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Ⅷ.书面表达
生命,对于每个人来说只有一次,我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢? Teens 正在举办以“Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives”为题的征文活动,请你从提供的六个类别里选择三个,谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会。
注意:词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯。
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important.
生命,对于每个人来说只有一次,我们该如何保护自己的人身安全呢? Teens 正在举办以“Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives”为题的征文活动,请你从提供的六个类别里选择三个,谈谈相应的保护自身安全的措施,并分享你的体会。
注意:词数 100 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯。
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important.
答案
Ⅷ. One possible version:
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, school safety. We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don't fight with them. If we really have trouble (in) communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, traffic safety. There are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, internet safety. We should surf the internet safely. Especially, don't give out your personal information when surfing the internet. Moreover, we shouldn't meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
思路梳理 本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据短文的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, school safety. We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don't fight with them. If we really have trouble (in) communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, traffic safety. There are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, internet safety. We should surf the internet safely. Especially, don't give out your personal information when surfing the internet. Moreover, we shouldn't meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
思路梳理 本文主要采用第一人称来展开写作,时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题,根据短文的内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作;可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等;语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;层次要分明、条理要清晰。
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，主题是“Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives”，要求从给定的六个安全类别中选3类，每类写2点保护措施，最后写1-2点体会。解题思路：①审题确定人称（第一人称）、时态（一般现在时），明确写作要求；②从给定类别中选易展开的三类（如学校安全、交通安全、网络安全）；③每类对应写符合学生身份的具体措施；④结尾结合主题写体会，升华主旨；⑤控制词数，保证语句连贯、条理清晰。
【解析】首先承接开头点明安全的重要性：Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions. 然后分三类阐述措施：①学校安全：We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don't fight with them. If we have trouble communicating, ask teachers for help. ②交通安全：There are more cars now. We must follow traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing streets. ③网络安全：We should surf the internet safely. Don't give out personal information online. Don't meet online friends alone. 最后结尾升华：Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【答案】Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, school safety. We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don't fight with them. If we really have trouble (in) communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, traffic safety. There are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, internet safety. We should surf the internet safely. Especially, don't give out your personal information when surfing the internet. Moreover, we shouldn't meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【知识点】英语书面表达、安全话题词汇、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合学生日常安全实际，考查实用写作能力，紧扣要点且贴近学生生活，易于学生构思与表达，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接开头点明安全的重要性：Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions. 然后分三类阐述措施：①学校安全：We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don't fight with them. If we have trouble communicating, ask teachers for help. ②交通安全：There are more cars now. We must follow traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing streets. ③网络安全：We should surf the internet safely. Don't give out personal information online. Don't meet online friends alone. 最后结尾升华：Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【答案】Protect Ourselves, Cherish Our Lives
Safety is very important. Life is only once for everybody. It's important to cherish our lives. As students, what should we do? Here are some suggestions.
First, school safety. We should get on well with our classmates at school. Don't fight with them. If we really have trouble (in) communicating with each other, we can ask our teachers for help. Second, traffic safety. There are more and more cars nowadays. It is necessary for us to follow the traffic rules. Walk on the zebra crossing when crossing the street. Third, internet safety. We should surf the internet safely. Especially, don't give out your personal information when surfing the internet. Moreover, we shouldn't meet online friends alone.
Safety comes first. Please guard against any possible danger anytime.
【知识点】英语书面表达、安全话题词汇、一般现在时
【点评】本题结合学生日常安全实际，考查实用写作能力，紧扣要点且贴近学生生活，易于学生构思与表达，能有效检验学生的语言运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
