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Ⅳ.书面表达
随着现代社会的发展，健康问题日益受到人们的关注。假如你是李华，最近被评为班级月度健康之星。应班上同学的要求，你打算向大家介绍一下自己是怎样保持健康的。请你根据下面的提示内容，完成这篇发言稿。
内容提示：
要求:1.内容必须包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名;3.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I'm happy to be the Health Star of this month. Now let me tell you about my ways to keep healthy.
That's all! Thank you!
随着现代社会的发展，健康问题日益受到人们的关注。假如你是李华，最近被评为班级月度健康之星。应班上同学的要求，你打算向大家介绍一下自己是怎样保持健康的。请你根据下面的提示内容，完成这篇发言稿。
内容提示：
要求:1.内容必须包含提示中所有信息，可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级及姓名;3.词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I'm happy to be the Health Star of this month. Now let me tell you about my ways to keep healthy.
First, I have good eating habits. I usually eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar.
Second, I exercise very often. I like to play sports, such as basketball and football. I also go for a walk or run every day.
Third, I usually go to bed early and wake up early. I hardly ever stay up late.
Fourth, I do mental adjustment. I like to read books and listen to music to relax myself.
That's all! Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
First, I have good eating habits. I usually eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar. Second, I exercise very often. I like to play sports, such as basketball and football. I also go for a walk or run every day. Third, I usually go to bed early and wake up early. I hardly ever stay up late. Fourth, I do mental adjustment. I like to read books and listen to music to relax myself.
First, I have good eating habits. I usually eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar. Second, I exercise very often. I like to play sports, such as basketball and football. I also go for a walk or run every day. Third, I usually go to bed early and wake up early. I hardly ever stay up late. Fourth, I do mental adjustment. I like to read books and listen to music to relax myself.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以李华的身份写发言稿，介绍保持健康的方法，必须包含提示的四个方面（饮食习惯、锻炼习惯、睡眠习惯、心理调整），开头结尾已给出，词数70左右。解题思路：1. 围绕四个提示点分点展开，每个点用简单语句说明具体做法；2. 选用健康话题常用词汇，如eating habits、exercise等；3. 确保语言通顺，符合发言稿语气，覆盖所有提示信息，适当发挥不偏离要求。
【解析】
1. 确定结构：开头已给，中间分四个部分对应提示内容，结尾已给；
2. 填充各部分内容：
饮食习惯：说明多吃蔬果，少吃垃圾食品和含糖饮料；
锻炼习惯：说明常做运动，如球类、散步跑步；
睡眠习惯：说明早睡早起，不熬夜；
心理调整：说明通过读书、听音乐放松；
3. 调整语句，确保词数约70，无真实信息，符合发言稿要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
First, I have good eating habits. I usually eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar. Second, I exercise very often. I like to play sports, such as basketball and football. I also go for a walk or run every day. Third, I usually go to bed early and wake up early. I hardly ever stay up late. Fourth, I do mental adjustment. I like to read books and listen to music to relax myself.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；健康话题词汇；篇章组织
【点评】
本题为健康话题书面表达题，考查学生话题词汇运用和篇章组织能力，需覆盖所有提示信息，语言通顺，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求：以李华的身份写发言稿，介绍保持健康的方法，必须包含提示的四个方面（饮食习惯、锻炼习惯、睡眠习惯、心理调整），开头结尾已给出，词数70左右。解题思路：1. 围绕四个提示点分点展开，每个点用简单语句说明具体做法；2. 选用健康话题常用词汇，如eating habits、exercise等；3. 确保语言通顺，符合发言稿语气，覆盖所有提示信息，适当发挥不偏离要求。
【解析】
1. 确定结构：开头已给，中间分四个部分对应提示内容，结尾已给；
2. 填充各部分内容：
饮食习惯：说明多吃蔬果，少吃垃圾食品和含糖饮料；
锻炼习惯：说明常做运动，如球类、散步跑步；
睡眠习惯：说明早睡早起，不熬夜；
心理调整：说明通过读书、听音乐放松；
3. 调整语句，确保词数约70，无真实信息，符合发言稿要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
First, I have good eating habits. I usually eat a lot of fruit and vegetables. And I seldom have junk food and drinks with sugar. Second, I exercise very often. I like to play sports, such as basketball and football. I also go for a walk or run every day. Third, I usually go to bed early and wake up early. I hardly ever stay up late. Fourth, I do mental adjustment. I like to read books and listen to music to relax myself.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；健康话题词汇；篇章组织
【点评】
本题为健康话题书面表达题，考查学生话题词汇运用和篇章组织能力，需覆盖所有提示信息，语言通顺，难度适中，适合初中阶段学生练习。
【难度系数】
0.6
