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Ⅷ. 书面表达(共15分)
《21世纪英文报》正面向中学生举行征文比赛，主题如下：随着科学技术的发展，人类在不久的将来可能实现移居火星。一旦实现，人类就要
面临选择:继续居住在地球,还是移居火星?请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,参加该报社的征文比赛。
注意:1.从以上观点中选择其一,说明你选择的理由以及如何面对这种选择带来的问题,均不得少于两条;2.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars, it's time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I've decided to
《21世纪英文报》正面向中学生举行征文比赛，主题如下：随着科学技术的发展，人类在不久的将来可能实现移居火星。一旦实现，人类就要
面临选择:继续居住在地球,还是移居火星?请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,参加该报社的征文比赛。
注意:1.从以上观点中选择其一,说明你选择的理由以及如何面对这种选择带来的问题,均不得少于两条;2.词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
As it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars, it's time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I've decided to
continue living on the Earth, because I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.
We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the Earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly. So something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, pollution is another serious problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the Earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly. So something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, pollution is another serious problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
答案
One possible version:
As it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars, it's time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I've decided to continue living on the Earth, because I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.
We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the Earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly. So something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, pollution is another serious problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
【审题】本文属于材料写作，可根据题目中的提示并结合自己的想法来构思内容。写作时要注意内容的完整性，应包括选择、理由、问题、解决方法等方面。本文应以第一人称来叙述；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
【写作步骤】第一步陈述选择的结果及理由；第二步陈述该选择所带来的问题以及解决问题的建议；第三步总结并提升主题。
【短语积累】①run out 用完，耗尽
②take action 采取行动
【高分句型】①I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.(where 引导的定语从句)
②... the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly.(so ... that ... 引导的结果状语从句)
As it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars, it's time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I've decided to continue living on the Earth, because I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.
We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the Earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly. So something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, pollution is another serious problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
【审题】本文属于材料写作，可根据题目中的提示并结合自己的想法来构思内容。写作时要注意内容的完整性，应包括选择、理由、问题、解决方法等方面。本文应以第一人称来叙述；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
【写作步骤】第一步陈述选择的结果及理由；第二步陈述该选择所带来的问题以及解决问题的建议；第三步总结并提升主题。
【短语积累】①run out 用完，耗尽
②take action 采取行动
【高分句型】①I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.(where 引导的定语从句)
②... the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly.(so ... that ... 引导的结果状语从句)
解析
【分析】
本题为材料类英语书面表达题，要求根据给定表格信息选择居住地点，说明选择理由及对应问题的解决方法，词数约100词，开头已给出。解题思路：首先确定选择方向（参考答案选择继续居住地球）；接着结合表格中地球的优势（多样美食、亲友相伴）展开理由；再对应地球存在的问题（人口多空间有限、污染严重），提出解决措施；最后总结升华，强调保护地球的重要性，确保内容完整、结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，明确选择继续居住地球，用定语从句说明理由：“I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.”；
2. 转折说明地球面临的问题，用so...that...结构阐述人口问题，提出控制人口的建议；
3. 针对污染问题，提出采取行动治理污染的措施；
4. 总结升华，点明地球是人类家园，应努力让它更宜居。
【答案】
One possible version:
As it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars, it's time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I've decided to continue living on the Earth, because I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.
We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the Earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly. So something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, pollution is another serious problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；定语从句；结果状语从句
【点评】
本题为材料类英语书面表达，考查学生信息整合、语言组织及写作能力，要求紧扣表格信息，结构清晰，内容完整，同时注重语法句式的多样性，符合征文主题要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为材料类英语书面表达题，要求根据给定表格信息选择居住地点，说明选择理由及对应问题的解决方法，词数约100词，开头已给出。解题思路：首先确定选择方向（参考答案选择继续居住地球）；接着结合表格中地球的优势（多样美食、亲友相伴）展开理由；再对应地球存在的问题（人口多空间有限、污染严重），提出解决措施；最后总结升华，强调保护地球的重要性，确保内容完整、结构清晰。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，明确选择继续居住地球，用定语从句说明理由：“I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.”；
2. 转折说明地球面临的问题，用so...that...结构阐述人口问题，提出控制人口的建议；
3. 针对污染问题，提出采取行动治理污染的措施；
4. 总结升华，点明地球是人类家园，应努力让它更宜居。
【答案】
One possible version:
As it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars, it's time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I've decided to continue living on the Earth, because I love the Earth, where I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and live with my close friends and relatives.
We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the Earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, the population is so big that the space is crowded and resources on the Earth are running out quickly. So something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, pollution is another serious problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；定语从句；结果状语从句
【点评】
本题为材料类英语书面表达，考查学生信息整合、语言组织及写作能力，要求紧扣表格信息，结构清晰，内容完整，同时注重语法句式的多样性，符合征文主题要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
