② 典例赏析
近年来,我们身边发生了各种灾害。假如你正在参加英语写作大赛,请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文,介绍在不同的灾害中保护自己的方法,同时提出预防措施。

注意:词数80—100。



审题指导:
1.体裁:说明文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:以第一人称、第二人称为主
写作框架:

优秀范文:

How to Protect Ourselves from Disasters
In recent years, different kinds of disasters have hit our world. As middle school students, we must master right ways to protect ourselves from danger.
When floods come, we should get to high ground right away. During earthquakes, hide under a strong desk to keep safe if you are inside. If a fire breaks out, use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose and leave quickly.
To prevent future disasters, we should plant more trees, protect wild animals and live a green life.
Let's take action to build a safer world for everyone.

【分析】
本题要求写一篇英语说明文，介绍不同灾害中的自救方法及预防措施，词数80—100。解题思路：1. 确定体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一、第二人称；2. 结构分为三部分：开头引入灾害背景并点明掌握自救方法的重要性，中间分述洪水、地震、火灾的具体自救措施，结尾提出预防措施并发出倡议；3. 注意控制词数，语言准确流畅。
【解析】
按照写作框架，先开头引入灾害话题，说明中学生需掌握自救方法；接着分述洪水时到高地、地震时躲在坚固书桌下、火灾时用湿毛巾捂口鼻撤离等自救措施；最后提出植树、保护野生动物等预防措施并发出倡议，确保符合词数要求。
【答案】
How to Protect Ourselves from Disasters
In recent years, different kinds of disasters have hit our world. As middle school students, we must master right ways to protect ourselves from danger.
When floods come, we should get to high ground right away. During earthquakes, hide under a strong desk to keep safe if you are inside. If a fire breaks out, use a wet towel to cover your mouth and nose and leave quickly.
To prevent future disasters, we should plant more trees, protect wild animals and live a green life.
Let's take action to build a safer world for everyone.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作、灾害话题英语表达
【点评】
范文结构清晰，层次分明，涵盖了不同灾害的自救方法及预防措施，符合题目对体裁、时态、词数的要求，语言简洁流畅，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6