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碳排放(carbon emissions)过量导致全球自然灾害频发,污染严重,危害人体健康。无锡政府积极探索,采取植树造林、节能减排等方法,助力无锡领跑零碳发展新赛道。你校为此开辟了“Working towards a brighter future”专栏,请你根据流程图用英文写一篇文章投稿。
Possible ways to reduce carbon emissions:
注意事项:1. 短文内容需根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;2. 提供的减碳手段图标信息为非限定性内容,仅供参考;3. 词数100左右。
题中题 098
碳排放(carbon emissions)过量导致全球自然灾害频发,污染严重,危害人体健康。无锡政府积极探索,采取植树造林、节能减排等方法,助力无锡领跑零碳发展新赛道。你校为此开辟了“Working towards a brighter future”专栏,请你根据流程图用英文写一篇文章投稿。
Possible ways to reduce carbon emissions:
注意事项:1. 短文内容需根据流程图自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;2. 提供的减碳手段图标信息为非限定性内容,仅供参考;3. 词数100左右。
Working towards a brighter future
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it's harmful to humans' health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. For example, people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out. Last but not least, they produce little pollution.
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it's harmful to humans' health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. For example, people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out. Last but not least, they produce little pollution.
题中题 098
答案
One possible version:
Working towards a brighter future
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it's harmful to humans' health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. For example, people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out. Last but not least, they produce little pollution.
【审题】题目要求围绕“Working towards a brighter future”这一主题介绍三个要点:减少碳排放的必要性、我们为此做了什么以及还应该做些什么。学生适当自由发挥减碳的手段。写作时要以第一、三人称为主,结合具体语境来选择合适的时态。
【写作步骤】第一步,减碳的原因;第二步,政府采取了哪些行动;第三步,给出更多可行的建议。
【短语积累】①lead to 导致
②last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
【高分句型】① ... people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars.(not only ... but also ... 并列句型)
② ... it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out.(which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
Working towards a brighter future
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it's harmful to humans' health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. For example, people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out. Last but not least, they produce little pollution.
【审题】题目要求围绕“Working towards a brighter future”这一主题介绍三个要点:减少碳排放的必要性、我们为此做了什么以及还应该做些什么。学生适当自由发挥减碳的手段。写作时要以第一、三人称为主,结合具体语境来选择合适的时态。
【写作步骤】第一步,减碳的原因;第二步,政府采取了哪些行动;第三步,给出更多可行的建议。
【短语积累】①lead to 导致
②last but not least 最后但同样重要的是
【高分句型】① ... people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars.(not only ... but also ... 并列句型)
② ... it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out.(which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，主题为“Working towards a brighter future”，要求围绕减少碳排放展开写作。解题思路分三步：首先明确减少碳排放的必要性（碳排放过量引发灾害、危害健康）；其次介绍当地政府已采取的减碳措施（如垃圾分类、绿色出行、植树造林等）；最后补充更多可行的减碳建议，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，运用恰当的英语句型。
【解析】
写作时，第一步说明减碳原因：碳排放过量导致全球自然灾害频发、污染严重且危害人体健康；第二步介绍无锡政府的行动：要求垃圾分类、鼓励绿色出行、植树造林；第三步提出更多建议：使用新能源等。注意用一般现在时，运用not only...but also...、定语从句等句型，控制词数100左右，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Working towards a brighter future
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it's harmful to humans' health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. For example, people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out. Last but not least, they produce little pollution.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题写作、常用句式运用
【点评】
本题结合环保热点，贴近学生生活，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生围绕主题组织内容，运用恰当的词汇和句型，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，主题为“Working towards a brighter future”，要求围绕减少碳排放展开写作。解题思路分三步：首先明确减少碳排放的必要性（碳排放过量引发灾害、危害健康）；其次介绍当地政府已采取的减碳措施（如垃圾分类、绿色出行、植树造林等）；最后补充更多可行的减碳建议，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求，运用恰当的英语句型。
【解析】
写作时，第一步说明减碳原因：碳排放过量导致全球自然灾害频发、污染严重且危害人体健康；第二步介绍无锡政府的行动：要求垃圾分类、鼓励绿色出行、植树造林；第三步提出更多建议：使用新能源等。注意用一般现在时，运用not only...but also...、定语从句等句型，控制词数100左右，语句通顺连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Working towards a brighter future
We need to reduce carbon emissions because pollution has become one of the most serious problems in the world today. It leads to many natural disasters. Also, it's harmful to humans' health.
Luckily, our local government has taken action. For example, people are not only asked to separate waste into different groups, but also encouraged to walk or ride instead of driving cars. Moreover, we have planted many trees.
In fact, we can do more for a brighter future. For example, it's wise to use new types of energy, which cost very little and will never run out. Last but not least, they produce little pollution.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、环保主题写作、常用句式运用
【点评】
本题结合环保热点，贴近学生生活，考查学生的英语写作能力，要求学生围绕主题组织内容，运用恰当的词汇和句型，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
