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Ⅳ.书面表达(15分)
34.[2025江苏徐州调研]为倡导理性消费，增强学生理财意识，学校的某俱乐部开展“零用钱管理能手”评选活动。请结合以下图表，写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。
注意事项：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2)词数100左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
34.[2025江苏徐州调研]为倡导理性消费，增强学生理财意识，学校的某俱乐部开展“零用钱管理能手”评选活动。请结合以下图表，写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。
注意事项：
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2)词数100左右，首句已给出，不计入总词数。
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
答案
34.【参考范文】
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
To use my pocket money properly, I divide it into three parts. I spend about 40% of the money on books, pens and other tools. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi’an this winter holiday, so I save about 35% every month to pay for the plane tickets and the hotel. Finally, I use 25% to help sick children get better medical aid. I believe every little bit of love will be helpful.
Managing money is important to me. It’s not just about spending and saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
To use my pocket money properly, I divide it into three parts. I spend about 40% of the money on books, pens and other tools. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi’an this winter holiday, so I save about 35% every month to pay for the plane tickets and the hotel. Finally, I use 25% to help sick children get better medical aid. I believe every little bit of love will be helpful.
Managing money is important to me. It’s not just about spending and saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
解析
【分析】
本题要求结合零用钱管理的饼图，以“零用钱管理能手”评选为背景写英语短文。解题思路：首先紧扣饼图的三个模块（花费、储蓄、捐赠），对应分配比例和用途；其次为各部分补充合理理由，让内容充实；最后结尾升华主题，体现理财的意义，同时注意语言准确、符合书面表达规范，词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定首句，说明将零用钱分为三部分合理管理；2. 花费部分：用40%购买书、笔等学习用品，理由是服务学习与爱好；3. 储蓄部分：用35%储蓄，用于寒假去西安旅行的机票和酒店，理由是实现旅行计划；4. 捐赠部分：用25%帮助生病孩子，理由是传递爱心；5. 结尾总结理财的意义，不仅关乎收支，更关乎创造更好的生活。
【答案】
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
To use my pocket money properly, I divide it into three parts. I spend about 40% of the money on books, pens and other tools. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi’an this winter holiday, so I save about 35% every month to pay for the plane tickets and the hotel. Finally, I use 25% to help sick children get better medical aid. I believe every little bit of love will be helpful.
Managing money is important to me. It’s not just about spending and saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、图表类写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰，紧密结合饼图的三个模块及对应比例，各部分理由充分合理，语言流畅自然，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，既完成了零用钱管理的介绍，又升华了理财的意义，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求结合零用钱管理的饼图，以“零用钱管理能手”评选为背景写英语短文。解题思路：首先紧扣饼图的三个模块（花费、储蓄、捐赠），对应分配比例和用途；其次为各部分补充合理理由，让内容充实；最后结尾升华主题，体现理财的意义，同时注意语言准确、符合书面表达规范，词数控制在100左右，不得出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 承接给定首句，说明将零用钱分为三部分合理管理；2. 花费部分：用40%购买书、笔等学习用品，理由是服务学习与爱好；3. 储蓄部分：用35%储蓄，用于寒假去西安旅行的机票和酒店，理由是实现旅行计划；4. 捐赠部分：用25%帮助生病孩子，理由是传递爱心；5. 结尾总结理财的意义，不仅关乎收支，更关乎创造更好的生活。
【答案】
I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month.
To use my pocket money properly, I divide it into three parts. I spend about 40% of the money on books, pens and other tools. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi’an this winter holiday, so I save about 35% every month to pay for the plane tickets and the hotel. Finally, I use 25% to help sick children get better medical aid. I believe every little bit of love will be helpful.
Managing money is important to me. It’s not just about spending and saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、图表类写作
【点评】
范文结构清晰，紧密结合饼图的三个模块及对应比例，各部分理由充分合理，语言流畅自然，符合题目对词数和内容的要求，既完成了零用钱管理的介绍，又升华了理财的意义，是一篇符合要求的优秀书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.6
