2025年同步练习目标与测试八年级英语上册沪教版第35页答案
三、书面表达
假如你是李辉,学校英文报社即将举办主题为“A digital device in my life”的英语征文比赛,请你写一篇短文参加比赛,介绍生活中的一件数字设备。内容包括:
1. 设备介绍;
2. 正面影响;
3. 负面影响。
要求:
1. 字数为80—100;
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A digital device in my life







答案

A digital device in my life
Hi, I'm Li Hui. Today I want to talk about a digital device in my life. It is my smartphone. It's a small, but very powerful tool.
First of all, let me tell you something about its positive effects. I can stay connected with my friends and family by calling and texting them. Besides, it also helps me learn new things online.
However, there are some negative effects too. Sometimes, I find myself spending too much time on my phone, especially on social media.
In conclusion, my smartphone is a big part of my life. I should use it wisely.

解析

【分析】
本题为英语征文写作题,主题为“A digital device in my life”,要求涵盖设备介绍、正面影响、负面影响三个要点,字数控制在80—100词。解题思路:1. 选取贴近学生生活的数字设备(如智能手机),便于展开内容;2. 开头点明要介绍的设备,说明其基本属性;3. 分述正面影响(如联系亲友、在线学习);4. 说明负面影响(如过度使用社交媒体);5. 结尾总结并提出合理使用的观点,确保内容连贯、符合字数要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路,先开头引入设备(智能手机),说明其是小巧但功能强大的工具;再阐述正面影响:通过通话、短信联系亲友,还能在线学习新知识;接着说明负面影响:有时会花过多时间在社交媒体上;最后总结,强调要明智使用智能手机,确保涵盖所有要求要点,语言流畅,符合字数要求。
【答案】
A digital device in my life
Hi, I'm Li Hui. Today I want to talk about a digital device in my life. It is my smartphone. It's a small, but very powerful tool.
First of all, let me tell you something about its positive effects. I can stay connected with my friends and family by calling and texting them. Besides, it also helps me learn new things online.
However, there are some negative effects too. Sometimes, I find myself spending too much time on my phone, especially on social media.
In conclusion, my smartphone is a big part of my life. I should use it wisely.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点整合、语篇连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,完整覆盖设备介绍、正面影响、负面影响三个要求要点,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言简洁明了,符合80—100词的字数要求,是一篇符合要求的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.7