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[2025 陕西西安期中]创文明城市，你我都是主角。假如你是李华，你被学校评为“文明风尚好少年”。请你根据以下提示，向同学们介绍你的文明行为，树立文明典范，号召大家践行文明规范，共创文明西安。
内容：(1)你的爱好和特长；
(2)你的健康生活方式(如饮食、运动)；
(3)你在校遵守的文明规则。
要求：(1)不少于 70 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)书写工整、规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Hello, boys and girls. My name's Li Hua. It's my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
Value statement: Nothing can be achieved without rules.
内容：(1)你的爱好和特长；
(2)你的健康生活方式(如饮食、运动)；
(3)你在校遵守的文明规则。
要求：(1)不少于 70 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)书写工整、规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Hello, boys and girls. My name's Li Hua. It's my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up. At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
Value statement: Nothing can be achieved without rules.
答案
Hello, boys and girls. My name's Li Hua. It's my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：以获评“文明风尚好少年”的李华的身份，向同学介绍自身文明行为、号召大家践行文明规范，必须覆盖题干给出的三个必写要点。思考步骤如下：1. 先完成第一个要点：介绍爱好特长，选择符合中学生身份的正向爱好即可，比如乐器、文体类特长都很合适；2. 落实第二个要点健康生活方式，紧扣题干提示的饮食、运动两个方向，补充作息、绿色出行的正向习惯，让内容更饱满真实；3. 完成第三个要点在校文明规则部分，列举2-3条贴合校园实际的文明守则，自然呼应文明主题，最后注意规避真实人名校名，保证总词数达标，语句衔接通顺即可。
【解析】
写作分步完成：
步骤1：承接题干给出的开头内容，首先介绍个人爱好特长，点明自己擅长弹吉他，完成第一个写作要点；
步骤2：展开健康生活相关内容，依次介绍作息安排、绿色出行的习惯，说明日常的健康饮食选择，再列举课后打篮球、日常慢跑的运动安排，点明运动的正向意义，完整覆盖健康生活的饮食、运动要求；
步骤3：介绍在校遵守的文明规则，列举按时到校、统一穿校服等校园文明要求，点明规则的正向作用，全文没有出现真实人名校名，总词数远超70词，符合所有写作要求。
完整参考范文如下：
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
【答案】
Hello, boys and girls. My name's Li Hua. It's my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，日常话题表达，写作要点整合
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有指定写作要点，内容贴合中学生真实的学习生活场景，逻辑层层递进，语言表达流畅地道，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，字数符合要求，清晰展现了文明好少年的行为准则，很好地呼应了共创文明城市的核心主题。同学们写作时可以在文末补充一句号召大家共同践行文明规范、共建文明西安的内容，进一步升华主题。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题，首先要明确核心要求：以获评“文明风尚好少年”的李华的身份，向同学介绍自身文明行为、号召大家践行文明规范，必须覆盖题干给出的三个必写要点。思考步骤如下：1. 先完成第一个要点：介绍爱好特长，选择符合中学生身份的正向爱好即可，比如乐器、文体类特长都很合适；2. 落实第二个要点健康生活方式，紧扣题干提示的饮食、运动两个方向，补充作息、绿色出行的正向习惯，让内容更饱满真实；3. 完成第三个要点在校文明规则部分，列举2-3条贴合校园实际的文明守则，自然呼应文明主题，最后注意规避真实人名校名，保证总词数达标，语句衔接通顺即可。
【解析】
写作分步完成：
步骤1：承接题干给出的开头内容，首先介绍个人爱好特长，点明自己擅长弹吉他，完成第一个写作要点；
步骤2：展开健康生活相关内容，依次介绍作息安排、绿色出行的习惯，说明日常的健康饮食选择，再列举课后打篮球、日常慢跑的运动安排，点明运动的正向意义，完整覆盖健康生活的饮食、运动要求；
步骤3：介绍在校遵守的文明规则，列举按时到校、统一穿校服等校园文明要求，点明规则的正向作用，全文没有出现真实人名校名，总词数远超70词，符合所有写作要求。
完整参考范文如下：
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
【答案】
Hello, boys and girls. My name's Li Hua. It's my honour to be a Civilized Teenager. Let me introduce myself.
I like playing the guitar and I can play it well. Every morning I get up at six o'clock. At 7:00, I usually ride a bike to school, because it is very healthy. I have lunch at school at 12:00. And I usually play basketball with my friends after school. In my daily life, I always go jogging with my friends. Exercise not only keeps me healthy, but also cultivates the spirit of not giving up.
At school, we must arrive on time. We must wear school uniforms every day. Although these rules are strict, I believe they are beneficial to us.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作，日常话题表达，写作要点整合
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有指定写作要点，内容贴合中学生真实的学习生活场景，逻辑层层递进，语言表达流畅地道，没有出现违规的真实个人信息，字数符合要求，清晰展现了文明好少年的行为准则，很好地呼应了共创文明城市的核心主题。同学们写作时可以在文末补充一句号召大家共同践行文明规范、共建文明西安的内容，进一步升华主题。
【难度系数】
0.7
