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七、书面表达。(满分25分)
悦纳自我，方能拥有愉悦生活，你是否具备诸多突出的个人品质?你是否善于聆听，愿意帮助他人排忧解惑?你是否在面对自身天生不足时不放弃，勇毅前行?你是否为实现梦想而孜孜以求?……请你结合自身实际,以“I'm proud of myself”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
内容：
1. What makes you proud of yourself;
2. What you once did to make you proud of yourself;
3. What you will do to improve yourself in the future.
注意：
1.词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities ortalents. And I'm proud that
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we' ll stay happier and healthier.
悦纳自我，方能拥有愉悦生活，你是否具备诸多突出的个人品质?你是否善于聆听，愿意帮助他人排忧解惑?你是否在面对自身天生不足时不放弃，勇毅前行?你是否为实现梦想而孜孜以求?……请你结合自身实际,以“I'm proud of myself”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
内容：
1. What makes you proud of yourself;
2. What you once did to make you proud of yourself;
3. What you will do to improve yourself in the future.
注意：
1.词数90左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中请勿提及真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities ortalents. And I'm proud that
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we' ll stay happier and healthier.
答案
One possible version：
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a boy with a strong will.
I used to be a weak boy in my primary school. I was often ill and always failed my exams. But I didn't give up. I began to do exercise every day and spent more time on my study. I tried my best to do everything well. I'm not only healthier but also a top student now.
In the future, I'll not only study harder but also help my classmates more. I'm sure I'll become better and better.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
I'm proud of myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a boy with a strong will.
I used to be a weak boy in my primary school. I was often ill and always failed my exams. But I didn't give up. I began to do exercise every day and spent more time on my study. I tried my best to do everything well. I'm not only healthier but also a top student now.
In the future, I'll not only study harder but also help my classmates more. I'm sure I'll become better and better.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题书面表达题，要求以“I'm proud of myself”为题，结合自身实际完成短文，需涵盖三个核心内容：让自己骄傲的个人品质、曾为这份骄傲付出的具体行动、未来自我提升的计划。解题时需先确定核心品质，选取贴合自身的具体事例支撑，规划未来行动，同时注意词数要求，衔接给定的开头结尾，避免提及真实个人信息。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定核心品质：选取“坚强的意志”作为让自己骄傲的品质，契合成长类话题；2. 补充具体事例：结合过去的困难（小学时体弱多病、考试失利），描述采取的行动（每日锻炼、花时间学习）及结果（变健康、成尖子生），使内容真实；3. 规划未来行动：明确未来要更努力学习、帮助同学，呼应主题；4. 检查调整：确保覆盖所有要求，词数符合90左右，语言简洁准确，衔接自然。
【答案】I'm proud of myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a boy with a strong will.
I used to be a weak boy in my primary school. I was often ill and always failed my exams. But I didn't give up. I began to do exercise every day and spent more time on my study. I tried my best to do everything well. I'm not only healthier but also a top student now.
In the future, I'll not only study harder but also help my classmates more. I'm sure I'll become better and better.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、个人成长话题
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个内容要点，事例具体生动，语言符合初中英语写作要求，传递了积极向上的价值观，是一篇优秀的同类话题写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 确定核心品质：选取“坚强的意志”作为让自己骄傲的品质，契合成长类话题；2. 补充具体事例：结合过去的困难（小学时体弱多病、考试失利），描述采取的行动（每日锻炼、花时间学习）及结果（变健康、成尖子生），使内容真实；3. 规划未来行动：明确未来要更努力学习、帮助同学，呼应主题；4. 检查调整：确保覆盖所有要求，词数符合90左右，语言简洁准确，衔接自然。
【答案】I'm proud of myself
Everyone is unique in the world. We should be proud that we each have our own good qualities or talents. And I'm proud that I'm a boy with a strong will.
I used to be a weak boy in my primary school. I was often ill and always failed my exams. But I didn't give up. I began to do exercise every day and spent more time on my study. I tried my best to do everything well. I'm not only healthier but also a top student now.
In the future, I'll not only study harder but also help my classmates more. I'm sure I'll become better and better.
Be proud of ourselves and accept what we already have, and we'll stay happier and healthier.
【知识点】英语书面表达、话题作文、个人成长话题
【点评】该范文紧扣主题，完整覆盖题目要求的三个内容要点，事例具体生动，语言符合初中英语写作要求，传递了积极向上的价值观，是一篇优秀的同类话题写作范例。
【难度系数】0.5
