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五、书面表达
根据以下提示,完成一篇微写作。
1. 中国结是中国传统的艺术形式,历史悠久;
2. 中国结是一种古老的编织(weave)艺术,每个中国结由绳子
或线(thread)编织而成;
3. 现在,它的主要用途是作为装饰品;
4. 中国结通常是红色的,在中国它代表着幸福和好运,我们可以
把它挂在家里或作为礼物送给朋友,它是中国文化的一个重
要象征。
根据以下提示,完成一篇微写作。
1. 中国结是中国传统的艺术形式,历史悠久;
2. 中国结是一种古老的编织(weave)艺术,每个中国结由绳子
或线(thread)编织而成;
3. 现在,它的主要用途是作为装饰品;
4. 中国结通常是红色的,在中国它代表着幸福和好运,我们可以
把它挂在家里或作为礼物送给朋友,它是中国文化的一个重
要象征。
答案
五、One possible version:
The Chinese knot is a traditional Chinese art form and has a long history. The Chinese knot is
actually an ancient art of weaving. Every knot is made out of a single rope or thread. Every knot is
named after its specific form and meaning. Now it's mainly used as a decoration. The Chinese knot is
usually red. In China, it stands for happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it
in our houses. It has become an important symbol of Chinese culture.
The Chinese knot is a traditional Chinese art form and has a long history. The Chinese knot is
actually an ancient art of weaving. Every knot is made out of a single rope or thread. Every knot is
named after its specific form and meaning. Now it's mainly used as a decoration. The Chinese knot is
usually red. In China, it stands for happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it
in our houses. It has become an important symbol of Chinese culture.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道微写作题，第一步先审题：明确文体是介绍中国结的说明文，通篇使用一般现在时即可，核心要求是完整覆盖题干给出的全部4个提示要点，不能遗漏信息。接下来梳理写作逻辑：开篇先直接点明中国结是中国传统艺术、历史悠久，对应第一个要点；接着介绍它的属性是古老编织艺术，由绳或线编织而成，对应第二个要点；之后过渡到当下的用途，说明它主要作为装饰品，对应第三个要点；最后依次介绍它的常见颜色、承载的美好寓意、使用场景，最后点出它是中国文化的重要象征，对应第四个要点。写作过程中尽量使用课内学过的常用短语，保证语句通顺、无语法错误，把所有要点自然串联起来即可。
【解析】
本篇写作按照逻辑分层完成：
1. 开篇点题：直接介绍中国结的基本属性与历史，覆盖要点1：The Chinese knot is a traditional Chinese art form and has a long history.
2. 介绍工艺特点：说明中国结属于古老编织艺术，点明其制作材质，覆盖要点2：The Chinese knot is actually an ancient art of weaving. Every knot is made out of a single rope or thread.
3. 说明当下用途：点明中国结现在的主要功能是装饰，覆盖要点3：Now it's mainly used as a decoration.
4. 补充文化内涵：依次介绍中国结的常见颜色红色，象征幸福与好运，既可以挂在家中也可以作为礼物送给朋友，最后点明它是中国文化的重要象征，完整覆盖要点4，行文逻辑连贯，没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Chinese knot is a traditional Chinese art form and has a long history. The Chinese knot is actually an ancient art of weaving. Every knot is made out of a single rope or thread. Every knot is named after its specific form and meaning. Now it's mainly used as a decoration. The Chinese knot is usually red. In China, it stands for happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it in our houses. It has become an important symbol of Chinese culture.
【知识点】
说明类书面表达；常用动词短语；文化话题写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础微写作，题干已经给出全部核心写作要点，不需要学生额外进行大量创意发挥，只需要准确将所有提示信息用通顺的英语表达出来，注意时态统一、核心短语的正确使用，避免出现拼写和语法错误，就可以拿到不错的分数，同时这类介绍中国传统文化的写作也能帮助学生积累文化类话题的表达素材。
【难度系数】
0.8
首先拿到这道微写作题，第一步先审题：明确文体是介绍中国结的说明文，通篇使用一般现在时即可，核心要求是完整覆盖题干给出的全部4个提示要点，不能遗漏信息。接下来梳理写作逻辑：开篇先直接点明中国结是中国传统艺术、历史悠久，对应第一个要点；接着介绍它的属性是古老编织艺术，由绳或线编织而成，对应第二个要点；之后过渡到当下的用途，说明它主要作为装饰品，对应第三个要点；最后依次介绍它的常见颜色、承载的美好寓意、使用场景，最后点出它是中国文化的重要象征，对应第四个要点。写作过程中尽量使用课内学过的常用短语，保证语句通顺、无语法错误，把所有要点自然串联起来即可。
【解析】
本篇写作按照逻辑分层完成：
1. 开篇点题：直接介绍中国结的基本属性与历史，覆盖要点1：The Chinese knot is a traditional Chinese art form and has a long history.
2. 介绍工艺特点：说明中国结属于古老编织艺术，点明其制作材质，覆盖要点2：The Chinese knot is actually an ancient art of weaving. Every knot is made out of a single rope or thread.
3. 说明当下用途：点明中国结现在的主要功能是装饰，覆盖要点3：Now it's mainly used as a decoration.
4. 补充文化内涵：依次介绍中国结的常见颜色红色，象征幸福与好运，既可以挂在家中也可以作为礼物送给朋友，最后点明它是中国文化的重要象征，完整覆盖要点4，行文逻辑连贯，没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version:
The Chinese knot is a traditional Chinese art form and has a long history. The Chinese knot is actually an ancient art of weaving. Every knot is made out of a single rope or thread. Every knot is named after its specific form and meaning. Now it's mainly used as a decoration. The Chinese knot is usually red. In China, it stands for happiness and good luck. We can give it to friends as a gift or hang it in our houses. It has become an important symbol of Chinese culture.
【知识点】
说明类书面表达；常用动词短语；文化话题写作
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础微写作，题干已经给出全部核心写作要点，不需要学生额外进行大量创意发挥，只需要准确将所有提示信息用通顺的英语表达出来，注意时态统一、核心短语的正确使用，避免出现拼写和语法错误，就可以拿到不错的分数，同时这类介绍中国传统文化的写作也能帮助学生积累文化类话题的表达素材。
【难度系数】
0.8
