十二 书面表达。(9分)
假如你是Chen Jie,你周末将去自然公园。请根据图片提示,以“My Trip to the Nature Park”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你要去的地点以及你的准备事项吧。不少于5句话。

假如你是Chen Jie,你周末将去自然公园。请根据图片提示,以“My Trip to the Nature Park”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你要去的地点以及你的准备事项吧。不少于5句话。
My Trip to the Nature Park
Hello, I'm Chen Jie. This weekend, I'll go to the nature park with my parents. There are high mountains and a clear lake in the park.
I check the weather report. It will be sunny. There will also be wind. So I need to wear a hat and take a coat. I also put some water and food in my bag.
We can't swim in the water there. We can walk around and enjoy the view. I can't wait for my trip!
答案
参考范文:
My Trip to the Nature Park
Hello, I'm Chen Jie. This weekend, I'll go to the nature park with my parents. There are high mountains and a clear lake in the park. I check the weather report. It will be sunny. There will also be wind. So I need to wear a hat and take a coat. I also put some water and food in my bag. We can't swim in the water there. We can walk around and enjoy the view. I can't wait for my trip!
My Trip to the Nature Park
Hello, I'm Chen Jie. This weekend, I'll go to the nature park with my parents. There are high mountains and a clear lake in the park. I check the weather report. It will be sunny. There will also be wind. So I need to wear a hat and take a coat. I also put some water and food in my bag. We can't swim in the water there. We can walk around and enjoy the view. I can't wait for my trip!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题,要求以Chen Jie的身份,围绕周末去自然公园的行程写作。解题思路:1. 明确文章主题,围绕去自然公园的相关内容展开;2. 结合图片提示(自然公园景色、天气、准备物品、禁止游泳标志),梳理写作要点:介绍自身身份、出行时间与同行人员、公园景色、天气情况、准备的物品、注意事项;3. 运用一般将来时组织语句,确保不少于5句话,语句通顺、符合逻辑。
【解析】根据题目要求,以“My Trip to the Nature Park”为题,依次介绍:自己是Chen Jie,周末将和父母去自然公园;描述公园有高山和清澈的湖;查看天气得知晴朗且有风,因此准备帽子、外套、水和食物;提到公园禁止游泳,最后表达对旅行的期待,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】My Trip to the Nature Park
Hello, I'm Chen Jie. This weekend, I'll go to the nature park with my parents. There are high mountains and a clear lake in the park. I check the weather report. It will be sunny. There will also be wind. So I need to wear a hat and take a coat. I also put some water and food in my bag. We can't swim in the water there. We can walk around and enjoy the view. I can't wait for my trip!
【知识点】英语书面表达;一般将来时
【点评】本题结合图片提示考查英语书面表达能力,要求学生整合图片信息完成写作,运用一般将来时描述计划,内容贴近生活,能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求,以“My Trip to the Nature Park”为题,依次介绍:自己是Chen Jie,周末将和父母去自然公园;描述公园有高山和清澈的湖;查看天气得知晴朗且有风,因此准备帽子、外套、水和食物;提到公园禁止游泳,最后表达对旅行的期待,形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】My Trip to the Nature Park
Hello, I'm Chen Jie. This weekend, I'll go to the nature park with my parents. There are high mountains and a clear lake in the park. I check the weather report. It will be sunny. There will also be wind. So I need to wear a hat and take a coat. I also put some water and food in my bag. We can't swim in the water there. We can walk around and enjoy the view. I can't wait for my trip!
【知识点】英语书面表达;一般将来时
【点评】本题结合图片提示考查英语书面表达能力,要求学生整合图片信息完成写作,运用一般将来时描述计划,内容贴近生活,能有效考查学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.5
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