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你校英语角正在举行以“Lifelong learning”为题的征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
写作要求:1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 短文必须包含所有要点，不要逐句翻译。可适当发挥，使行文连贯、通顺。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体:议论文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Lifelong learning
When we graduate from high school or university, is learning done? The answer is "No". Now in our countries, it is necessary for us to continue learning in our whole life.
实战练笔，夯实写作功底
你校英语角正在举行以“Lifelong learning”为题的征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语写一篇短文参赛。
写作要求:1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 短文必须包含所有要点，不要逐句翻译。可适当发挥，使行文连贯、通顺。
[思路点拨] 1. 文体:议论文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Lifelong learning
When we graduate from high school or university, is learning done? The answer is "No". Now in our countries, it is necessary for us to continue learning in our whole life.
Why is lifelong learning necessary and important? After leaving school, we have too much knowledge to get in society. We can learn what we don't know at school, such as how to get on well with other people, how to live healthily and happily and so on.
We can learn in many ways. We can read books at home freely. We can go to libraries and museums to read books about all kinds of subjects. We can learn what we need on the Internet. Going travelling is another way of learning.
Learning should be in our lives all along. Learning can make us more perfect. Learning can make our dreams come true.
It's never too late to learn.
答案
One possible version:
Lifelong learning
When we graduate from high school or university, is learning done? The answer is "No". Now in our countries, it is necessary for us to continue learning in our whole life.
Why is lifelong learning necessary and important? After leaving school, we have too much knowledge to get in society. We can learn what we don't know at school, such as how to get on well with other people, how to live healthily and happily and so on.
We can learn in many ways. We can read books at home freely. We can go to libraries and museums to read books about all kinds of subjects. We can learn what we need on the Internet. Going travelling is another way of learning.
Learning should be in our lives all along. Learning can make us more perfect. Learning can make our dreams come true.
It's never too late to learn.
Lifelong learning
When we graduate from high school or university, is learning done? The answer is "No". Now in our countries, it is necessary for us to continue learning in our whole life.
Why is lifelong learning necessary and important? After leaving school, we have too much knowledge to get in society. We can learn what we don't know at school, such as how to get on well with other people, how to live healthily and happily and so on.
We can learn in many ways. We can read books at home freely. We can go to libraries and museums to read books about all kinds of subjects. We can learn what we need on the Internet. Going travelling is another way of learning.
Learning should be in our lives all along. Learning can make us more perfect. Learning can make our dreams come true.
It's never too late to learn.
解析
【分析】
这道题是主题为“Lifelong learning”的英语征文写作，解题时首先明确核心要求：一是文体为议论文，统一用一般现在时，以第一人称为主；二是要覆盖全部核心要点，依次完成终身学习必要性论述、多元学习途径介绍、学习价值升华三个部分；三是词数控制在100左右，给定开头不计入总词数。我们可以顺着思路推进：先承接给定开头用设问引出必要性解释，说明离开校园后还有大量校园未教授的实用社会知识需要掌握，再自然罗列不同的终身学习渠道，最后点明终身学习对个人成长的意义，搭配相关谚语收尾让文章更出彩，全程注意行文连贯，不要生硬逐句翻译要点。
【解析】
步骤1：承接给定开头，抛出设问“Why is lifelong learning necessary and important?”，展开解释离开校园后我们仍需要掌握大量校园里没有学到的社会知识，比如人际交往、健康生活的方法等，完成必要性部分的论述。
步骤2：自然过渡到学习途径的介绍，串联居家阅读、前往图书馆博物馆、线上获取所需知识、旅行等多种学习方式，让内容充实不生硬。
步骤3：最后论述终身学习的长期价值，点明学习贯穿人生始终，能帮助个人完善自我、实现梦想，最后用经典谚语“It's never too late to learn”收尾呼应主题，检查所有要点是否覆盖，时态是否统一，词数是否符合要求，调整语句让衔接更顺滑。
【答案】
One possible version:
Lifelong learning
When we graduate from high school or university, is learning done? The answer is "No". Now in our countries, it is necessary for us to continue learning in our whole life.
Why is lifelong learning necessary and important? After leaving school, we have too much knowledge to get in society. We can learn what we don't know at school, such as how to get on well with other people, how to live healthily and happily and so on.
We can learn in many ways. We can read books at home freely. We can go to libraries and museums to read books about all kinds of subjects. We can learn what we need on the Internet. Going travelling is another way of learning.
Learning should be in our lives all along. Learning can make us more perfect. Learning can make our dreams come true.
It's never too late to learn.
【知识点】
1. 英语议论文写作
2. 主题作文谋篇布局
3. 英语常用谚语运用
【点评】
该参考范文完全符合题目所有要求，行文逻辑清晰，按照“点明观点-论证必要性-列举学习途径-升华主旨”的结构展开，没有生硬逐句翻译要点，衔接自然流畅，所有核心要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，收尾谚语精准呼应主题，非常贴合英语角征文的场景，学生写作时可以参考该逻辑框架，避免内容零散混乱。
【难度系数】
0.6
这道题是主题为“Lifelong learning”的英语征文写作，解题时首先明确核心要求：一是文体为议论文，统一用一般现在时，以第一人称为主；二是要覆盖全部核心要点，依次完成终身学习必要性论述、多元学习途径介绍、学习价值升华三个部分；三是词数控制在100左右，给定开头不计入总词数。我们可以顺着思路推进：先承接给定开头用设问引出必要性解释，说明离开校园后还有大量校园未教授的实用社会知识需要掌握，再自然罗列不同的终身学习渠道，最后点明终身学习对个人成长的意义，搭配相关谚语收尾让文章更出彩，全程注意行文连贯，不要生硬逐句翻译要点。
【解析】
步骤1：承接给定开头，抛出设问“Why is lifelong learning necessary and important?”，展开解释离开校园后我们仍需要掌握大量校园里没有学到的社会知识，比如人际交往、健康生活的方法等，完成必要性部分的论述。
步骤2：自然过渡到学习途径的介绍，串联居家阅读、前往图书馆博物馆、线上获取所需知识、旅行等多种学习方式，让内容充实不生硬。
步骤3：最后论述终身学习的长期价值，点明学习贯穿人生始终，能帮助个人完善自我、实现梦想，最后用经典谚语“It's never too late to learn”收尾呼应主题，检查所有要点是否覆盖，时态是否统一，词数是否符合要求，调整语句让衔接更顺滑。
【答案】
One possible version:
Lifelong learning
When we graduate from high school or university, is learning done? The answer is "No". Now in our countries, it is necessary for us to continue learning in our whole life.
Why is lifelong learning necessary and important? After leaving school, we have too much knowledge to get in society. We can learn what we don't know at school, such as how to get on well with other people, how to live healthily and happily and so on.
We can learn in many ways. We can read books at home freely. We can go to libraries and museums to read books about all kinds of subjects. We can learn what we need on the Internet. Going travelling is another way of learning.
Learning should be in our lives all along. Learning can make us more perfect. Learning can make our dreams come true.
It's never too late to learn.
【知识点】
1. 英语议论文写作
2. 主题作文谋篇布局
3. 英语常用谚语运用
【点评】
该参考范文完全符合题目所有要求，行文逻辑清晰，按照“点明观点-论证必要性-列举学习途径-升华主旨”的结构展开，没有生硬逐句翻译要点，衔接自然流畅，所有核心要点全部覆盖，词数符合要求，收尾谚语精准呼应主题，非常贴合英语角征文的场景，学生写作时可以参考该逻辑框架，避免内容零散混乱。
【难度系数】
0.6
