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最近，部分地区遭遇了暴风雪。请以“The Snowstorm”为题，根据提示并结合所学内容，写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:①What was the result of the snowstorm? ②What did our country do with the snowstorm? ③What should we do as students?
注意:词数80—100。
104 英语 八年级 上册 译林版
最近，部分地区遭遇了暴风雪。请以“The Snowstorm”为题，根据提示并结合所学内容，写一篇英语短文。
内容提示:①What was the result of the snowstorm? ②What did our country do with the snowstorm? ③What should we do as students?
注意:词数80—100。
who needed them.
As students, we can also do something to help. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or help people in need.
We should learn how to stay safe during natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a big challenge, but we got through it with everyone's help.
104 英语 八年级 上册 译林版
答案
The Snowstorm
Recently, a heavy snowstorm hit some parts of our country. Many trees fell down and blocked the roads. The strong wind also broke the power lines. The heavy snow stopped the traffic, so many people had to stay at home.
Our country acted quickly to help. The government sent rescue workers to clear the roads and fix the power lines. They also gave food and warm clothes to the peoplewho needed them.As students, we can also do something to help. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or help people in need. We should learn how to stay safe during natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a big challenge, but we got through it with everyone's help.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为“The Snowstorm”，需紧扣三个提示点展开：第一步，描述暴风雪造成的后果，可从环境、交通、生活影响入手；第二步，说明国家的应对措施，突出政府的救援行动；第三步，阐述学生能做的事，结合自身身份给出具体行动。写作时注意时态以一般过去时为主，控制词数在80-100左右，确保覆盖所有要点，语言通顺。
【解析】按照“总-分”结构写作：1. 开篇点出暴风雪袭击部分地区，接着写具体后果（树木倒伏堵路、电力线损坏、交通停滞，人们居家）；2. 说明国家的应对：政府派救援人员清路修电力，发放物资；3. 写学生的行动：帮忙扫雪、帮助有需要的人，学习防灾安全知识；最后总结暴风雪是挑战但大家共渡难关。注意用词准确，符合八年级英语水平，词数达标。
【答案】The Snowstorm
Recently, a heavy snowstorm hit some parts of our country. Many trees fell down and blocked the roads. The strong wind also broke the power lines. The heavy snow stopped the traffic, so many people had to stay at home.
Our country acted quickly to help. The government sent rescue workers to clear the roads and fix the power lines. They also gave food and warm clothes to the people who needed them.
As students, we can also do something to help. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or help people in need. We should learn how to stay safe during natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a big challenge, but we got through it with everyone's help.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、自然话题英语表达
【点评】本题结合时事热点，要求学生围绕提示完成英语短文，结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，语言符合八年级学生水平，能考查学生的综合英语运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照“总-分”结构写作：1. 开篇点出暴风雪袭击部分地区，接着写具体后果（树木倒伏堵路、电力线损坏、交通停滞，人们居家）；2. 说明国家的应对：政府派救援人员清路修电力，发放物资；3. 写学生的行动：帮忙扫雪、帮助有需要的人，学习防灾安全知识；最后总结暴风雪是挑战但大家共渡难关。注意用词准确，符合八年级英语水平，词数达标。
【答案】The Snowstorm
Recently, a heavy snowstorm hit some parts of our country. Many trees fell down and blocked the roads. The strong wind also broke the power lines. The heavy snow stopped the traffic, so many people had to stay at home.
Our country acted quickly to help. The government sent rescue workers to clear the roads and fix the power lines. They also gave food and warm clothes to the people who needed them.
As students, we can also do something to help. We can help clear the snow in our neighbourhood or help people in need. We should learn how to stay safe during natural disasters.
The snowstorm was a big challenge, but we got through it with everyone's help.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、自然话题英语表达
【点评】本题结合时事热点，要求学生围绕提示完成英语短文，结构清晰，覆盖所有要点，语言符合八年级学生水平，能考查学生的综合英语运用能力。
【难度系数】0.6
