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七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计15分)
66. 暑假即将来临,你校英文报新增“Cool Summer Stories”栏目,向全校学生征稿。请你根据栏目海报信息写一篇英语短文,分享你去年暑假的一次经历与收获。
Cool Summer Stories
Dear friends,
Do you have any special memories of your last summer holiday? Write and share!
· How was your last summer holiday?
□fun □exciting □meaningful □unforgettable
· What did you do last summer holiday?
□took a trip □learnt a new skill(技能)
□visited grandparents □did volunteer(志愿者) work □...
· What can you learn from it?
send your article to schoolnewspaper@mail. com
要求:(1)包含所给要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;(3)70词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last summer holiday was (fun/exciting/meaningful/unforgettable/...).
66. 暑假即将来临,你校英文报新增“Cool Summer Stories”栏目,向全校学生征稿。请你根据栏目海报信息写一篇英语短文,分享你去年暑假的一次经历与收获。
Cool Summer Stories
Dear friends,
Do you have any special memories of your last summer holiday? Write and share!
· How was your last summer holiday?
□fun □exciting □meaningful □unforgettable
· What did you do last summer holiday?
□took a trip □learnt a new skill(技能)
□visited grandparents □did volunteer(志愿者) work □...
· What can you learn from it?
send your article to schoolnewspaper@mail. com
要求:(1)包含所给要点,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;(3)70词左右。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My last summer holiday was (fun/exciting/meaningful/unforgettable/...).
答案
66. One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
(85 words)
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
(85 words)
解析
【分析】
首先审题明确写作要求：需分享去年暑假经历，涵盖假期感受、具体做的事、收获三个要点，词数70左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息。接着选择合适内容：确定假期感受为unforgettable，具体经历选“去乡下看望祖父母”，补充喂鸡、摘菜、挤奶、做饭等细节，最后点明收获（与祖父母更亲近、理解劳动的重要性），写作时注意语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定开头的假期感受词，如unforgettable；2. 叙述具体经历：去乡下祖父母家，帮忙做喂鸡、摘菜、挤牛奶、做饭等事；3. 阐述收获：通过这次经历，和祖父母关系更亲密，懂得劳动的意义；4. 调整语句，确保通顺连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖假期感受、具体经历和收获三个要点，内容充实具体，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合征稿要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题明确写作要求：需分享去年暑假经历，涵盖假期感受、具体做的事、收获三个要点，词数70左右，开头已给出，不得出现真实信息。接着选择合适内容：确定假期感受为unforgettable，具体经历选“去乡下看望祖父母”，补充喂鸡、摘菜、挤奶、做饭等细节，最后点明收获（与祖父母更亲近、理解劳动的重要性），写作时注意语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 确定开头的假期感受词，如unforgettable；2. 叙述具体经历：去乡下祖父母家，帮忙做喂鸡、摘菜、挤牛奶、做饭等事；3. 阐述收获：通过这次经历，和祖父母关系更亲密，懂得劳动的意义；4. 调整语句，确保通顺连贯，词数符合要求，无真实信息。
【答案】
One possible version:
My last summer holiday was unforgettable. I visited my grandparents in the countryside and had a great time.
During the holiday, I did many things with my grandparents. I helped them feed chickens and pick vegetables. It was so much fun. I also tried to milk a cow with them, and even cooked some local food for them. It was not easy.
Because of this experience, I get closer to my grandparents and I begin to understand the importance of hard work. All these warm memories will stay with me.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、要点整合、语句连贯
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整涵盖假期感受、具体经历和收获三个要点，内容充实具体，语言通顺自然，符合词数要求，是一篇符合征稿要求的优秀短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
