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1.假设你是张华,交换生 Peter 下个月将来你校学习,他想通过加入学校社团了解中国文化。请你根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一个合适的社团。
要求:(1)短文需包含所选社团的所有相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80 词左右;(4)短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
要求:(1)短文需包含所选社团的所有相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80 词左右;(4)短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club.
Since you love Chinese folk stories, I'd like to recommend the Story Telling Club to you.
The club meets in Room 304 from 3:00 to 4:00 every Wednesday. There, you can learn various Chinese folk stories—many of them are closely related to traditional festivals, like the story behind the Mid-Autumn Festival. You'll also get to share your favourite stories with other members.
I believe this club will help you know more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
答案
1. One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. Since you love Chinese folk stories, I'd like to recommend the Story Telling Club to you.
The club meets in Room 304 from 3:00 to 4:00 every Wednesday. There, you can learn various Chinese folk stories—many of them are closely related to traditional festivals, like the story behind the Mid-Autumn Festival. You'll also get to share your favourite stories with other members.
I believe this club will help you know more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
(81 words)
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. Since you love Chinese folk stories, I'd like to recommend the Story Telling Club to you.
The club meets in Room 304 from 3:00 to 4:00 every Wednesday. There, you can learn various Chinese folk stories—many of them are closely related to traditional festivals, like the story behind the Mid-Autumn Festival. You'll also get to share your favourite stories with other members.
I believe this club will help you know more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
(81 words)
解析
【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作任务，要求以张华的身份给交换生Peter写邮件，推荐能帮助他了解中国文化的社团。解题思路：首先，结合Peter想了解中国文化的需求，选择与中国文化紧密相关的社团（如讲故事社团）；其次，补充社团的关键信息（时间、地点），确保信息完整；接着，说明社团的活动内容，体现其对了解中国文化的作用；最后，控制字数在80左右，语言自然，不出现真实姓名、学校等信息，符合邮件格式。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 承接已给开头，说明推荐讲故事社团的原因（契合Peter对中国民间故事的兴趣）；
2. 介绍社团的具体信息：活动时间为每周三下午3:00-4:00，地点在304室；
3. 阐述社团活动内容：学习与传统节日相关的中国民间故事，和其他成员分享喜爱的故事；
4. 结尾表达对Peter加入社团的期待，总词数约80，满足题目各项要求。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. Since you love Chinese folk stories, I'd like to recommend the Story Telling Club to you.
The club meets in Room 304 from 3:00 to 4:00 every Wednesday. There, you can learn various Chinese folk stories—many of them are closely related to traditional festivals, like the story behind the Mid-Autumn Festival. You'll also get to share your favourite stories with other members.
I believe this club will help you know more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、社团推荐类写作、中国文化表达
【点评】
本题为日常交际类应用文写作题，贴近学生校园生活，考查学生的英语语言运用能力与跨文化交际意识，要求结合主题推荐合适社团并融入中国文化元素，题目设置合理，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语应用文写作任务，要求以张华的身份给交换生Peter写邮件，推荐能帮助他了解中国文化的社团。解题思路：首先，结合Peter想了解中国文化的需求，选择与中国文化紧密相关的社团（如讲故事社团）；其次，补充社团的关键信息（时间、地点），确保信息完整；接着，说明社团的活动内容，体现其对了解中国文化的作用；最后，控制字数在80左右，语言自然，不出现真实姓名、学校等信息，符合邮件格式。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 承接已给开头，说明推荐讲故事社团的原因（契合Peter对中国民间故事的兴趣）；
2. 介绍社团的具体信息：活动时间为每周三下午3:00-4:00，地点在304室；
3. 阐述社团活动内容：学习与传统节日相关的中国民间故事，和其他成员分享喜爱的故事；
4. 结尾表达对Peter加入社团的期待，总词数约80，满足题目各项要求。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to study in our school, and now you are thinking about choosing a club. Since you love Chinese folk stories, I'd like to recommend the Story Telling Club to you.
The club meets in Room 304 from 3:00 to 4:00 every Wednesday. There, you can learn various Chinese folk stories—many of them are closely related to traditional festivals, like the story behind the Mid-Autumn Festival. You'll also get to share your favourite stories with other members.
I believe this club will help you know more about Chinese culture. Looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、社团推荐类写作、中国文化表达
【点评】
本题为日常交际类应用文写作题，贴近学生校园生活，考查学生的英语语言运用能力与跨文化交际意识，要求结合主题推荐合适社团并融入中国文化元素，题目设置合理，难度适中，能有效考查学生的综合写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
