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七、书面表达(本题有1小题,共计20分)(真题·台州天台)
76. 假设你是李华,你的英国好友 Peter 暑假将来中国参加暑期研学活动。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一个合适的研学项目。
要求:(1)邮件需包含所选项目的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右;(4)邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
76. 假设你是李华,你的英国好友 Peter 暑假将来中国参加暑期研学活动。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一个合适的研学项目。
要求:(1)邮件需包含所选项目的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右;(4)邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I strongly recommend the Forest Camp for your summer study programme.
It is located in the countryside where you can enjoy fresh air and beautiful nature. You will have the chance to cook local food and learn useful life skills like building a fire or setting up a tent. These experiences will not only be fun but also help you understand Chinese rural life.
I believe you will love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
(70 words)
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I highly recommend you join the History Camp. It's a fantastic way to dive into the rich culture of my country.
This camp is in the city centre, so it's very convenient to get to. The main activity is visiting famous museums where you can see ancient treasures and learn about China's long history, from the emperors to the Silk Road. It's much more interesting than just reading from books!
You will be amazed by what you see and learn. This camp will definitely give you a deeper understanding of China. I think it's the perfect choice for you.
I'm looking forward to your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
(105 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
话题:推荐与介绍。此题属于“人与社会”范畴,常考形式为向他人推荐一个活动、地点或项目并说明理由。
时态:主要使用一般现在时。描述项目特点和优点都用现在时。
要点:需明确推荐哪个项目,并详细介绍该项目的至少两个优势或特点,说服对方接受你的推荐。
【提纲演示】
开头:明确表达推荐→I'm writing to highly recommend the ... to you.→Without hesitation, I would suggest you choose the ...
正文:阐述推荐理由
理由一(核心特点一):→Firstly, it allows you to ... (e. g., immerse yourself in nature in the countryside)→好处:This will provide you with a refreshing and relaxing experience, completely different from the city life you're used to.
理由二(核心特点二):→What's more, you will have the opportunity to ... (e.g., learn to cook authentic local food)→好处:It's a fun and practical way to gain valuable life skills and understand Chinese culture more deeply.
总结强调:→I believe this programme perfectly matches your interests.→All these activities promise a unique and unforgettable summer for you.
结尾:表达期待与祝愿→I am sure you will have a wonderful time there.→I can't wait to hear about your amazing experience.
难题解析
【阅读理解】
C篇
文章通过对比申办城市数量的变化,指出举办奥运会的热度下降而世博会依然受欢迎的现象,并分析了原因:奥运会成本过高,而世博会成本相对较低且能更好地促进城市和国家的长远发展。
第23题:作者是如何展示奥运会受欢迎度下降的?文章第一段通过对比数据:"11个城市想申办2004年奥运会",而"2024年奥运会只有两个",通过比较数字(By comparing numbers)清晰地展示了这一趋势。
D篇
文章就如何根据个人性格(如外向/内向、爱冒险/爱计划、有条理/富有创意)来选择适合自己的兴趣爱好提供了建议,核心观点是找到自己真正享受的爱好最重要。
第29题:以下哪种爱好最适合条理性较差的人?文章最后一部分提到,条理性较差的人可以选择"更具创造性的爱好",比如"制作艺术品或开办广播节目",因为这需要不断寻找新主题,充满不确定性。C属于艺术创作,符合"更具创造性的爱好"这一描述。
【完形填空】
文章讲述了女孩Doudou自幼患有脑瘫,曾被断言终生无法行走。但在家人不放弃的坚持、自身的积极锻炼以及社会的关爱下,她不仅学会了走路,还顺利入学,并在学校活动中完成了首次表演,创造了生命的奇迹。故事体现了"只要努力,一切皆有可能"的积极主题。
第41题:上文提到Doudou被小学录取,母亲告诉她时,她既高兴又宽慰地说:"我以为他们不想要我。"这里表达的是Doudou曾担心学校因为她的残疾而不愿意接收她,want在此处意为"愿意接纳、想要接收"。因此,正确答案是C. want,体现了孩子内心对被接纳的渴望和曾经的不安。
第47题:在元旦庆祝活动中,她与同学一起完成了首次"表演",后文提到母亲陪她练习、为她加油,符合"表演"的准备过程。故答案为A。
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I strongly recommend the Forest Camp for your summer study programme.
It is located in the countryside where you can enjoy fresh air and beautiful nature. You will have the chance to cook local food and learn useful life skills like building a fire or setting up a tent. These experiences will not only be fun but also help you understand Chinese rural life.
I believe you will love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
(70 words)
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I highly recommend you join the History Camp. It's a fantastic way to dive into the rich culture of my country.
This camp is in the city centre, so it's very convenient to get to. The main activity is visiting famous museums where you can see ancient treasures and learn about China's long history, from the emperors to the Silk Road. It's much more interesting than just reading from books!
You will be amazed by what you see and learn. This camp will definitely give you a deeper understanding of China. I think it's the perfect choice for you.
I'm looking forward to your trip!
Yours,
Li Hua
(105 words)
写作指导
【话题点拨】
话题:推荐与介绍。此题属于“人与社会”范畴,常考形式为向他人推荐一个活动、地点或项目并说明理由。
时态:主要使用一般现在时。描述项目特点和优点都用现在时。
要点:需明确推荐哪个项目,并详细介绍该项目的至少两个优势或特点,说服对方接受你的推荐。
【提纲演示】
开头:明确表达推荐→I'm writing to highly recommend the ... to you.→Without hesitation, I would suggest you choose the ...
