六、书面表达。(满分15分)
Everyone has his or her own dream job. You may dream of being a basketball superstar like Spud Webb, a movie star like Audrey Hepburn, a top detective like Sherlock Holmes, a serious engineer like Liu Hao, or a patient teacher like Mr Wu... Please write a passage titled “My dream job”.
In your writing, the followings should be included:
① What is your dream job?
② What qualities do you need for this job?
③ What will you do to achieve your dream?
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 内容完整,结构合理,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。

My dream job
Everyone has his or her own dream job. You may dream of being a basketball superstar like Spud Webb, a movie star like Audrey Hepburn, a top detective like Sherlock Holmes, a serious engineer like Liu Hao, or a patient teacher like Mr Wu... Please write a passage titled “My dream job”.
In your writing, the followings should be included:
① What is your dream job?
② What qualities do you need for this job?
③ What will you do to achieve your dream?
注意:
1. 80词左右;
2. 内容完整,结构合理,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。
My dream job
答案
My dream job
My dream job is to be a doctor. I hope to help sick people reduce their pain and live a healthy happy life.
To be a good doctor, I need rich medical knowledge, and I must be careful, patient and responsible to every patient.
From now on, I will work hard at all my lessons, especially science. I will also learn more basic medical knowledge in my free time. I am sure my dream can come true if I keep trying.
My dream job is to be a doctor. I hope to help sick people reduce their pain and live a healthy happy life.
To be a good doctor, I need rich medical knowledge, and I must be careful, patient and responsible to every patient.
From now on, I will work hard at all my lessons, especially science. I will also learn more basic medical knowledge in my free time. I am sure my dream can come true if I keep trying.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达题,要求围绕“My dream job”写作,需涵盖三个核心要点:明确梦想职业、说明该职业所需素质、阐述实现梦想的做法。解题思路为:先选定具体梦想职业并说明初衷,再结合职业特点提炼必备素质,最后从当前行动出发说明实现梦想的措施,同时控制字数、保证语言通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】写作遵循“总-分”结构:①开篇点明梦想职业是医生,说明其意义(帮助病人减轻痛苦、过上健康生活);②中间阐述成为好医生的条件:需具备丰富医学知识,同时要细心、有耐心、对病人负责;③结尾说明实现梦想的行动:努力学习所有课程,尤其重视科学学科,课余学习基础医学知识,坚信坚持努力就能实现梦想。
【答案】My dream job
My dream job is to be a doctor. I hope to help sick people reduce their pain and live a healthy happy life.
To be a good doctor, I need rich medical knowledge, and I must be careful, patient and responsible to every patient.
From now on, I will work hard at all my lessons, especially science. I will also learn more basic medical knowledge in my free time. I am sure my dream can come true if I keep trying.
【知识点】英语书面表达、职业话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“梦想职业”这一常见话题命题,考查学生的话题词汇运用、逻辑组织及书面表达能力,要求明确、要点清晰,学生易上手,需注意紧扣三个要求展开,保证语言简洁通顺。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作遵循“总-分”结构:①开篇点明梦想职业是医生,说明其意义(帮助病人减轻痛苦、过上健康生活);②中间阐述成为好医生的条件:需具备丰富医学知识,同时要细心、有耐心、对病人负责;③结尾说明实现梦想的行动:努力学习所有课程,尤其重视科学学科,课余学习基础医学知识,坚信坚持努力就能实现梦想。
【答案】My dream job
My dream job is to be a doctor. I hope to help sick people reduce their pain and live a healthy happy life.
To be a good doctor, I need rich medical knowledge, and I must be careful, patient and responsible to every patient.
From now on, I will work hard at all my lessons, especially science. I will also learn more basic medical knowledge in my free time. I am sure my dream can come true if I keep trying.
【知识点】英语书面表达、职业话题写作
【点评】本题围绕“梦想职业”这一常见话题命题,考查学生的话题词汇运用、逻辑组织及书面表达能力,要求明确、要点清晰,学生易上手,需注意紧扣三个要求展开,保证语言简洁通顺。
【难度系数】0.5
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