良。
②It was important to him that everyone should show the same kindness and care to everyone else, whether they were family, friends, or strangers. (教材p.19 3a)
句型:It is / was ... that ...
仿写:很遗憾,他于2021年去世了。
连句成篇
The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart
假设你的学校正在举办一场主题为“The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart”的英语演讲比赛,请你根据以下要点提示准备一篇演讲稿,介绍一位你认为最鼓舞人心的人。
要点提示:
1. Who is he / she? What does he / she do?
2. What makes him / her admirable?
3. How has he / she inspired you?
注意:
1. 文中应包含以上要点提示中的所有信息,可适当发挥;
2. 词数100左右。
思路点拨
1. 人称:第三人称为主
2. 时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
3. 结构:
素材积累
1. 主题词块
①充满勇气与智慧
full of courage and wisdom
②钦佩;仰慕
look up to sb
③成功做成某事
succeed in doing sth
④不畏严寒
brave the cold weather
⑤留下;遗留
leave behind
⑥鼓励某人做某事
encourage sb to do sth
⑦继续存在;继续活着
live on
⑧最重要的是;尤其是
above all
⑨与……作斗争
fight against
2. 句型仿写
①It’s really very nice of him to support and encourage my exchange study here. (教材p.14 3a)
句型:It is / was ... (of / for sb) to do sth.
仿写:他一生致力于帮助人们解决温饱问题,真是非常善良。
It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
②It was important to him that everyone should show the same kindness and care to everyone else, whether they were family, friends, or strangers. (教材p.19 3a)
句型:It is / was ... that ...
仿写:很遗憾,他于2021年去世了。
It's a pity that he passed away in 2021.
连句成篇
The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart
The most inspiring person in my heart is Yuan Longping. He was a great Chinese scientist who worked on hybrid rice.
Because of his hard work, millions of people around the world no longer go hungry. What makes him admirable is not only his achievements, but also his simple lifestyle and deep love for the country.
It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
He has inspired me to study harder and be someone who can contribute to society. His spirit encourages me never to give up, no matter what difficult things I may meet.
Thank you.
答案
【素材积累】
1. 主题词块
①full of courage and wisdom
②look up to sb ③succeed in doing sth
④brave the cold weather ⑤leave behind
⑥encourage sb to do sth ⑦live on
⑧above all ⑨fight against
2. 句型仿写
①It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
②It's a pity that he passed away in 2021.
【连句成篇】
The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart
The most inspiring person in my heart is Yuan Longping. He was a great Chinese scientist who worked on hybrid rice.
Because of his hard work, millions of people around the world no longer go hungry. What makes him admirable is not only his achievements, but also his simple lifestyle and deep love for the country. It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
He has inspired me to study harder and be someone who can contribute to society. His spirit encourages me never to give up, no matter what difficult things I may meet.
Thank you.
1. 主题词块
①full of courage and wisdom
②look up to sb ③succeed in doing sth
④brave the cold weather ⑤leave behind
⑥encourage sb to do sth ⑦live on
⑧above all ⑨fight against
2. 句型仿写
①It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
②It's a pity that he passed away in 2021.
【连句成篇】
The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart
The most inspiring person in my heart is Yuan Longping. He was a great Chinese scientist who worked on hybrid rice.
Because of his hard work, millions of people around the world no longer go hungry. What makes him admirable is not only his achievements, but also his simple lifestyle and deep love for the country. It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
He has inspired me to study harder and be someone who can contribute to society. His spirit encourages me never to give up, no matter what difficult things I may meet.
Thank you.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题，主题为“The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart”。解题思路：1. 遵循思维导图的结构，分为开头、主体、结尾三部分；2. 覆盖要点提示的三个核心内容：人物的身份与职业、令人钦佩的原因、对自己的影响；3. 运用素材积累的词块和指定句型，确保语言准确，符合演讲稿的正式语气，控制词数在100左右，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
【解析】
1. 开头部分：介绍人物基本信息，点明最鼓舞人心的人是袁隆平，说明他的身份是中国伟大的杂交水稻科学家；
2. 主体部分：阐述人物成就（让全球数百万人民不再挨饿），说明令人钦佩的原因（不仅是科研成就，还有简朴的生活方式和对国家的热爱），运用积累的句型“It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food”；
3. 结尾部分：说明人物对自己的影响（激励自己努力学习，成为能为社会做贡献的人，永不放弃）；
4. 检查内容，确保覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart
The most inspiring person in my heart is Yuan Longping. He was a great Chinese scientist who worked on hybrid rice.
Because of his hard work, millions of people around the world no longer go hungry. What makes him admirable is not only his achievements, but also his simple lifestyle and deep love for the country. It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
He has inspired me to study harder and be someone who can contribute to society. His spirit encourages me never to give up, no matter what difficult things I may meet.
Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类作文、常用句型运用
【点评】
本题要求结合思维导图结构和要点提示完成英语演讲稿，需掌握人物介绍的写作框架，运用积累的词块与句型，注意时态和词数控制，是英语写作的典型题型，能考查学生的语言组织和运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇英语演讲稿写作题，主题为“The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart”。解题思路：1. 遵循思维导图的结构，分为开头、主体、结尾三部分；2. 覆盖要点提示的三个核心内容：人物的身份与职业、令人钦佩的原因、对自己的影响；3. 运用素材积累的词块和指定句型，确保语言准确，符合演讲稿的正式语气，控制词数在100左右，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
【解析】
1. 开头部分：介绍人物基本信息，点明最鼓舞人心的人是袁隆平，说明他的身份是中国伟大的杂交水稻科学家；
2. 主体部分：阐述人物成就（让全球数百万人民不再挨饿），说明令人钦佩的原因（不仅是科研成就，还有简朴的生活方式和对国家的热爱），运用积累的句型“It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food”；
3. 结尾部分：说明人物对自己的影响（激励自己努力学习，成为能为社会做贡献的人，永不放弃）；
4. 检查内容，确保覆盖所有要点，词数符合要求，语言流畅自然。
【答案】
The Most Inspiring Person in My Heart
The most inspiring person in my heart is Yuan Longping. He was a great Chinese scientist who worked on hybrid rice.
Because of his hard work, millions of people around the world no longer go hungry. What makes him admirable is not only his achievements, but also his simple lifestyle and deep love for the country. It was very kind of him to spend his whole life helping people have enough food.
He has inspired me to study harder and be someone who can contribute to society. His spirit encourages me never to give up, no matter what difficult things I may meet.
Thank you.
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作、人物介绍类作文、常用句型运用
【点评】
本题要求结合思维导图结构和要点提示完成英语演讲稿，需掌握人物介绍的写作框架，运用积累的词块与句型，注意时态和词数控制，是英语写作的典型题型，能考查学生的语言组织和运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