正文:阐述推荐理由
理由一(核心特点一):→Firstly, it allows you to ... (e. g., immerse yourself in nature in the countryside)→好处:This will provide you with a refreshing and relaxing experience, completely different from the city life you're used to.
理由二(核心特点二):→What's more, you will have the opportunity to ... (e.g., learn to cook authentic local food)→好处:It's a fun and practical way to gain valuable life skills and understand Chinese culture more deeply.
总结强调:→I believe this programme perfectly matches your interests.→All these activities promise a unique and unforgettable summer for you.
结尾:表达期待与祝愿→I am sure you will have a wonderful time there.→I can't wait to hear about your amazing experience.
难题解析
【阅读理解】
C篇
文章通过对比申办城市数量的变化,指出举办奥运会的热度下降而世博会依然受欢迎的现象,并分析了原因:奥运会成本过高,而世博会成本相对较低且能更好地促进城市和国家的长远发展。
第23题:作者是如何展示奥运会受欢迎度下降的?文章第一段通过对比数据:"11个城市想申办2004年奥运会",而"2024年奥运会只有两个",通过比较数字(By comparing numbers)清晰地展示了这一趋势。
D篇
文章就如何根据个人性格(如外向/内向、爱冒险/爱计划、有条理/富有创意)来选择适合自己的兴趣爱好提供了建议,核心观点是找到自己真正享受的爱好最重要。
第29题:以下哪种爱好最适合条理性较差的人?文章最后一部分提到,条理性较差的人可以选择"更具创造性的爱好",比如"制作艺术品或开办广播节目",因为这需要不断寻找新主题,充满不确定性。C属于艺术创作,符合"更具创造性的爱好"这一描述。
【完形填空】
文章讲述了女孩Doudou自幼患有脑瘫,曾被断言终生无法行走。但在家人不放弃的坚持、自身的积极锻炼以及社会的关爱下,她不仅学会了走路,还顺利入学,并在学校活动中完成了首次表演,创造了生命的奇迹。故事体现了"只要努力,一切皆有可能"的积极主题。
第41题:上文提到Doudou被小学录取,母亲告诉她时,她既高兴又宽慰地说:"我以为他们不想要我。"这里表达的是Doudou曾担心学校因为她的残疾而不愿意接收她,want在此处意为"愿意接纳、想要接收"。因此,正确答案是C. want,体现了孩子内心对被接纳的渴望和曾经的不安。
第47题:在元旦庆祝活动中,她与同学一起完成了首次"表演",后文提到母亲陪她练习、为她加油,符合"表演"的准备过程。故答案为A。
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：需从History Camp和Forest Camp中选一个项目，给好友Peter写一封80词左右的推荐邮件，包含至少两点项目信息，邮件首尾和第一句已给出。解题思路：1. 确定推荐项目（二选一即可，两个项目均有明确特点）；2. 结合插图信息，提取项目的两个核心特点作为推荐理由；3. 按邮件结构组织内容：承接已给开头明确推荐，正文阐述两点理由，结尾表达期待，使用一般现在时，避免真实信息，控制字数。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，明确推荐项目：I strongly recommend the Forest Camp for your summer study programme.
2. 介绍项目第一个特点（地点与环境）：It is in the countryside, so you can enjoy fresh air and beautiful nature.
3. 介绍项目第二个特点（活动内容）：You can cook local food and learn useful life skills like building a fire or setting up a tent.
4. 补充推荐意义：These experiences will help you understand Chinese rural life well.
5. 结尾表达期待：I believe you will love it!
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I strongly recommend the Forest Camp for your summer study programme.
It is located in the countryside where you can enjoy fresh air and beautiful nature. You will have the chance to cook local food and learn useful life skills like building a fire or setting up a tent. These experiences will not only be fun but also help you understand Chinese rural life.
I believe you will love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
邮件写作、话题推荐、一般现在时
【点评】
本题考查英语书面表达中的推荐类邮件写作，要求学生结合给定项目信息整合内容，清晰阐述推荐理由，既考查基础语言运用能力，又考查信息处理能力，是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
首先明确题目要求：需从History Camp和Forest Camp中选一个项目，给好友Peter写一封80词左右的推荐邮件，包含至少两点项目信息，邮件首尾和第一句已给出。解题思路：1. 确定推荐项目（二选一即可，两个项目均有明确特点）；2. 结合插图信息，提取项目的两个核心特点作为推荐理由；3. 按邮件结构组织内容：承接已给开头明确推荐，正文阐述两点理由，结尾表达期待，使用一般现在时，避免真实信息，控制字数。
【解析】
1. 承接已给开头，明确推荐项目：I strongly recommend the Forest Camp for your summer study programme.
2. 介绍项目第一个特点（地点与环境）：It is in the countryside, so you can enjoy fresh air and beautiful nature.
3. 介绍项目第二个特点（活动内容）：You can cook local food and learn useful life skills like building a fire or setting up a tent.
4. 补充推荐意义：These experiences will help you understand Chinese rural life well.
5. 结尾表达期待：I believe you will love it!
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm excited to know that you are coming to China soon. I strongly recommend the Forest Camp for your summer study programme.
It is located in the countryside where you can enjoy fresh air and beautiful nature. You will have the chance to cook local food and learn useful life skills like building a fire or setting up a tent. These experiences will not only be fun but also help you understand Chinese rural life.
I believe you will love it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
邮件写作、话题推荐、一般现在时
【点评】
本题考查英语书面表达中的推荐类邮件写作，要求学生结合给定项目信息整合内容，清晰阐述推荐理由，既考查基础语言运用能力，又考查信息处理能力，是初中英语常见写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.4
