六、书面表达
49.动物与人类的生活息息相关。人类应该关爱所有动物,关注濒危动物。你最喜欢哪种动物呢?请根据思维导图的提示信息,以“My Favourite Animal”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你最喜欢的小动物。

注意:(1)须包含思维导图的所有信息,可适当拓展；
(2)不少于60词(标题已给出,不计入总词数)；
(3)不得出现真实个人信息。
My Favourite Animal

49. One possible version:
My Favourite Animal
Of all the animals, I like the panda best. It is a symbol of China. The panda is so cute and lively that it is loved by people all around the world.
Pandas mainly come from Sichuan and Shaanxi provinces in China. They are black and white. They have two big eyes and short strong legs. Bamboos are pandas' favourite food. They like to live in quiet places.
I like pandas because they are friendly to people. But now there are fewer and fewer pandas. To protect them, we should stop cutting down trees. Let's work together to give them a nice home.

【分析】
本题要求以“My Favourite Animal”为题写英语短文，需紧扣思维导图的四个核心要点：1. 说明最喜欢的动物；2. 描述该动物的外貌特征；3. 阐述喜欢它的原因；4. 提出帮助动物的方法，同时要满足不少于60词、无真实个人信息、适当拓展的要求。写作时先确定具体动物，再围绕各要点组织内容，确保逻辑清晰、语句通顺。
【解析】
1. 开篇点明最喜欢的动物：选择熊猫，说明其作为中国象征的特点，引出喜爱之情；
2. 描述动物外貌与生活习性：介绍熊猫的产地、毛色、外形特征及食物、栖息环境，丰富内容；
3. 说明喜欢的原因：结合熊猫友好可爱的特质，解释喜爱的理由；
4. 提出帮助动物的方法：针对熊猫濒危的现状，提出停止砍伐树木、保护栖息地的措施，体现关爱动物的主题；
5. 检查字数与要点完整性，确保符合题目要求，语言准确自然。
【答案】
My Favourite Animal
Of all the animals, I like the panda best. It is a symbol of China. The panda is so cute and lively that it is loved by people all around the world.
Pandas mainly come from Sichuan and Shaanxi provinces in China. They are black and white. They have two big eyes and short strong legs. Bamboos are pandas' favourite food. They like to live in quiet places.
I like pandas because they are friendly to people. But now there are fewer and fewer pandas. To protect them, we should stop cutting down trees. Let's work together to give them a nice home.
【知识点】
英语书面表达；话题写作
【点评】
范文紧扣思维导图所有要点，内容完整充实，语言流畅自然，既介绍了熊猫的相关信息，又融入了保护动物的意识，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.3