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九、(2025·盐城东台期中改编)书面表达(20分)
为了促进东台旅游业的发展,让更多人了解东台的风土人情,东
台市实验中学开展以"My Hometown"为主题的英语征文活动。请
你根据以下提示写一篇介绍东台的文章。
1. Where is Dongtai?(in Jiangsu Province...)
2. Which places of interest can you visit?(Huanghai Forest Park,
Anfeng Ancient Town...)
3. What are the local food and handicraft? (Dongtai Fish Soup
Noodles, Dongtai Hair Embroidery 东台发绣...)
注意事项:1.要点齐全,适当发挥,文章连贯;2.文中不得出现真
实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数90左右,文章给出的开头和结尾不计入
总词数。
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown,
Dongtai.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm
sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
为了促进东台旅游业的发展,让更多人了解东台的风土人情,东
台市实验中学开展以"My Hometown"为主题的英语征文活动。请
你根据以下提示写一篇介绍东台的文章。
1. Where is Dongtai?(in Jiangsu Province...)
2. Which places of interest can you visit?(Huanghai Forest Park,
Anfeng Ancient Town...)
3. What are the local food and handicraft? (Dongtai Fish Soup
Noodles, Dongtai Hair Embroidery 东台发绣...)
注意事项:1.要点齐全,适当发挥,文章连贯;2.文中不得出现真
实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数90左右,文章给出的开头和结尾不计入
总词数。
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown,
Dongtai.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm
sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
答案
九、One possible version:
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown, Dongtai.
My hometown, Dongtai, is a beautiful seaside city in Jiangsu Province. It takes over 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:时态为"一般现在时"。③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍东台;第二步,从地理位置、名胜古迹、当地美食以及手工艺品等方面具体介绍东台;第三步,书写结语,欢迎大家来到东台。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be famous for因……而著名 ③kind and friendly善良而友好
[高分句型]
①It takes over 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing.
②If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park.
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown, Dongtai.
My hometown, Dongtai, is a beautiful seaside city in Jiangsu Province. It takes over 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。②时态:时态为"一般现在时"。③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,介绍东台;第二步,从地理位置、名胜古迹、当地美食以及手工艺品等方面具体介绍东台;第三步,书写结语,欢迎大家来到东台。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣 ②be famous for因……而著名 ③kind and friendly善良而友好
[高分句型]
①It takes over 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing.
②If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语材料类书面表达，主题为“My Hometown”，需围绕给定的三个核心要点（地理位置、名胜古迹、当地美食与手工艺品）展开写作，时态以一般现在时为主，需注意行文连贯、要点齐全，词数控制在90左右，不得出现真实信息，需结合给定开头结尾补充中间内容，契合促进东台旅游业发展的征文目的。
【解析】
写作分三步：1. 承接给定开头，补充东台的地理位置（位于江苏省，可合理添加从南京抵达的交通时间丰富内容）；2. 依次介绍两处景点（黄海森林公园、安丰古镇），再说明当地特色美食（东台鱼汤面）与手工艺品（东台发绣），适当运用学过的短语（如be famous for、be interested in）和句型（如if引导的条件句）；3. 呼应结尾，点明当地人民的友好，完成全文。
【答案】
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown, Dongtai.
My hometown, Dongtai, is a beautiful seaside city in Jiangsu Province. It takes over 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时运用、要点式作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，行文连贯，运用了亮点词汇与高分句型，适当发挥丰富内容，符合征文要求，能清晰介绍东台的风土人情，契合促进东台旅游业发展的征文目的。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题为英语材料类书面表达，主题为“My Hometown”，需围绕给定的三个核心要点（地理位置、名胜古迹、当地美食与手工艺品）展开写作，时态以一般现在时为主，需注意行文连贯、要点齐全，词数控制在90左右，不得出现真实信息，需结合给定开头结尾补充中间内容，契合促进东台旅游业发展的征文目的。
【解析】
写作分三步：1. 承接给定开头，补充东台的地理位置（位于江苏省，可合理添加从南京抵达的交通时间丰富内容）；2. 依次介绍两处景点（黄海森林公园、安丰古镇），再说明当地特色美食（东台鱼汤面）与手工艺品（东台发绣），适当运用学过的短语（如be famous for、be interested in）和句型（如if引导的条件句）；3. 呼应结尾，点明当地人民的友好，完成全文。
【答案】
My Hometown
I would like to tell you something about my hometown, Dongtai.
My hometown, Dongtai, is a beautiful seaside city in Jiangsu Province. It takes over 2 hours by train to get to Dongtai from Nanjing. There are many interesting places in Dongtai. If you want to enjoy the beauty of nature, you can visit Huanghai Forest Park. If you are interested in the local people's traditional way of life, you can walk around Anfeng Ancient Town. If you come to Dongtai, don't miss delicious Dongtai Fish Soup Noodles. Dongtai is also famous for Dongtai Hair Embroidery. It has great cultural value.
People here are kind and friendly. Welcome to Dongtai. I'm sure you'll have a fantastic time here.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、一般现在时运用、要点式作文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，要点齐全，行文连贯，运用了亮点词汇与高分句型，适当发挥丰富内容，符合征文要求，能清晰介绍东台的风土人情，契合促进东台旅游业发展的征文目的。
【难度系数】
0.7
