2.随着中国春节申遗成功,外国人来华体验春节文化的热情日益高涨。假设你是李华,下个月你将邀请美国好友 Peter 来中国共度春节。出行前,Peter 给你写了一封邮件,希望得到更多的信息和建议。请你根据邮件内容,写一封回信。
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(2)需回复邮件中提出的所有问题,可以适当发挥;(3)80—100 词;(4)短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Hi, Peter,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can't wait to see you, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;(2)需回复邮件中提出的所有问题,可以适当发挥;(3)80—100 词;(4)短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, Peter,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can't wait to see you, too.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
2. One possible version:
Hi, Peter,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can't wait to see you, too. Here is my advice.
I think it will be polite to arrive a little earlier. When you meet my parents, you are supposed to shake hands with them. If possible, please bring some flowers. By the way, we Chinese like red because it stands for happiness and good luck.
As for table manners, we usually let the old start eating first when we have a big meal with them. It is impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks or stick them into your food.
I hope my reply is helpful and wish you a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
(99 words)
Hi, Peter,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can't wait to see you, too. Here is my advice.
I think it will be polite to arrive a little earlier. When you meet my parents, you are supposed to shake hands with them. If possible, please bring some flowers. By the way, we Chinese like red because it stands for happiness and good luck.
As for table manners, we usually let the old start eating first when we have a big meal with them. It is impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks or stick them into your food.
I hope my reply is helpful and wish you a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
(99 words)
解析
【分析】首先明确回信需覆盖Peter提出的四个问题:到达时间、见面礼仪、礼物选择、餐桌礼仪;其次结合中国传统礼仪习惯,选择合适的英语表达;接着控制字数在80-100词,使用简洁准确的句式;最后补充结尾祝福,完成书信结构。
【解析】写作步骤:1. 承接给定开头,引出给Peter的建议;2. 回复到达时间:建议稍早到达,符合礼貌要求;3. 见面礼仪:与父母握手,是合适的见面方式;4. 礼物选择:带鲜花,符合中国礼仪;5. 餐桌礼仪:长辈先用餐、筷子勿指人/插饭中,是中国餐桌的基本礼仪;6. 结尾表达祝福,完成回信。
【答案】Hi, Peter,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can't wait to see you, too. Here is my advice.
I think it will be polite to arrive a little earlier. When you meet my parents, you are supposed to shake hands with them. If possible, please bring some flowers. By the way, we Chinese like red because it stands for happiness and good luck.
As for table manners, we usually let the old start eating first when we have a big meal with them. It is impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks or stick them into your food.
I hope my reply is helpful and wish you a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、跨文化礼仪表达、话题作文
【点评】该范文完整回应了来信的所有问题,内容贴合中国春节礼仪,语言简洁流畅,符合字数要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀回信。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤:1. 承接给定开头,引出给Peter的建议;2. 回复到达时间:建议稍早到达,符合礼貌要求;3. 见面礼仪:与父母握手,是合适的见面方式;4. 礼物选择:带鲜花,符合中国礼仪;5. 餐桌礼仪:长辈先用餐、筷子勿指人/插饭中,是中国餐桌的基本礼仪;6. 结尾表达祝福,完成回信。
【答案】Hi, Peter,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can't wait to see you, too. Here is my advice.
I think it will be polite to arrive a little earlier. When you meet my parents, you are supposed to shake hands with them. If possible, please bring some flowers. By the way, we Chinese like red because it stands for happiness and good luck.
As for table manners, we usually let the old start eating first when we have a big meal with them. It is impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks or stick them into your food.
I hope my reply is helpful and wish you a wonderful time in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、跨文化礼仪表达、话题作文
【点评】该范文完整回应了来信的所有问题,内容贴合中国春节礼仪,语言简洁流畅,符合字数要求,是一篇符合题目要求的优秀回信。
【难度系数】0.6
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