【写作导引】
本单元以“旅游景点”为话题，属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“历史、社会与文化”和“人与自然”主题范畴中的“自然生态”主题群。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：介绍自然景点或名胜古迹的基本情况、文化背景及特色景观等。
【写作任务】
假如你的法国笔友 Mike 想了解一下北京，
请向他简单介绍一下。
提示：capital 首都，the Palace Museum 故宫，Beijing Roast Duck 北京烤鸭
要求：
1. 内容必须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥。
2. 语言通顺，条理清晰，语法正确，书写规范。
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名或学校名称。
4. 不少于 60 词。

Beijing is the capital of China. It is famous for its long history and culture.
There are many places of interest in Beijing such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. When you go to Beijing, the first place to go is Tian'anmen Square. Beijing Roast Duck is one of the most famous foods in Beijing. You can taste it. It is very delicious.
People there are very friendly.
I think Beijing is a great place to visit.
亮点词块
① be famous for 因……而著名
② such as 例如
③ the first place to go 第一个要去的地方
④ one of the most famous... 最著名的……之一
高分句子
⑤ There are many places of interest in Beijing...（There be 句型）
⑥ When you go to Beijing, the first place to go is Tian'anmen Square.（When 引导的时间状语从句）

【分析】首先明确写作任务：给法国笔友Mike介绍北京，需包含提示的“capital（首都）”“the Palace Museum（故宫）”“Beijing Roast Duck（北京烤鸭）”，同时满足内容完整、语言通顺、不少于60词等要求。写作采用“总-分-总”结构：先点明北京是中国首都，再介绍北京的特色景点（故宫）与美食（北京烤鸭），最后总结赞美北京，运用所学常用短语和句型提升写作质量。
【解析】按照写作思路，先开篇点明核心信息：Beijing is the capital of China. 接着介绍特色景点，融入提示内容：There are many famous places in Beijing, such as the Palace Museum. 再补充特色美食：Beijing Roast Duck is a must-try delicious food here. 最后总结表达对北京的认可：I think Beijing is a wonderful place to visit. 全程确保语言通顺、符合笔友交流语气，包含所有提示内容，字数达标。
【答案】Beijing is the capital of China. It is famous for its long history and culture. There are many places of interest in Beijing such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. When you go to Beijing, the first place to go is Tian'anmen Square. Beijing Roast Duck is one of the most famous foods in Beijing. You can taste it. It is very delicious. People there are very friendly. I think Beijing is a great place to visit.
【知识点】英语应用文写作（介绍类）；常用短语运用；There be句型与状语从句运用
【点评】该写作符合任务要求，完整包含提示信息，结构清晰，语言通顺，运用了亮点词块和高分句型，贴合笔友交流的语气，是一篇优秀的介绍类英语短文。
【难度系数】0.7

假如你是李华，现在正在某个城市游玩，请根据下面的提示，给你的朋友 Peter 写一封电子邮件，向他介绍一下你所在的城市或旅游景点。
提示: 1. Where is it? 2. Why do you think it’s a good place?
3. What can people enjoy/visit/eat/buy there? 4. How do you feel?
要求: 1. 内容必须包含所给提示信息，可适当发挥。
2. 语言通顺，条理清晰，语法正确，书写规范。
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名或学校名称。
4. 不少于 60 词。
Dear Peter,



Yours,
Li Hua

写作提优练
范文:
Dear Peter,
I'm in Qingdao with my family now. It's a very beautiful city in China.
Qingdao is famous for its beaches. The sand is soft and the sea is perfect for swimming and relaxing. We visit the Qingdao Museum today. We learn about the city's history and culture. The food in Qingdao is very delicious. My parents try the famous Qingdao beer. That has a good taste. Local seafood is also a must-try. I can't wait to share these with you.
In a word, my trip to Qingdao is wonderful.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】
本题是英语应用文写作题，要求写一封电子邮件介绍游玩的城市。解题思路：1. 遵循邮件格式（称呼、正文、落款）；2. 覆盖所有提示点：说明所在城市及位置、阐述城市是好地方的原因、列举可游玩/品尝/购买的内容、表达自身感受；3. 确保语言通顺、语法正确，无真实信息，字数达标。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头点明所在城市（如青岛）及位置；2. 说明城市优势（如以海滩闻名，环境优美）；3. 列举游玩项目（海滩游泳、逛博物馆）和美食（海鲜、青岛啤酒）；4. 结尾表达对旅途的感受，确保所有提示点都包含，符合邮件规范。
【答案】
写作提优练
范文:
Dear Peter,
I'm in Qingdao with my family now. It's a very beautiful city in China.
Qingdao is famous for its beaches. The sand is soft and the sea is perfect for swimming and relaxing. We visit the Qingdao Museum today. We learn about the city's history and culture. The food in Qingdao is very delicious. My parents try the famous Qingdao beer. That has a good taste. Local seafood is also a must-try. I can't wait to share these with you.
In a word, my trip to Qingdao is wonderful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、旅游话题英语写作
【点评】
本题考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，围绕旅游话题展开，提示明确，贴近生活，既要求掌握邮件格式，又考查语言组织能力，是英语学习中常见的实用题型。
【难度系数】
0.5